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Chapter 1 - Author's Statement

Previously, I mentioned that I would be revisiting earlier chapters to make them feel more alive and natural. As I began that process, I realized it requires more substantial revisions than I initially anticipated.

I also agree with the feedback pointing out that the political elements didn't quite fit the tone and structure of the Elden Ring world. It feels more appropriate for Marika to serve as the sole decision-maker in the early stages of the story.

In addition, I'll be making some adjustments to the harem structure and refining character appearances where needed.

Going forward, I will also be changing my upload schedule. Instead of posting multiple chapters the day when I choose to write, I'll aim for a chapter every few days at minimum. Trying to rush releases previously ended up burning me out and took some of the enjoyment out of writing. I want to slow things down so I can focus on quality and keep the story enjoyable to write and read.

The synopsis and backstory will also be updated as part of these revisions.

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