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Whisper of a banyan tree

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Chapter 1 - part one....

PART ONE: THE SHADOW BEGINS

Chapter 1: The Village That Breathed Silence

The village of Madhupur lay quietly beside a winding river, wrapped in mist every morning and prayers every evening. Mud houses stood shoulder to shoulder, their walls cracked by time but warmed by stories. Women drew alpana at dawn, men left for the fields with tired smiles, and temple bells rang softly as if afraid to disturb the air.

In this village lived Ananya Mukherjee.

She was sixteen, slender, with long black hair usually tied in a loose braid. Her eyes held something unusual—an old sadness that did not belong to her age. Once, those eyes had laughed freely. Once, her world had felt safe.

That was before her mother died.

Since then, the house she lived in no longer felt like home. The walls listened. The corners watched. And silence had learned how to breathe.

Chapter 2: After Mother Left

Ananya's mother, Sharmila, had been the soul of the house. She sang while cooking, prayed while cleaning, and touched Ananya's forehead every night before sleep.

When Sharmila fell ill, it happened suddenly. Fever. Weakness. Then quiet. Too quiet.

Within weeks of her death, Ananya's father remarried.

Her stepmother, Madhabi, arrived with sharp eyes and an even sharper voice. She wore clean white saris and a smile that never reached her eyes. From the first day, Ananya felt it—something cold, something wrong.

Madhabi never hit her. She never shouted loudly.

Instead, she whispered. She stared. She watched.

And sometimes, Ananya felt Madhabi was not alone—even when she was.

Chapter 3: The First Signs

It started with sleep.

Ananya began waking up at exactly 3:12 a.m. every night. Her heart would race, her body drenched in sweat. Shadows on the wall seemed to move, stretching unnaturally.

Then came the sickness.

No appetite. Sudden dizziness. A constant heaviness in her chest.

Village doctors found nothing. Ayurvedic medicines failed. Even priests who came to bless the house left looking confused.

One night, Ananya heard her name being whispered near her ear.

She turned. No one was there.

From the next room, she heard Madhabi softly chanting something she did not recognize.

Chapter 4: What the Village Whispered

Villages speak—but never loudly.

Women at the pond exchanged glances. Elders avoided Ananya's eyes. Someone murmured the word "tantra." Someone else said "abhichar."

Ananya overheard two old women say, "Jealousy is dangerous in a woman who knows dark paths."

Fear settled into her bones.

But the worst part was not fear—it was loneliness. Her father had become distant, tired, and silent. He did not see what was happening, or perhaps he was too afraid to see.

Ananya began to feel as if she was disappearing—slowly, piece by piece.

Chapter 5: The Night of the Banyan Tree

One evening, unable to breathe inside the house, Ananya ran.

She ran past fields, past the river, until she reached the ancient banyan tree at the edge of the village. People said spirits lived there. Ananya did not care anymore.

She collapsed at its roots and cried.

That was when she heard a calm voice.

"Child… darkness feeds on fear."

An old woman sat beneath the tree, her hair silver, her back straight, her eyes bright like fire hidden under ash.

She was known as Ma Thakurani.

Chapter 6: The First Lesson

Ma Thakurani did not ask questions. She did not perform rituals. She did not mention black magic.

She taught Ananya how to breathe.

"Inhale like you are calling yourself back," she said. "Exhale like you are releasing what is not yours."

She gave Ananya a simple mantra—not to fight darkness, but to remember herself.

"Light does not attack," Ma Thakurani said. "Light simply exists. And darkness disappears."

For the first time in months, Ananya slept peacefully that night.

Chapter 7: The Inner Battle

The path was not easy.

Some days Ananya felt stronger. Some days the darkness returned—heavier than before.

Madhabi's presence grew more disturbing. Her eyes burned with frustration. Objects broke. Lamps went out suddenly. The house felt restless.

But Ananya kept going.

She meditated at dawn. She prayed with awareness, not fear. She learned to forgive—not for Madhabi, but for herself.

Slowly, Ananya realized something powerful:

Whatever was harming her needed her weakness to survive.

And she was no longer weak.

Chapter 8: The Breaking Point

One stormy night, everything came to a head.

The air in the house turned thick. Ananya felt the familiar pressure—but this time, she did not panic.

She sat straight. She closed her eyes. She chanted.

Inside her, something rose—calm, steady, unshakable.

From the other room, Madhabi screamed.

By morning, the house felt empty. The heaviness was gone.

Ananya stepped outside and looked at the sky.

For the first time since her mother's death, she smiled.