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The Unbroken Promise (Ek Adhura Waada Jo Mukammal Hua)

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Kabir aur Aryan ki dosti ko har koi misaal deta tha. Ek hi cycle, ek hi tiffin, aur ek hi sapna—saath budhe hone ka. Par unki 16th birthday se thik ek hafta pehle, kismat ne ek aisa mod liya ki ek dost ne apni zindagi chhupali aur dusre ne apni muskurahat kho di. ​Ek baarish wali shaam, Kabir ne dekha ki Aryan ke ghar ke bahar packing chal rahi hai. Use laga ye sirf ek shehar chhodne ki baat hai, lekin jab usne kichad mein gira hua khoon se sana rumaal dekha, toh use ehsas hua ki sachai uski soch se kahin zyada bhayanak hai. Aryan bina kuch kahe, bina peeche mude chala gaya. Woh dosti jo 16 saal tak pahaad jaisi mazboot thi, ek pal mein raakh ho gayi. ​10 saal baad... Kabir ab ek shant aur akela insaan hai, jo aaj bhi us purani cycle ko sambhaal kar rakhta hai. Uske din aur raat sirf Aryan ko dhoondhne mein nikal jaate hain. Har naye shehar, har naye chehre mein use Aryan ki jhalak dikhti hai. ​Tabhi uske darwaze par ek chitthi aati hai. Ek aisi chitthi jo use wapas us purane mod par le jati hai jahan Aryan ne uska hath chhoda tha. Par kya yeh chitthi sirf ek naya dhoka hai ya uski dosti ko mukammal karne ki aakhri umeed? ​Kya 10 saal ki talaash khatam hogi? Kya wo do dost, jo bachpan mein ek-dusre ki jaan the, dobara mil payenge? Aur kya Aryan ka woh raaz unki dosti ko jodne ki bajaye hamesha ke liye tod dega? Ek aisi kahani jo aapko rulayegi bhi, aur Chapter 10 tak aapko yeh sochne par majboor kar degi ki 'Kya sacchi dosti waqt aur mushkilon se bhi zyada mazboot hoti hai?'"
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Chapter 1 - Chapter 1: Woh Purani Cycle aur Khoon ke Nishan

Shehar ki bheed-bhad se door, ek chota sa kasba tha jahan waqt jaise thama hua tha. Wahan ki har gali Kabir aur Aryan ki dosti ki gawah thi. Dono 16 saal ke ho chuke the, lekin unki shararatein aaj bhi 6 saal ke bachon jaisi thi.

​"Aryan! Agar tu ne aaj meri Maggi churayi, toh dekh lena!" Kabir ne cycle chalaate hue piche baithe Aryan ko dhamkaya.

​Aryan zor se hasa aur Kabir ke kandhe par hath rakh kar bola, "Bhai, teri Maggi par toh mera pehla haq hai. Waise bhi, humne waada kiya tha na? Jo tera hai, wo mera hai!"

​Dono ek purane pipal ke ped ke niche ruke. Yeh unka 'Secret Adda' tha. Wahan unhone mitti mein ek chota sa lohe ka box dabaya tha, jisme unki purani cycle ki spare chabi aur ek kagaz par likha unka waada tha—"Maut bhi humein juda nahi karegi."

​Uss din achanak mausam badal gaya. Kaali ghatayein chha gayi aur zor se baarish hone lagi. Kabir bahut khush tha, par usne dekha ki Aryan ka chehra safed pad gaya tha. Woh thar-thar kaanp raha tha.

​"Aryan? Kya hua bhai? Tu theek toh hai?" Kabir ne fikar se pucha.

​Aryan ne ek jhooti muskurahat di, "Kuch nahi yaar, bas thodi thand lag rahi hai. Chal, ghar chalte hain."

​Jab Kabir ne Aryan ko uske ghar ke bahar chhoda, toh usne dekha ki Aryan ke ghar ke bahar ek bada sa truck khada tha aur saaman lada ja raha tha. Kabir ka dil baith gaya. "Aryan, ye sab kya hai? Tum log kahin ja rahe ho?"

​Aryan ne koi jawab nahi diya. Usne bas ek baar palat kar Kabir ko dekha. Uski aankhon mein wo dard tha jo Kabir ne pehle kabhi nahi dekha tha. Aryan ne apni jeb se ek safed rumaal nikala aur apne muh par rakha. Woh zor se khansa.

​Agle hi pal, Aryan ke pita ne use khinch kar gaadi ke andar baitha diya aur gaadi tezi se nikal gayi. Kabir us gaadi ke piche bhaga, "Aryan! Ruk ja! Tu kahan ja raha hai? Tune bataya nahi!"

​Par gaadi dundh mein gayab ho gayi. Kabir hanpata hua beech sadak par khada reh gaya. Baarish tez ho chuki thi. Tabhi uski nazar niche padi. Kichad mein wahi safed rumaal pada tha jo Aryan ne nikaala tha.

​Kabir ne kaanpte hathon se us rumaal ko uthaya. Baarish ke paani ke bawajood, us safed kapde par khoon ke laal dhabbe saaf dikh rahe the.

​Kabir wahi ghutno ke bal baith gaya. Usko samajh nahi aa raha tha ki uska sabse achha dost use chhod kar gaya hai, ya maut use khinch kar le gayi hai. Usne rumaal ko mutthi mein bhinch liya aur aasman ki taraf dekh kar chilla utha.

​16 saal ki dosti ka yeh mod unki zindagi ka sabse bada imtihan banne wala tha.

1.Woh Khoon Ka Raaz: Kya Aryan ko koi aisi bimari thi jo use andar hi andar khatam kar rahi thi, aur usne Kabir se ye baat 16 saal tak kyun chhupayi?

Raaton-Raat Farari: Aryan ka parivaar bina kisi ko bataye, apna chalta-firta ghar chhod kar raaton-raat kyun bhaag gaya? Kya wo kisi se darr rahe the?

Mitti Mein Daba Waada: Kya wo 'Secret Box' jo unhone pipal ke ped ke niche dabaya tha, ab bhi wahan hai? Ya phir Aryan jaate-jaate un yaadon ko bhi mita gaya?

Priya ka Connection? (Agar aap ise purani story se halka sa link karna chahein): Kya is bichhadne ke peeche kisi aise insaan ka hath tha jo nahi chahta tha ki ye dono dost kabhi saath rahein?