Chapter 1 - The town of whispers
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Scene 1 - Arrival in Blackwood town
Evening . A car drives into a Misty old town . The streets are quite , lined with old houses and leafless trees . A chill hangs in the air .
Kim Su jin (Voiceover) :
"They say every town has secrets.... But this one feels like it's hiding something darker. Something watching".
Kim Su jin 17 years old stares out the window . she has curious eyes and kind smile , though her face is pale from the long journey . Her family moves into a big , creaky house on blackwood Street.
Mother :
"Su jin , it's not that bad, right? Just a little old.... it has correct"
Su jin forces a smile but feels goosebumps
As she drags her luggage inside , the front door slams shut on its own .
Scene 2 - The first whisper
That night Su jin unpacks her luggage in her room . The wallpaper is faded , the mirror old and cracked . she hums to herself when suddenly--
Whisper (faint , distorted)
"Su jin..."
She freezes.
Su jin :
"...Hello?"
The room is silent. she shakes her head, convincing herself it was nothing , but the mirror flickers faintly.
Scene 3 - School and New friends
Next morning , Su jin starts at her new school , The campus is lively , but she feels out of place .
Lisa (Her bestfriend from childhood) runs to her with a bright smile .
Lisa :
"Su jin ! Finally , you are here . This place is weird , but with me you will survive".
Su jin laughs in relief. Soon , she is introduced to :
• Suho - her childhood friend ,
Protective , warm-hearted .
• Minho - quite , soft spoken but with
Strangely sad eyes .
• Mia - stylish , confident , sharp tongued
But caring .
And then - Eunwoo . He sits at the edge of the classroom , looking mysterious , sketching something in a notebook .
When Su jin's eyes met his , a strange shiver runs throw her .
Scene 4 - Warning from Eunwoo
After class , Su jin accidentally bumps into Eunwoo in the hallway .
Su jin :
"Oh! Sorry , I didn't --"
Eunwoo looks at her intensely.
Eunwoo (Low , Serious) :
"You should not stay out after dark , Not here"
Su jin :
"....What?"
Eunwoo (Softly almost to himself) :
"The shadows remember names"
He walks away leaving her unsettled.
Scene 5 - The Whisper Returns
Night . Su jin in her room , scrolling through her phone . The air suddenly turns icy cold. Her lamp flickers.
From the cracked mirror --
Whisper (Louder this time) :
"Su...ji..n.."
Su jin's reflection smiles back at her , even though she isn't smiling .
She gasps , stumbling back , when suddenly the reflection shatters into black smoke.
Su jin (Screaming) :
"Mumma ! Papa!!"
Her parents Rush in , but the mirror looks completely normal again .
Her mother frowns.
Mother :
"Su jin.... May be you're just tired".
But Su jin knows what she saw.
Ending Scene - The Shadow by the Bed
Later that night , Su jin lies awake , hugging her blanket tightly . she tries to calm herself , but the room feels colder.
The camera pans slowly to the corner of the room - where a tall , dark shadow figure stands silently watching her .
Su jin senses it , her eyes widen--
Su jin (Whispering) :
".... Who's there?"
The shadow doesn't move.
Chapter 1 - Ends (Stay tuned to know what will happen ?)
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