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Chapter 3 - How to kill your editor

The doorbell didn't just ring. 

It vibrated through the marrow of my bones, a high-frequency alarm alerting the predator that the shepherd was at the gate. 

I looked at the bathroom door. 

The plastic curtain was a thin, translucent barrier between a mundane Tuesday and a life sentence. Behind it, the man who had tried to steal my wallet was now stealing my sanity. He lay there, a heavy silence in a porcelain tub, waiting to be discovered. 

I looked at my hands. 

They were red from the bleach, the skin puckered and raw. I looked like a man who had spent the morning trying to scrub away his own existence. 

I breathed. One. Two. Three. 

Control is a narrative. You tell yourself a story about who you are until you believe the lie. I am Ryo Kanzaki. I am a writer. I am a citizen. I am innocent until the moment the curtain is pulled back.

I moved to the door. 

Every step felt like walking through waist-deep water. The air in the hallway was thick with the scent of chemicals—sharp, medicinal, and incriminating. 

"Ryo," Nox whispered. He was a flicker in the mirror's reflection, a distortion in the glass. "The ink is still wet on the page. Don't let him smudge it."

I ignored the demon. I reached for the handle. 

The metal was cold. 

I opened the door. 

Daniel Hartmann was taller than he looked from the fourth-floor window. He possessed a physical gravity that seemed to pull the light toward him. His face was a map of exhaustion and precision—deep lines around eyes that had seen too many crime scenes to believe in coincidences. 

He didn't smile. People like Hartmann don't use smiles as social currency; they use them as traps. 

"Mr. Kanzaki?" His voice was deep, carrying a slight European lilt that suggested he had spent his formative years elsewhere before bringing his brand of justice to Tokyo. 

"Yes," I said. My voice was steady. A bit too steady, perhaps. "Can I help you, Officer?"

"Detective," he corrected softly. He didn't show a badge. He didn't need to. The authority radiated from his charcoal coat like heat from a radiator. "Detective Hartmann. I apologize for the intrusion. I'm doing a canvass of the building."

He didn't wait for an invitation. He stepped forward, just enough to force me to step back. It was a subtle invasion of space, a way to see if I would resist. 

I didn't. I moved like a well-mannered ghost. 

"A canvass?" I asked, leaning against the wall of the narrow entryway. "Did something happen?"

Hartmann's eyes weren't on me. They were roaming. They scanned the floor, the ceiling, the shadows behind the coat rack. They lingered on the door to the living room. 

"A report of a disturbance," he said. "Last night. Around 2:00 AM. A neighbor heard a thud. Then nothing."

"I didn't hear anything," I said. "I was working. I tend to lose track of time when I'm writing."

"Ah, yes. The writer." Hartmann finally looked at me. His gaze was like a physical weight. "I've read your work, Mr. Kanzaki. *The Glass Labyrinth*. It was quite... insightful. You have a very specific way of describing the moment a person decides to become a monster."

"It's just fiction, Detective."

"Is it?" He took another step into the apartment. He stopped, his nostrils flaring slightly. "That's a lot of bleach, Mr. Kanzaki."

The world tilted. 

The silence in the bathroom seemed to grow louder, the phantom thud of the body echoing in my ears. 

"I'm a bit of a germaphobe," I said, the lie sliding off my tongue with practiced ease. "And I spilled a bottle of red wine last night. Cheap Merlot. Stains like a tragedy."

Hartmann nodded slowly. He walked toward the living room, his hands clasped behind his back. He looked like a man touring a museum, or a man looking for a crack in a foundation. 

He stopped at my desk. 

The laptop was still open. The cursor was still blinking. 

My heart did a slow, painful roll in my chest. 

"Still working on the masterpiece?" he asked, gesturing to the screen. 

"Always."

He leaned over, squinting at the text. I held my breath. If he read it—if he saw the descriptions of the impact, the sound of the glass paperweight, the way the light died in the intruder's eyes—the game would be over. The prose was too accurate. It wasn't an imagination; it was a confession.

Hartmann straightened up before his eyes reached the second paragraph. 

"I won't spoil the surprise," he said. He turned, his gaze catching the crystal paperweight. It sat on the edge of the desk, wiped clean, gleaming innocently in the morning sun. 

He reached for it. 

"Detective," I said, my voice sharp. 

He paused, his fingers inches from the glass. 

"It's very fragile," I said, softening my tone. "A gift from my late father. I'd rather you didn't."

Another lie. My father was alive and living in Kyoto, and he hated my books. 

Hartmann withdrew his hand. "Of course. My apologies."

He began to walk back toward the door. I felt a surge of relief so strong it made my knees weak. He was leaving. The shepherd hadn't smelled the wolf. 

But at the door to the bathroom, he stopped. 

He looked at the handle. Then he looked at me. 

"Mr. Kanzaki, would you mind if I used your facilities? The coffee at the station is more battery acid than bean, and it's been a long morning."

The trap snapped shut. 

I looked at the bathroom door. Behind it was the tub. The plastic. The man. 

I looked at Nox. The demon was sitting on the kitchen counter, swinging his legs, a jagged grin etched into his smoky face. He was enjoying this. He wanted to see if I would crumble or if I would rewrite the scene. 

"The plumbing is acting up," I said. "Building management is supposed to send someone up today. It's... not in a state for guests."

Hartmann didn't move. He stood there, his hand hovering near the bathroom door. The air between us became a frozen sea. 

"I'm sure I've seen worse," he said. His voice had lost its conversational warmth. It was flat. Professional. Lethal. 

"I insist," I said. "There's a café downstairs. Excellent espresso. My treat."

Hartmann looked at the bathroom door one last time. He seemed to be listening. Waiting for the silence to speak. 

Then, he turned back to me. 

"You seem tense, Mr. Kanzaki. Even for a writer with a deadline."

"I haven't slept, Detective. Sleep deprivation tends to make people... twitchy."

"I suppose it does." Hartmann adjusted his coat. "Well, I've taken up enough of your time. If you hear anything—anything at all—about a man in a grease-stained jacket wandering the halls, give me a call."

He handed me a card. 

"A grease-stained jacket?" I asked, my pulse hammering in my throat. 

"A petty thief. He's been hitting this neighborhood for weeks. Desperate type. The kind of man who doesn't know when to stop."

Hartmann opened the front door. He stepped into the hallway, then paused, looking back over his shoulder. 

"One more thing, Ryo."

I hated the way he used my name. It sounded like an indictment. 

"Yes?"

"In your book... the one about the labyrinth. The killer is caught because he keeps a trophy. Not because he's proud, but because he's afraid he'll forget the feeling of being alive. Don't be like your characters, Ryo. Real life doesn't have an editor to fix your mistakes."

He walked away. 

I closed the door and leaned my forehead against the wood. I was shaking. Not from fear, but from the sheer, electric intensity of the encounter. 

I felt alive. 

More alive than I had ever felt in those years of stagnation. 

"He knows," Nox said, appearing beside me. "He doesn't have the proof, but he has the scent. He's a bloodhound, Ryo. And you just gave him a trail."

"I didn't give him anything," I whispered. 

"You gave him a story. And men like Hartmann live to find the holes in the plot."

I walked back to the bathroom. I opened the door. 

The tub was empty. 

I blinked. My heart stopped. I lunged forward, ripping the shower curtain aside. 

Nothing. 

The tub was white. Clean. The scent of bleach was the only thing that remained. 

"Where is he?" I screamed, turning to Nox. 

The demon laughed. It was a sound of pure, unadulterated malice. 

"Did you really think the physical world was that simple, Ryo? You didn't just kill a man. You fed the Muse. The sacrifice has been accepted. The ink has been distilled."

I looked at the desk. 

My laptop screen was scrolling. New lines were appearing, the keys clicking as if moved by invisible fingers. 

*Chapter Three: The Scent of Erasure.*

I ran to the desk. 

The prose was beautiful. It described the detective. It described the smell of the bleach. It described the exact frequency of my fear. 

But it didn't stop there. 

*The detective walked down the stairs,* the screen read. *He reached his car and sat in the dark. He looked at the notebook on his dashboard. In it, he had written a name. Not Ryo Kanzaki. But the name of the woman who would be next.*

I felt a cold dread settle in my gut. 

"Mika," I whispered. 

"The story demands a climax, Ryo," Nox said, his form becoming solid, his eyes glowing like embers. "And a climax requires a victim the audience actually cares about."

The screen continued to type. 

*She will call him at 8:00 PM. She will tell him she's coming over to celebrate the success of the first chapter. She won't realize that she isn't the editor anymore.*

*She is the ink.*

I looked at the paperweight. 

The crystal was no longer clear. It was clouded, a dark, swirling red at its center. 

I realized then that I wasn't writing the book. 

The book was writing me. 

The doorbell didn't ring this time. 

My phone did. 

The caller ID flashed a name that felt like a death sentence. 

*Mika Aoyama.*

I didn't answer. I couldn't. 

But as I watched the screen, the cursor moved on its own. 

*He picked up the phone,* the story wrote. *And he lied to the only person who loved him.*

My hand moved. 

I didn't command it. It was as if a wire had been pulled in my brain. 

I swiped 'Accept'. 

"Ryo?" Mika's voice was full of joy. "I'm in the taxi. I'll be there in ten minutes. I have champagne!"

"I'll be waiting," I said. 

My voice wasn't my own. It was the voice of the man in the book. 

I hung up and looked at the kitchen knife. 

The blank page was gone. 

The masterpiece was beginning. 

And the price of admission was her life. 

Nox smiled. 

"Write the next line, Ryo. Before she gets here."

I sat down at the keyboard. 

And I began to type the instructions for my own damnation. 

*The knife felt heavy,* I wrote. *But not as heavy as the truth.*

I looked at the door. 

I had ten minutes to decide if I was a writer or a monster. 

But as the words flowed, I realized there was no longer a difference. 

The book must be finished. 

No matter who dies in the final chapter.

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