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Chapter 10 - Chapter 10 ~ The Debt that Bleeds

The undercity never truly slept.

It just changed its rhythm—slower, quieter, more predatory.

I'd spent the last two nights moving between shadows, avoiding the main streets where wanted posters of my face were now plastered like wallpaper. The duke's death had rippled outward fast. Guards were doubled at gates. Adventurers whispered about "the Blood Thief" who could turn a man's own veins against him. The crown had doubled the bounty to twenty thousand gold.

Dead only.

I didn't care about the gold.

I cared about the eyes watching me.

Crimson Dominion was proving useful.

I could sense blood now—warm pulses in the veins of passersby, the faint copper scent of old wounds. It made the city feel like one giant living organism, and I was the parasite moving through its arteries.

I was heading back to Raven's Edge to settle the debt with Garrick once and for all.

Ten silver plus interest.

A small price to cut the last loose thread tying me to anyone.

But when I turned the corner into the back alley behind the shop, I smelled it before I saw it.

Blood.

Fresh.

A lot.

The back door was hanging off one hinge.

Splinters everywhere.

A body lay face-down in the mud—some thug in cheap leather armor, throat torn open.

Not Garrick's work.

Garrick didn't fight like that.

I drew my sword and stepped inside.

The storage room was trashed.

Barrels overturned.

Shelves collapsed.

Blood smeared across the floor in long streaks, like someone had been dragged.

Voices drifted from the front shop.

Low.

Angry.

"…old man, you're out of time. Broker's dead. Debts don't die with him. Pay up or we burn the place."

I moved silently through the shadows, Blade Saint Candidate guiding my steps—perfect weight distribution, no creak of floorboards.

I reached the doorway to the main shop and peered around the frame.

Four men.

Mercenaries—scarred, well-armed, wearing mismatched gear that screamed "hired muscle."

One held a flaming torch.

Another had Garrick pinned against the counter by the throat.

Garrick's face was bruised, one eye swelling shut, but he wasn't begging.

Just glaring.

And then—kneeling on the floor, hands bound behind her back with rough rope—was Elara.

Her short black hair was matted with sweat.

Lip split.

But her eyes were clear, furious.

She hadn't run.

She'd come here.

For me, probably.

One of the mercenaries laughed—harsh, grating.

"Look at the little noble brat. Thought she could play hero. Now she's just another loose end."

Elara spat blood on the floor.

"I'm not noble anymore," she said quietly. "And you're all dead men."

The one holding the torch sneered.

"Big words for a girl who can't even hold a knife without shaking."

He raised the torch toward the shelves of oil and leather.

I stepped out.

Sword in hand.

Cloak dripping alley water.

All four heads snapped toward me.

The one choking Garrick grinned.

"Well, well. The Devourer himself. Right on schedule."

I tilted my head.

"You know me."

"Whole undercity knows you now, boy. Twenty thousand gold buys a lot of mouths."

He shoved Garrick harder into the counter.

Garrick grunted.

"Ren," he rasped. "Run. They're—"

The torch-bearer cut him off.

"Shut it, old man. You sold us his location. Said he'd come back for his debt. Said he was soft on debts."

Garrick's good eye met mine.

"I didn't sell you," he said through gritted teeth. "They beat it out of me. Broke three ribs. I still didn't talk."

The mercenary laughed.

"Liar. We heard the message you sent. Black feather. Cute."

I looked at Elara.

She met my gaze.

"I found him like this," she said. "Came looking for you. Saw them dragging him in. Tried to help."

She shrugged—small, helpless.

"Didn't work out."

The leader stepped forward—big man, scarred jaw, sword already drawn.

"You're worth more alive," he said. "But the bounty says dead is fine too. So let's make this quick."

He lunged.

I didn't move.

Crimson Dominion activated.

The blood from the dead thug outside rose—dark, thick, obedient.

It coiled up through the broken door like smoke, then lashed out.

Wrapped around the leader's ankle.

Yanked.

He went down hard—face-first into the floorboards.

The others shouted.

I moved.

Blade Saint Candidate turned the sword into an extension of my will.

First swing—across the torch-bearer's wrist.

Torch fell.

Hand followed.

He screamed.

Second swing—throat of the one holding Garrick.

Blood sprayed in an arc.

I shaped it mid-air.

Turned it into needles.

Fired them at the last two.

One dropped with a needle through the eye.

The other staggered, clutching his neck.

I walked forward.

Slow.

Deliberate.

He backed up until he hit the wall.

"Please—" he started.

I placed my palm on his chest.

Devoured.

[Enemy defeated: Debt Enforcer (Level 9)]

[Talent Devourer – Devour Window Available]

[Options: Shadow Pursuit (B+), Debt Binding (A), Mercenary's Instinct (B)]

I took Debt Binding.

[Talent Acquired: Debt Binding (A) → (S) due to Crimson Dominion synergy]

[Active: Bind a target to a debt of your choosing. Violation causes escalating pain / blood loss. Can be transferred to others.]

The man's eyes widened as the talent ripped free.

He collapsed.

Dead.

Silence fell.

Only breathing remained—Garrick's ragged, Elara's shaky.

I cut Elara's ropes with one flick of the blade.

She rubbed her wrists.

Looked up at me.

"You came back," she said.

"Had a debt to settle."

Garrick pushed himself up, wincing.

"Kid… you didn't have to—"

I looked at him.

"You didn't sell me."

He met my gaze.

"Told you. I don't rat on people who pay on time."

I reached into my pouch.

Pulled out the remaining silver—plus extra gold from Broker's chest.

Dropped it on the counter.

"Debt's paid. With interest."

Garrick stared at the coins.

Then at the bodies.

Then at me.

"You're not the same kid who walked in here a week ago."

"No," I said. "I'm not."

Elara stood slowly.

Looked around the ruined shop.

Then at me.

"I'm coming with you."

I raised an eyebrow.

"You can't fight. You'll slow me down."

"I know things," she said. "Noble houses. Hidden passages. Who owes who. Who's hunting you. I'm useless with a sword now, but I'm not useless."

She touched the faded brand on her arm.

"You gave me this. Freedom. I owe you everything."

I looked at Garrick.

He shrugged—painfully.

"She's stubborn. And she helped me when those bastards had me down. Take her. Consider it part of the interest."

I exhaled.

Looked at Elara.

"You'll die if you stay with me."

She smiled—small, fierce.

"I was already dead. You just gave me a second chance."

I sheathed my sword.

"Fine. But if you slow me down, I leave you behind."

"Deal."

Garrick coughed—wet, painful.

"Get out of here before more come. I'll clean this up. Tell them the Devourer did it. They'll believe that."

I nodded once.

Turned to leave.

Elara followed—steps light, uncertain, but determined.

Outside, the night air was cold.

The city lights flickered in the distance.

I felt her presence behind me—small, fragile, but alive.

For the first time since the truck—

I wasn't completely alone.

And that scared me more than any bounty.

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