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Star Wars: Veil of Violet

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He was never meant to be a Jedi. Born into Mandalorian steel and raised beneath the creed of warriors, Kael Vizsla was taken by the Jedi Order at eleven years old—too old, too defiant, and raised by a culture the Republic once called its enemy. Where others saw a liability, Master Mace Windu saw potential. What the Council saw… was a black sheep. Forged in Form VII, disciplined in restraint, and tempered by a heritage he refused to abandon, Kael grows into something the Order does not fully understand—a Jedi who wears beskar into battle, a commander who believes clones are men, not assets, and a General willing to stand where others hesitate. When the Clone Wars ignite across the galaxy, Kael is placed in command of one of the Republic’s largest corps and sent to the battlefronts few dare request—worlds burning, factories churning, campaigns written in attrition and ash. He wins. But every victory costs him brothers. And in war, loyalty becomes a weapon. As the Jedi transform into soldiers and the Republic hardens into something colder, Kael walks the narrowing line between discipline and attachment, between creed and code, between light and fury. Heir to Mandalore. General of the Grand Army. Brother to clones who will one day raise rifles against him. And friend to a Chosen One destined to fall. When the Order is betrayed and the galaxy fractures overnight, Kael Vizsla will face the cruelest truth of war: The men he fought beside will hunt him. And the friend he trusted most may be the one who finishes what the clones began. This is not the story of a perfect Jedi. This is the story of a warrior who tried to balance two worldsand was broken between them. Important warnings: I had a sudden moment of inspiration and decided to write it down. I am not doing this to become an author, and I might stop anytime. I don't own any of the pre-existing characters or the cover, but I do claim ownership over the characters I created. PS: This is a Star Wars fiction
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Chapter 1 - Chapter 1: Before the Storm

The Jedi Archives were never silent.

They only pretended to be.

Light filtered down from the high, vaulted ceiling in pale columns, catching dust motes that drifted lazily between towering stacks of holobooks. The shelves rose in concentric tiers, curving along the vast circular chamber like the ribs of some ancient creature. Every surface seemed to glow faintly blue from the millions of datapads and crystalline memory spines housed within them. The hum of information was constant — quiet, steady, alive.

Younglings padded across the polished floor in small clusters, guided by a patient instructor who spoke in a low, measured voice about star systems and ancient treaties. A pair of Padawans argued softly over a galactic map projection, one gesturing too emphatically before catching himself beneath the stern gaze of a passing Master. Somewhere deeper in the stacks, a holobook chimed as it was re-shelved improperly, and a droid rolled past to correct it.

It was a place of order.

Of memory.

Of certainty.

Kael Vizsla looked like none of those things.

He sat at a long, curved study table near the outer ring of the chamber, one elbow propped against its smooth surface, his temple resting against his knuckles as he read. The posture suggested mild impatience, or perhaps restrained boredom — as though knowledge, while necessary, was not his preferred battlefield.

He was tall even seated, long-limbed and broad-shouldered beneath traditional Jedi robes that fit him properly but never quite seemed natural. At six-foot-one, he carried himself with the quiet density of someone accustomed to armor, not cloth. His hair, blond with the faintest hint of gold, parted slightly off-center and fell just enough to brush his brow when he leaned forward. It softened the harder edges of his face — sharp jaw, straight nose — but did little to disguise the intensity of his gaze.

His eyes were blue. Clear. Cold when focused.

At his waist hung two lightsabers.

One was elegant — refined, balanced, clearly custom-forged. The hilt was crafted with deliberate precision, polished but unadorned, its lines clean and efficient. A weapon built for someone who understood violence intimately.

The other did not belong.

The Darksaber's hilt rested in stark contrast against the muted tan of his robes. Angular. Rectangular. Constructed of Beskar. Its handguard jutted forward subtly, the metal darker and heavier than any standard Jedi construction. It was not merely another saber.

It was history.

Several younglings had already stolen glances at it before being ushered along by their instructor.

Kael's attention remained fixed on the holobook before him. Lines of Mandalorian script scrolled across the surface, interwoven with Republic translations. He was reading about Tarre Vizsla — the first Mandalorian inducted into the Jedi Order. About the forging of the blade. About the fracture that followed.

His thumb tapped idly against the table's edge as he read.

Almost bored.

Almost.

Footsteps approached — measured, deliberate.

Madame Jocasta Nu moved through the Archives with the quiet authority of someone who had memorized every shelf and every soul within it. Her thin frame seemed almost fragile beneath her traditional robes, but her posture was straight, unwavering. Silver hair was pulled tightly into a bun at the back of her head, and the prominent scar along the right side of her face caught the light briefly as she passed between columns of data.

Her blue eyes flicked once to the twin hilts at Kael's waist.

She stopped beside him.

"The Mandalorian Civil Conflicts are catalogued in Section Aurek-Seven," she said evenly, her voice thin but precise. "If you are looking for perspective rather than legend."

Kael did not look up immediately.

"I'm not interested in perspective," he replied quietly.

Jocasta regarded him for a moment longer, then inclined her head ever so slightly before continuing on.

The Archives resumed their quiet rhythm.

Kael shifted in his seat, resting his chin now against the back of his hand as his eyes scanned the final lines of the entry. The glow of the holobook reflected faintly against his irises, casting them momentarily in a colder shade.

Around him, life within the Temple moved unhurriedly. Younglings laughed softly at some mispronounced planet name. A Master corrected a student's interpretation of an ancient star chart. The air smelled faintly of polished stone and old circuitry.

It was peaceful.

Structured.

Unchanged.

Kael closed the holobook with a slow gesture, though he did not rise. His gaze lifted instead — upward toward the towering shelves, toward the vaulted ceiling, toward nothing in particular.

Kael let the holobook's glow fade to nothing beneath his palm.

For a moment, he remained seated, elbow still braced against the table, eyes fixed on the now-dark surface as though the text might reappear out of stubbornness alone. Around him, the Archives continued their slow, measured pulse — younglings whispering over a projection of the Core Worlds, a data spindle humming faintly as it slotted into place somewhere along the upper tiers, the distant shuffle of robes against polished stone.

He exhaled through his nose.

"There are only so many times," he murmured under his breath, voice low enough to belong only to himself, "a man can read about how his people fought the Jedi… and lost."

His fingers brushed unconsciously against the angular weight at his hip. The Darksaber's hilt was cool even through the fabric of his robes — solid, unyielding. It did not belong among blue-lit holobooks and curated memory. It belonged in smoke and iron and open sky.

He leaned back in his chair, tilting it just slightly on its rear supports before letting it settle again with a soft click. His blond hair shifted where it parted, a few strands falling loose across his brow. He did not bother brushing them away.

"Mandalorians and Jedi," he muttered again, quieter now. "Two histories written by the victors."

A thin voice, precise and unamused, drifted from behind him.

"The Mandalorian Crusades and their subsequent conflicts with the Order are catalogued in Section Dorn-Five, Subdivision Aurek," Jocasta Nu said, as if correcting an error in a ledger rather than responding to a private observation. "If you are dissatisfied with repetition, you may pursue a broader context."

Kael did not turn immediately. He allowed a small, almost reluctant smile to touch one corner of his mouth — not mockery, not warmth, but acknowledgment.

"I'm familiar with Dorn-Five," he replied, finally shifting in his seat to glance back at her.

She stood as she always did: hands folded within the sleeves of her robes, spine straight despite her frail frame, silver hair drawn tight at the back of her head. The scar along the right side of her face caught the blue ambient light of the stacks, giving her features a severity that required no effort. Her gaze was steady — sharp despite her years.

Kael inclined his head politely.

"But thank you, Madame Nu," he added. "I think I've exhausted the subject for today."

Jocasta studied him for a moment longer, her eyes drifting — not accidentally — to the twin hilts at his waist. The refined curve of his own lightsaber rested opposite the rigid, beskar geometry of the Darksaber. Cloth and iron. Temple and battlefield.

"The Archives," she said carefully, "are not intended to affirm personal narratives. They preserve truth."

Kael rose to his full height, the movement unhurried but unmistakably solid. Standing, he seemed to draw more attention simply by existing — taller than most in the chamber, broader through the shoulders, robes falling straight but never disguising the sense that armor would sit more naturally upon him.

"Truth," he said, almost thoughtfully, "depends on who survives to write it."

A flicker — not quite approval, not quite reprimand — crossed Jocasta's expression.

"The Jedi survive," she replied.

"For now."

The words were quiet. Not threatening. Merely observational.

Around them, the Archives carried on undisturbed. A youngling dropped a data-slate and quickly scrambled to retrieve it under a patient Master's eye. A holographic star map shimmered and dissolved as its user dismissed it. Knowledge endured. Memory endured.

Kael adjusted the fall of his robes at his shoulders, a habitual motion that betrayed the absence of weight there — as though he expected pauldrons that were no longer present. His fingers lingered once more near the Darksaber's hilt before he let his hand fall.

"I appreciate the guidance," he said evenly. "But I'll spare Dorn-Five for another day."

Jocasta inclined her head a fraction. "See that you do not mistake repetition for stagnation, Knight Vizsla. Some lessons require revisiting."

He gave a small nod in return — respectful, if not fully conceding — and stepped away from the table.

As he moved between the towering stacks, blue light sliding across the angles of his face, he appeared less like a scholar departing a study and more like a warrior navigating unfamiliar terrain. Younglings glanced up as he passed; one lingered a moment too long on the dark, unfamiliar hilt at his waist before being gently steered along.

Kael did not notice.

Or perhaps he did, and chose not to.

Behind him, the holobooks resumed their faint glow, preserving histories of war and reconciliation alike. The Jedi Archives stood unchanged, ancient and certain.

But as Kael reached the edge of the circular chamber and the distant corridor beyond, there was the faintest tremor beneath the stone — subtle enough to be mistaken for imagination.

He paused, just briefly.

Then continued walking.

The corridor beyond the Archives was wide enough to feel like a chamber in its own right.

Kael stepped into it without hurry, the sound of his boots muted against the polished stone. The transition from the cool blue glow of the holobooks to the warmer, natural light of the Temple's interior was subtle but immediate. Here, the ceilings rose impossibly high, ribbed with elegant arches that disappeared into shadow. Tall bronzium statues of ancient Jedi Masters lined the mezzanines, their metallic forms burnished by centuries of quiet observation. They stood with hands folded or sabers lowered, guardians not of flesh but of memory.

The Temple breathed around him.

Knights moved in measured pairs, deep in discussion. A Padawan trailed her Master with a datapad clutched tightly to her chest, lips moving silently as she rehearsed some lesson. The stained-glass panels along the meditative walkways caught the afternoon light, casting fractured colors across the floor — depictions of the Hyperspace Wars, ancient starships locked in silent battle among crystalline stars.

Kael walked through it all with the same deliberate calm he had carried in the Archives. His robes shifted lightly at his stride, revealing for the briefest moments the twin hilts resting at his waist. A few heads turned, more out of curiosity than concern. He was known. Not universally liked. But known.

He had just reached the base of one of the great statues — a stern-faced Master cast in bronzium, saber angled toward the floor — when the Temple changed.

It began not with a siren, but with a vibration.

A pulse ran through the stone beneath his boots, subtle yet undeniable, like the first tremor before distant thunder. Then, almost at once, a harmonic tone echoed through the corridors — deep, resonant, unmistakable.

Every personal communicator on every Jedi within the Temple activated simultaneously.

Holoprojectors along the walls shimmered to life, Council seals flickering into existence in pale blue light. The air itself seemed to tighten.

Mace Windu's voice carried through the vast hallway, steady and commanding.

"All available Jedi are to report to the primary hangar bay immediately."

No elaboration.

No explanation.

The message repeated once — identical in tone, identical in brevity — before the holoprojections dissolved into nothing.

For half a heartbeat, the corridor stood suspended in silence.

Then the Temple erupted into motion.

Knights straightened instinctively. Padawans exchanged startled glances. A pair of Masters who had been debating near the stained-glass windows broke off mid-sentence and began moving with purposeful strides toward the central staircases. Temple Guards appeared almost instantly at junction points, their gold-and-white armor catching the light as they directed the growing flow of bodies with silent efficiency.

"What happened?" someone whispered as they passed.

"Has something occurred in the Senate?" another voice murmured urgently.

"Why the hangar bay?" came a more anxious question. "Why not the Council chamber?"

Speculation moved faster than feet. Words layered atop one another in hushed fragments, none certain, all edged with unease.

Kael did not rush.

He stood for a moment longer where he was, eyes lifting briefly toward the vaulted ceiling as if weighing the gravity behind Windu's voice. There had been no strain in it. No panic. Only inevitability.

"What could this be about?" he muttered quietly to himself.

Not fear.

Curiosity.

He began walking again, angling toward the main thoroughfare that led down toward the primary hangar bay. Around him, Jedi accelerated their pace, robes sweeping across the floor in urgent arcs of motion. The rhythm of the Temple shifted from contemplative to kinetic, from measured calm to contained alarm.

Kael's stride remained even.

He moved against the current rather than with it — not obstructing, not careless, simply unhurried. The Temple Guards parted subtly as he approached, recognizing him, their helmeted gazes flicking momentarily to the Darksaber at his hip before returning to their task.

Voices followed him like wind through tall grass.

"Could it be the Separatists?"

"There was unrest in the Outer Rim sectors—"

"No, this feels… different."

As the corridor widened into one of the great meditative walkways, Kael slowed.

Floor-to-ceiling transparisteel windows stretched along the outer wall of the Temple, offering a view that few within the galaxy ever truly appreciated. Coruscant unfurled below in endless layers — towers upon towers upon towers, a vertical ocean of durasteel and glass. Speeders traced luminous lines through the airways, weaving between platforms and landing spires in orchestrated chaos. Far beneath the Temple's elevation, larger vessels rose from lower levels, ascending toward the brighter sky above before vanishing into higher traffic lanes.

The sun burned clear overhead, reflecting off the uppermost towers in blinding flashes of light. The planet looked invincible from here. Ordered. Eternal.

Kael stepped closer to the window, momentarily removed from the press of moving robes around him. Reflected faintly in the glass, his own image hovered against the cityscape — tall, robed, twin hilts dark against pale fabric.

Behind him, footsteps thundered past as another cluster of Knights hurried toward the hangar bay.

He watched a Republic cruiser break through the upper atmosphere, engines flaring white against the blue sky.

Something in the air felt altered.

Not broken.

Not yet.

Just… shifting.

He drew a slow breath, the faintest crease forming between his brows.

Then, without another word, Kael turned from the window and resumed his measured walk toward the hangar bay — while the Temple rushed to meet whatever waited for them there.