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Chapter 85 - Bonus Chapter: The Wall

He was born too big.

That's what the midwife said, anyway. Too big, too loud, too much. His mother nearly died bringing him into the world, and for the first three years of his life, she looked at him with something between love and fear.

Dorn learned early that size was a problem.

Chairs broke when he sat in them. Doors were too narrow. Other children's games ended in tears when he accidentally knocked someone over. By the time he was ten, he'd learned to move carefully, speak softly, and expect people to flinch when he approached.

"Don't take it personally," his father said. "People fear what they don't understand."

Dorn understood. That didn't make it hurt less.

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At fifteen, he found his purpose.

A raiding party attacked his village—not bandits, but something worse. Corrupted creatures from the blighted lands, twisted and hungry. The villagers fled. The guards fell. Dorn's family home was burning with his mother and sister inside.

He didn't think. He just moved.

A broken cart became a shield. A fallen beam became a weapon. He stood in front of that burning house for what felt like hours, blocking the creatures, knocking them back, refusing to let them pass.

When the creatures finally fled—driven off by hunters who'd heard the commotion—Dorn was still standing. Battered. Burned. Alive.

His mother and sister emerged from the cellar, unharmed.

"You saved us," his mother whispered, touching his face with trembling hands.

Dorn looked at his massive fists, at the broken creatures scattered around him, at the house that still smoldered behind him.

"I'm useful," he said.

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He became a mercenary after that.

Not for glory or gold—for purpose. He'd found what he was good at, and he'd keep doing it until it killed him. Simple as that.

The other mercenaries mocked him at first. Too big. Too slow. Too simple. But after the first battle, when Dorn stood between them and a charging enemy and didn't move an inch, the mockery stopped.

"Never met anyone who could take a hit like you," the company captain said. "You're like a wall."

Dorn liked that. Walls protected things.

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He met Vance in a tavern brawl.

Not on the same side—opposite sides. Vance was flashy, fast, all fire and fury. Dorn was steady, patient, immovable. They fought for three minutes before realizing they were both after the same man: a slaver who'd wronged them both.

They stopped fighting. Teamed up. Caught the slaver.

"That was fun," Vance said afterward, nursing a black eye. "We should do it again sometime."

Dorn considered. "You fight good."

"You block good. We're a team."

Dorn nodded. He liked teams. Teams meant he wasn't alone.

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Party 147 was different from any team he'd joined.

Roy didn't flinch when Dorn approached. Didn't step back, didn't brace, didn't show the subtle fear Dorn had learned to recognize in everyone. He just looked up with those strange eyes and said, "You must be Dorn. I'm Roy."

"Roy."

"I grow things. You hit things. We'll get along."

Dorn smiled—a rare thing, genuine. "We hit things together."

Roy smiled back. "Together."

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Over the years, Dorn became the party's heart.

Not the leader—that was always Roy, in his quiet way. Not the blade—that was Vance, flashy and bright. Not the shadow—that was Mira, watching from darkness. Not the healer—that was Elara, gentle and strong.

But the heart. The steady presence that never wavered, never doubted, never failed.

When Vance raged, Dorn stood beside him. When Mira disappeared into darkness, Dorn waited for her return. When Elara doubted herself, Dorn's quiet certainty held her steady. When Roy carried the weight of the world, Dorn carried Roy.

"You're the reason we're still alive," Roy told him once, years into their journey.

Dorn considered this. "No. You're the reason. I'm just the wall."

"Walls protect. Walls endure. Walls make everything else possible."

Dorn nodded slowly. That was enough.

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The battle in the northern passes was his last.

He knew it going in—felt it in his bones, the way old warriors do. A thousand enemies against a handful of defenders. Impossible odds. Certain death.

He stood at the bridge's narrowest point, shield raised, and waited.

They came in waves. He held.

Again. He held.

Again. He held.

Behind him, refugees streamed to safety. Around him, allies fell. Before him, enemies piled so high they formed a ramp.

When Vance and Roy finally reached him, his shield was shattered, his axe was blunted, and his body was held together by sheer stubbornness.

"Took you long enough," he said.

They laughed. They always laughed.

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He didn't die in that battle.

But something in him shifted. He'd seen the end, felt it close, and survived. After that, everything was extra time. Bonus rounds. Gifts.

He used that time well.

The mountain carving took fifteen years. A memorial to everyone who'd fallen in the wars—names carved into living stone, faces emerging from the rock, stories told in texture and light. It was the most beautiful thing he'd ever made.

When it was finished, he sat beneath it and simply stopped.

The way he'd always wanted.

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They found him there, peaceful, a slight smile on his face. In his hands, he clutched a small wooden carving—a party of five figures, crudely rendered but unmistakable. Roy. Vance. Mira. Elara. And himself, standing at the center, a wall around them all.

"He was happy," Elara said, crying but smiling.

Roy nodded. "He was exactly where he wanted to be."

Mira touched the carving gently. "The wall held."

Vance's voice was rough. "The wall always held."

They buried him beneath the mountain he'd carved, with the memorial he'd built watching over him forever.

The wall had finally rested.

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Bonus Chapter End

Author's Note: This chapter explores Dorn's journey from a lonely, feared giant to the beloved heart of Party 147. It emphasizes his quiet strength, his protective nature, and the simple dignity of a life spent standing between danger and those he loved.

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