Thanks to the people helping fix the issues. I fully know there were some or alot lol. I was just looking for some feedback on the story when I posted this and never thought it was gonna get so popular. I know there are a lot of issues with it, but hell, I've never done this before. Some hate coming in my messages, which is wild, and some in the comments. I'm just gonna take it down and work on it. This whole thing was just a passion project I enjoyed working and playing around on. Wasn't supposed to be something that gets taken that seriously. It's a free story on a free website. Wild that some people are being like this and honestly I just dont need to deal with it.
I might work to put it on Kindle Unlimited in a couple of months after I put it through a couple of rounds of edits and try to put out the best book I can. I know this is gonna disappoint some people but I'm sorry. Didn't realize I was gonna get dragged through the grinder. Planning on adding a bunch of images and maps in the story as well. They'll be AI-generated, and I'm sure that'll make some people upset too lol. Getting off this for a while. Didn't know free stories were this serious.
Either way. Appreciate the support, promise more will be worked on.