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Chapter 1 - Humble beginnings

Faelan noticed it before he heard it.

The ground beneath his boots gave a faint, uneven tremor—subtle enough that most travelers would have ignored it. But Niri didn't. The small taccarox slowed instantly, all four ears twitching as her head angled toward the open savannah.

Faelan followed her gaze.

At first, there was nothing—just the endless stretch of pale blue and yellow grass bending under the heat, broken occasionally by cracked soil and scattered thorn bushes. The sun pressed down hard, turning the horizon into a wavering blur. Even the trees looked misplaced here, like they had grown out of obligation rather than purpose.

Then the vibration returned. Stronger.

Niri backed half a step.

"Yeah… I feel it too," Faelan muttered.

The tremor turned into rhythm.

Not random.

Not natural.

Something was moving out there—fast.

Faelan shifted his stance, eyes narrowing as he scanned the far edge of the plain. The savannah had a way of hiding distance, folding it into heat and light until everything looked harmless. But harmless things didn't shake the ground like that.

A low sound rolled across the wind.

Not a roar yet. Not quite.

More like pressure building behind a breaking wall.

Niri's fur bristled.

Faelan didn't wait.

"Move."

They broke into a jog, angling toward the nearest cluster of thorn bushes. Instinct, not strategy.

The ground behind them answered.

A heavy surge of motion tore through the savannah.

Faelan glanced back—and immediately regretted it.

A wall of bodies was spilling over the horizon.

The tesnochs came in a blind, chaotic stampede, each one nearly two meters at the shoulder. Their elongated frames crashed through the grass like living battering rams, hooves striking the earth in thunderous rhythm. Coarse yellow fur streaked with grey rippled across their bodies as muscles flexed in panic-driven motion. Clawed hooves struck the ground like rolling boulders, thick curved horns jutted forward, catching the light in sharp flashes every time they lifted their heads.

But it wasn't their size that mattered.

It was their fear.

Because they weren't hunting.

They were running from something else.

Faelan pulled Niri closer without thinking.

"Don't look at them," he said, more to himself than her.

The herd spread wider as it closed the distance, carving the savannah into dust and noise. The air itself felt compressed, vibrating with their collective panic. The ground shook harder now, each impact sending jolts up Faelan's legs.

Then something moved through them.

Not with them.

Through them.

A shape cut across the stampede like a shadow tearing through cloth.

Faelan froze mid-step.

At first, he thought it was a trick of light. Heat distortion. Something his mind was inventing to explain the chaos.

Then it passed closer.

A predator.

Its body was low and built for speed, a long, rippling frame of black muscle and muted crimson streaks that shifted as it moved. Four slitted eyes tracked everything at once—two forward, two angled—locking onto motion from every direction. Tendrils extended from its shoulders, twitching like sensory organs tasting the air. Its claws struck the ground in precise, lethal rhythm, not wasted like the herd's panic.

It wasn't running.

It was choosing.

The tesnochs broke harder, scattering in widening arcs as it cut through their formation. One of them went down mid-stride—no roar, no struggle, just disappearance beneath a blur of motion and dust.

Faelan didn't breathe.

Niri pressed into his chest so hard her claws dug into his sleeve.

"Stay down," he whispered.

They dropped behind a low bush as the world turned into noise.

Dust swallowed everything.

Hooves thundered past.

Something screamed—not a tesnoch, not fully animal, not fully anything Faelan could place.

Then silence surged in behind the chaos.

The herd had passed.

The predator was gone.

And the savannah, for a brief moment, felt emptier than before.

Faelan stayed still long after the ground stopped shaking.

"…What the hell is this place," he said quietly.

Niri didn't answer, but she didn't move either.

When he finally rose, the world had already started pretending nothing happened again.

But Faelan knew better.

The savannah didn't reset.

It just waited.

They moved again.

Hours blurred under the burning sun. The landscape shifted slowly—grass thinning, soil turning redder, stone clusters appearing like broken teeth scattered across the earth. Faelan kept his eyes forward now, not trusting the horizon anymore.

Niri stayed close the entire time.

By the time the light began to dim, exhaustion had settled into his bones like weight.

Then he saw it.

A thin line of smoke rising in the distance.

Small. Almost fragile against the sky.

Faelan slowed.

"…People," he muttered.

For the first time since morning, he felt something other than survival pressure tighten his chest.

He adjusted his grip on Niri and started walking again.

Even as the sun burned overhead, the savannah no longer felt entirely empty.

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