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Chapter 4 - THE GOD'S EYE,IRON WILL.

Subtitle: The Heir Who Forged a World Beyond Swords.

Chapter 4: The Storm Descends

The clouds above Ironfall City split like a steel curtain, jagged bolts of golden lightning stabbing the moving spires and rails. The air itself hummed with divine energy, a resonance that made metal shiver and machines whine.

Alvanley's golden eyes flared. His God's Eyes didn't just see—they calculated. Every surge of power, every weak vector, every chance to exploit or survive.

Divine interference. Probability of survival against unknown entity: 12%. Probability of collateral damage: 87%.

He adjusted the pulse launcher strapped to his back and turned to the workshop. Engineers and apprentices stared at him like he was a monster or a savior. Some whispered. Some quietly prayed. Some ran.

Kaelith Vorn appeared behind him, boots clanging. Her silver hair caught the flickering light. "Alvanley, this isn't just a mage. That… that energy… it's a god."

Alvanley's lips curved slightly. "Then it's exactly what I need to test my alloy-tier tech."

⚙️ City-Wide Alert

Within seconds, the city's internal monitoring systems flagged the golden lightning as critical hazard. Alarms blared across every sector, and automated defense turrets powered up. Mechanical legs supporting moving districts whirred, recalculating paths to avoid lightning strikes.

Rask Calder's voice cracked over the loudspeakers. "Kid, the whole city is watching now! If this fails, it's not just you—half the workshop goes with you!"

Alvanley ignored him. His fingers danced over the rail-blade, fine-tuning energy output, adjusting for mana interference, optimizing every aspect with surgical precision.

Mana interference: +34%. Kinetic energy alignment: 92%. Pulse trajectory optimized.

🔥 First Real Confrontation With a God

A shadow descended from the clouds, vast and impossible. It wasn't human. Not machine. Not even entirely physical. It shimmered, bending reality like molten glass. Its voice boomed directly into his mind:

"Child of the Valdyrion Clan. You dare defy the natural order?"

Alvanley's pulse quickened—not with fear, but with exhilaration. "I don't defy nature. I upgrade it."

The god's presence struck the city with raw force. Buildings shuddered, rails cracked, machines exploded mid-operation. Engineers scrambled. Drones collapsed. Fire erupted across the districts.

[SYSTEM ALERT: ENVIRONMENTAL HAZARD – SEVERE] [Recommended action: Evacuation or Immediate Countermeasure]

Alvanley didn't run. He activated a secondary device — a layered kinetic shield coupled with a pulse-reflector array he had just improvised. The shield hummed, diverting the first strike of divine lightning harmlessly into the reinforced rails of the city.

"Interesting," the god said. Its voice deepened, almost amused. "You deflect my power… and yet you are mortal."

Alvanley adjusted the shield's angle in real-time. His mind raced faster than any human could, guided by the System.

[Survival probability: 47% → 63%]

💥 Collateral Chaos

Despite his preparations, the strike damaged neighboring sectors. Steam geysers erupted, sending clouds of scalding vapor into the streets. Civilians screamed as mechanical platforms staggered.

Kaelith grabbed his arm. "Enough playing! If this god realizes we're in a tech city, the entire population will die!"

Alvanley's gaze swept the chaos, calculating evacuation routes and structural weaknesses. "No," he said firmly, "if they survive, it will be because of me. If not…" His voice trailed off, but his intent was clear.

He deployed mini pulse drones — compact kinetic devices that moved like swarms of insects, each targeting structural weak points in the god's energy field. The drones struck in perfect synchronization, slicing through mana barriers and dispersing minor lightning strikes.

The god recoiled slightly, an audible distortion of sound vibrating through the city.

[SYSTEM NOTIFICATION: TARGET RESPONSE DETECTED – HIGH ADAPTATION] [Upgrade recommendation: ARC-CORE TIER AVAILABLE]

⚔️ Personal Battle in the Heart of the City

Alvanley ran toward the epicenter of the strike, navigating molten metal streets. Sparks flew from broken rails, and automated repair arms flailed wildly. He landed atop a moving platform, rolling to absorb the shock of the god's next attack.

From above, golden lightning rained like arrows of judgment. He activated overclock mode in the pulse launcher, increasing output and precision.

Energy output: 92%

Trajectory prediction: 98% accurate

He fired at the god, each pulse colliding with divine energy in a spectacular display of light and heat. Buildings near the blast radius crumbled, but the god staggered, not fallen.

"You survive… much like your father once did," the god intoned.

Alvanley paused. His father… Mathvana? Dead? His mind raced. No time for grief.

[SYSTEM ALERT: EMOTIONAL OVERLOAD DETECTED – ADVISORY: UTILIZE FOR STRATEGIC ADVANTAGE]

He smiled slightly. Anger, fear, betrayal — all processed, all converted into efficiency.

⚡ Arrival of Reinforcements

As Alvanley battled, smoke cleared, revealing the Concord enforcers converging on his location. Mages, elite swordsmen, and divine relic-bearers swarmed the streets.

Rask shouted from the edge of the chaos: "Kid, too many! You can't hold them all!"

Alvanley's golden eyes glowed brighter than ever. "I don't need to hold them all. I just need the right angle."

He activated a layered pulse field, redirecting energy strikes and knocking back waves of mages. The System calculated over 50 variables simultaneously, each pulse precise, lethal, yet controlled.

[Tier Advancement: ARC-CORE – RECOMMENDED ACTION: ENGAGE DIVINE ENTITY DIRECTLY]

💀 Emotional Depth & Reflection

Amidst the chaos, Alvanley's mind flashed back to his family.

Wain's betrayal.

Boli's envy.

His mother Alishia… memories of warmth now replaced with cold determination.

"I survived their hatred," he whispered, "I will survive their gods."

Kaelith, watching, whispered in awe, "He's… not just a prodigy. He's a phenomenon."

Alvanley's lips curved, not in arrogance, but certainty. "I have to be. If I falter, everything dies."

Lightning cracked the sky again, brighter than before.

Alvanley looked up. The god hovered, fully visible now — massive, impossibly radiant, every feature pulsing with ancient power.

Its voice rumbled, shaking the entire city:

"So, mortal… you have defied the impossible. Very well. Let us see if you can survive the Wrath of a True God."

The System beeped urgently:

[SURVIVAL PROBABILITY: 7%]

[RECOMMENDED ACTION: MAXIMUM ESCALATION]

Alvanley's eyes flared golden. He grinned.

"Then I'll make it impossible… for you."

And the city of Ironfall erupted in golden light as the god struck downward, energy colliding with technology in a storm that would decide the fate of everyone below.

🔥 END OF CHAPTER 4

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