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Chapter 9 - Chapter 9: Overcorrection

The pressure was still there. Sharper than before. Alert.

Noah crouched a short distance away, close enough to monitor, far enough not to trigger another spike. His eyes flicked between Evan and the wrecked hallway, mind already racing ahead.

Marcus stood at the corner, body angled protectively toward the unconscious student, watching for movement that did not belong.

Luke hovered uselessly for half a second, then swore and ran down the hall.

"I'm clearing civilians," he shouted back. "Before someone asks why the building looks like it lost a fight with gravity."

"Good," Evan thought dimly.

Delegation.

He forced himself to breathe.

In. Out.

The hum softened slightly, as if acknowledging the effort.

Noah broke the silence. "You exceeded tolerance."

Evan laughed weakly. "That's one way to put it."

"No," Noah said. "Literally. Whatever system is monitoring this logged your last action as unauthorized escalation."

Evan wiped dried blood from his upper lip. "It was hurting someone."

"That is irrelevant to bureaucracies," Noah replied flatly. "Human or otherwise."

Marcus glanced back. "Meaning?"

"Meaning," Noah said, "we should expect a response that is disproportionate, inflexible, and badly timed."

Evan closed his eyes.

Overcorrection.

Luke reappeared, breathless. "Hallway clear. Security is on the way, but I redirected them toward a gas leak."

Marcus raised an eyebrow. "You can do that?"

Luke shrugged. "Confidence is ninety percent of authority."

Footsteps echoed from the stairwell.

Not running. Walking.

Evan's eyes snapped open.

The pressure surged.

"Noah," Evan said hoarsely. "They're not late."

Noah stiffened. "How many?"

"Too many," Evan replied.

The lights flickered.

Once. Twice.

Then they went out.

Emergency lights snapped on instantly, bathing the corridor in dim red.

The air changed. Heavy. Compressed.

Marcus felt it too. He shifted his stance instinctively. "This feels different."

"It is," Noah said quietly. "This isn't a local correction."

A voice spoke.

Not from Evan's head.

Not from everywhere.

From the hallway.

"You have been warned."

The sound carried without echo, calm and impersonal, like an announcement read from a script.

Three figures stepped into view.

They looked human.

That was the worst part.

They wore plain, dark clothing. No insignia. No weapons. No visible technology. Their faces were unremarkable, the kind that slid out of memory the moment you stopped looking directly at them.

But the pressure screamed around them.

Not reacting.

Deferring.

Luke whispered, "Please tell me those are not more observers."

"No," Noah said. "They're worse."

The centre figure stopped ten feet away.

"Deviation Evan Hale," the figure said. "You have exceeded permitted variance twice within a single cycle."

Evan pushed himself to his feet slowly, ignoring the way his vision swam.

"You let people get hurt," he said.

The figure tilted its head slightly. "Correction. We allowed baseline outcome."

Marcus stepped forward a half step. The pressure around Evan flared.

"No," Evan snapped. "Stay back."

Marcus froze.

The figure's gaze flicked to Marcus briefly, then back to Evan. "Unauthorized variables complicate containment."

Containment.

That word landed harder than any threat so far.

"What are you?" Evan demanded.

"We are auditors," the figure replied. "Your world operates within acceptable instability margins. You exceed them."

Luke scoffed nervously. "So this is like… cosmic paperwork."

The figure did not look at him.

"Evan Hale," it continued. "You will cease active interference immediately."

Evan laughed. It came out harsh and broken. "Or what?"

The figure raised its hand.

Not threatening.

Declarative.

"Or the system will enforce compliance."

The pressure spiked violently.

Evan cried out, dropping to one knee as pain tore through him, deeper than before. Not sharp. Crushing. Like something heavy pressing directly on his spine.

"Evan!" Marcus shouted.

The other two auditors moved instantly.

Not toward Evan.

Toward Marcus and Noah.

The air around them thickened.

Marcus felt his muscles lock, every joint resisting movement like he was wading through concrete.

Noah staggered, clutching his head. "They're isolating variables."

Luke swore and charged forward.

He got two steps before an invisible force knocked him flat, slamming him into the wall hard enough to crack plaster.

"Luke!" Evan gasped.

The central figure lowered its hand.

The pressure eased slightly.

"This is a corrective demonstration," it said. "Observe."

Evan's heart pounded wildly. "Stop."

"You are not authorized to issue commands," the figure replied.

The corridor distorted.

The unconscious student on the floor stirred.

Evan's breath hitched.

"No," he whispered. "Don't."

The auditors did not touch the student.

They did something worse.

They stepped back.

The pressure shifted away from Evan.

And into the student.

The boy gasped, body arching as if seized by invisible hands. The air around him warped violently.

Evan screamed. "He didn't do anything!"

"Correct," the figure said. "He is an acceptable loss."

Something inside Evan snapped.

Not power.

Resolve.

"No," Evan growled. "This ends now."

He pushed sideways.

At the system itself.

The pressure screamed in response, slamming into him harder than ever before. Blood poured freely from his nose now, streaking down his chin.

Still, he pushed.

The air between the student and the auditors fractured, a sharp, visible distortion slicing through the corridor like a fault line.

The student collapsed, unconscious but breathing.

The auditors staggered back a single step.

Only one.

But it was enough.

Silence fell.

The central figure stared at Evan.

Not angry.

Reassessing.

"Noncompliance confirmed," it said.

The pressure intensified again.

Then stopped.

Abruptly.

Evan collapsed forward, barely catching himself on his hands.

The auditors stepped back together.

"Escalation deferred," the figure said. "Deviation status elevated."

"What does that mean?" Evan rasped.

"It means," the figure replied, "you are no longer eligible for warnings."

They turned.

And walked away.

Not fading.

Not vanishing.

They walked down the corridor and out of sight, alarms still blaring above them.

The pressure did not follow them.

It stayed.

Evan lay there, gasping, vision swimming.

Marcus shook free first, rushing to Evan's side but stopping short of touching him. "Evan. Talk to me."

"I'm here," Evan whispered. "I think."

Luke groaned from the wall. "Next time… let me punch one."

Noah staggered upright, pale and shaken. "They overcorrected," he said. "Classic enforcement behaviour."

Evan laughed weakly. "You sound almost relieved."

"I am," Noah replied grimly. "Overcorrections mean flaws."

Sirens grew louder.

Real ones this time.

"We need to leave, now," Marcus said.

They moved quickly, supporting Luke, keeping distance from Evan when needed. By the time security reached the science block, the hallway was empty except for shattered tiles and confused responders.

Across campus, Emily sat on her bed, phone clutched tightly in her hands.

She had not moved since Evan's call ended.

The pressure brushed against her skin faintly, like static before a storm.

She did not scream. She did not freeze. She stood.

Emily crossed her room and opened her laptop, fingers flying across the keyboard with purpose.

Evan had sent the observer's words.

She reread them now.

Alignment.

Deviation.

Monitoring.

"You don't get to decide everything," she whispered to the empty room.

The pressure stirred.

Emily ignored it.

She opened a new document and began mapping patterns. Times. Locations. Evan's actions. The system's responses.

If the world treated Evan like a variable…

Then she would learn the rules it thought it followed.

And break them.

Because for the first time, Emily understood something Evan had not yet fully grasped.

If the system was willing to hurt others to control him…

Then waiting was no longer an option.

And next time the world pushed back,

It would not be Evan standing alone.

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