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Before the Dawn Takes Me

Mortal_Will
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I died at the bottom of the stairs. But for three weeks, I couldn’t even leave my bed. I have no memory of moving. Only the fall, the pain, and then nothing. Now I’m a spirit, trapped in my home for twenty-four hours, watching my family—my wife, my son, my daughter. Their quiet faces, hidden glances, and hurried whispers make one thing terrifyingly clear: I didn’t end up here by accident. I was moved. I was betrayed. Or so I believe. As the hours pass, I’ll dig for the truth behind my death, expecting anger, guilt, and abandonment. But the secret I uncover will rewrite everything I thought I knew. This is my last day. Before the dawn takes me.
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Chapter 1 - Chapter 1: I Didn’t Fall Here

The last thing I felt was a blinding, splitting pain in my skull—sharp enough to shatter my vision like broken glass—followed by the hard, unforgiving impact of the floor as my body collapsed.

I had been trying to get out of bed.

For three weeks, I had been trapped there, my legs too weak to support me, a throbbing ache in my head that no pill could silence. I wasn't supposed to stand. I wasn't supposed to move. But that night, I'd needed light. I'd needed to reach the window at the top of the stairs, the one that faced the dawn.

Then I fell.

I remembered the crash. I remembered the darkness closing in.

After that… nothing.

Until I woke up.

If you could call it waking up.

I was floating.

High enough to look down, and there I was—Will Hale—my own body, motionless at the bottom of the staircase. My cheek was pressed against the wooden floor. A faint, dark bruise marked my temple. My hands lay limp, fingers slightly curled, as if I'd been reaching for something right up until the end.

I shouldn't have been here.

I couldn't walk. I couldn't stand. I hadn't left my bedroom in twenty-one days. The doctors had warned me clearly: any sudden movement could kill me. My wife Clara locked the stair gate every night. My son had moved my chair inches from my bed so I would never have to struggle.

I was a man who couldn't leave his bed.

And yet, I was dead at the bottom of the stairs.

A cold, weightless dread coiled where my heart used to be.

I hadn't fallen here by accident.

Someone moved me.

Someone killed me.

Somewhere in the house, a floorboard creaked.

I didn't know it then, but I had exactly twenty-four hours to uncover the truth.

Twenty-four hours to learn why I'd been dragged from my bed and left to die alone in the dark.

Today was the day I died.

And today, I would find out who murdered me.