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Chapter 2 - Chapter 2 — Deviation

Yan Que did not return to the outer disciple quarters.

After leaving the Evaluation Hall, he followed the stone path that curved away from the central grounds, toward the lower slopes of the Grey Hollow Sect. The air grew quieter with every step. Fewer disciples passed by. The buildings became simpler, older, and less maintained.

This was where those without value were redirected.

The sect did not exile its failures outright. It simply placed them where their presence would not interfere with cultivation. Storehouses, maintenance halls, outer farms, and abandoned courtyards formed a silent network that sustained the sect without ever being acknowledged.

Yan Que was assigned to one such place.

A narrow compound stood at the edge of the outer boundary, half-hidden behind overgrown stone walls. Its wooden gate creaked as he pushed it open. Inside were empty rooms, broken training dummies, and a single storage hall filled with unused tools.

This would be his world from now on.

The Grey Hollow Sect had countless such places scattered along its outer boundary. They were not prisons, nor were they punishments. They existed for efficiency. Disciples who failed cultivation were redirected into these quiet zones where their labor supported the sect without interfering with its pursuit of strength.

Yan Que had passed several of them on his way here. Low stone buildings where spirit herbs were sorted by hand. Empty courtyards where broken artifacts were dismantled and cataloged. Fields tended by those whose names were no longer spoken during assemblies.

None of them were guarded. There was no need.

Those sent here were not expected to leave. Not because they were restrained, but because the world beyond these walls no longer acknowledged them as cultivators.

Yan Que understood that this reassignment was not meant to humiliate him. It was meant to make him disappear without resistance.

He set down the identification token that marked him as an outer disciple. The engraving on its surface had already dimmed, its authority stripped away by the evaluation record.

Only then did Yan Que sit.

He leaned against the cold stone wall and closed his eyes, not in despair, but in thought. Panic would serve no purpose. Regret even less. The path he had followed for three years had ended exactly where it was always meant to.

The only difference was that something remained.

A faint sensation lingered beneath his navel. It was not warmth, nor pain, but pressure, like a sealed door that had not been fully closed.

Yan Que focused on it.

At first, nothing happened.

Then his awareness sank inward, brushing against something unfamiliar. It did not respond like qi. It did not flow, condense, or circulate. It simply existed, immovable and observant.

A presence.

His breath slowed.

Without warning, information surfaced in his mind, not as words spoken aloud, but as undeniable certainty.

The evaluation had not ended.

The world had already judged him unqualified, but the record had not been finalized. The fractured seal was not a mistake. It was an unresolved state.

Yan Que understood this instinctively.

As long as the record remained incomplete, the system would continue to observe.

Not to assist him.

To document him.

The pressure beneath his navel tightened slightly, as if reacting to his awareness. Yan Que felt a brief resistance, followed by clarity.

His current condition was not survival.

It was probation.

If he continued to live within the expectations assigned to him, the record would stabilize. The fracture would close. The judgment would become permanent.

Twelve percent.

That number was not a threat. It was a calculation.

Yan Que opened his eyes.

The empty courtyard before him was quiet. Wind moved through broken weeds. Somewhere in the distance, a bell rang, signaling the end of an afternoon training session.

Disciples were progressing.

He was not.

The difference between them was no longer talent. It was permission.

Yan Que stood and walked into the storage hall. Dust covered most of the shelves. Rusted tools lined the walls. At the far end lay several stone tablets used long ago for manual training, abandoned when cultivation techniques became dominant.

He picked one up.

The tablet was heavy, unrefined, and required physical strength rather than qi to use. Yan Que tightened his grip and lifted it repeatedly, slowly at first, then with controlled rhythm.

His muscles protested. His breathing deepened. Sweat formed along his back.

Nothing about this was cultivation.

And yet, as his body adapted, the pressure beneath his navel shifted almost imperceptibly.

Not approval.

Recognition.

Yan Que stopped.

So deviation did not require rebellion.

It required intent.

He understood then that the system was not measuring power. It was measuring choice. Any action taken outside the standard cultivation framework would be recorded. Repeated deviation would widen the fracture.

But there would be consequences.

Yan Que lowered the stone tablet and sat down again, his thoughts sharp and orderly.

If he followed the sect's arrangement, he would fade quietly. The fracture would close. The record would finalize.

If he deviated recklessly, the system would record instability. Failure would not be erased. It would be preserved.

Either way, he would not be forgiven.

Yan Que looked at his hands.

There was no hidden manual waiting for him. No secret elder observing from the shadows. No sudden surge of power to reverse his fate.

Only observation.

That was enough.

He stood once more and resumed training, this time deliberately pushing his limits beyond comfort. The pressure beneath his navel responded again, faint but undeniable.

The fracture had widened by a margin too small to quantify.

Yan Que exhaled slowly.

If the heavens insisted on recording him—

Then he would ensure they recorded something worth acknowledging.

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