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Chapter 1 - The System I Wanted to Quit

Chapter 1 — The System I Wanted to Quit

The city never slept.

It only learned how to breathe quietly.

Neon signs buzzed above wet streets. Rainwater ran along broken pavement, carrying oil, dust, and the smell of old smoke. Somewhere far above, traffic hummed like an endless insect swarm. Somewhere below, generators thumped in slow, tired beats.

This was a city built to keep moving—and to grind people down while it did.

Elias walked alone.

He kept to the edges of the street, hood pulled low, steps even and unhurried. He moved like someone who knew where cameras couldn't see and where shadows stayed thick. His shoulders were broad but relaxed, posture loose, as if nothing in the world could surprise him anymore.

That was a lie.

At twenty-six, Elias looked older than his age. Not in his face—his face was sharp, clean, almost calm—but in his eyes. Dark, steady eyes that had learned how to watch without reacting. The kind of eyes that measured exits, distances, and threats without effort.

A thin scar ran along his right eyebrow, pale against his skin. Another hid beneath his collar, a reminder of a mistake he'd survived. His hands were rough, knuckles scarred, fingers strong. Hands that had done things he didn't like to remember.

He stopped at a crosswalk that no longer worked.

The signal flickered red, then died.

Elias waited anyway.

Old habits were hard to kill.

A transparent blue panel hovered in the corner of his vision.

[SYSTEM STATUS]

Assignments: Active

Compliance Level: Required

He didn't look at it directly. He didn't need to. He knew every line by heart.

The System had been with him for eight years. It didn't care about excuses. It didn't care about reasons. It gave tasks, measured outcomes, and punished failure.

At first, it had promised efficiency. Survival. Advancement.

It had delivered all three.

At a cost.

The light changed. Elias crossed the street.

A woman hurried past him, head down, umbrella tilted too low. A man leaned against a shop shutter, pretending to smoke while his eyes tracked movement. Two teens argued loudly near a corner stall, laughter forced and sharp.

The city looked alive.

Elias knew better.

This part of town belonged to the System. Not the one in his head—the one that ruled everything else. Gangs wrapped in corporate names. Contracts hidden behind legal terms. Power traded quietly, blood washed away with money.

Elias had been very good at navigating it.

Too good.

A new notification blinked.

[NEW ASSIGNMENT AVAILABLE]

Priority: High

Time Limit: 48 Hours

Elias exhaled slowly.

"No," he muttered.

The word felt strange in his mouth. Heavy. Dangerous.

He turned down a narrower street, boots splashing through shallow puddles. The buildings here leaned inward, concrete walls stained with age and neglect. Windows were barred or broken. Fire escapes rusted and half-collapsed.

This alley smelled like mold and old rain.

He liked it. It felt honest.

Eight years ago, he would have accepted the assignment without thinking. He would have planned, executed, and walked away clean. That was what the System rewarded.

Efficiency. Obedience.

But tonight was different.

Elias stopped beneath a flickering streetlamp. Its light buzzed, casting his shadow long and broken across the wall. He looked up, rain tapping against his hood.

"Terminate assignment," he said clearly.

The blue panel pulsed.

[WARNING]

Unauthorized action detected.

"I'm done," Elias said. "I quit."

The word hung in the air.

For a moment, nothing happened.

Then the world seemed to tighten.

[ERROR]

Compliance is mandatory.

Elias laughed. It came out dry and short.

"Yeah," he said. "I figured."

He reached up and pulled his hood back. Rain soaked into his dark hair, flattening it against his head. His face was calm, but something sharp burned behind his eyes.

"I'm walking away," he said. "No more jobs. No more blood."

The System didn't answer right away.

That scared him more than an instant rejection.

He turned and started walking again, faster now. His boots echoed against the narrow walls. His senses stretched outward, alert, counting steps, tracking sounds.

Footsteps behind him.

Not rushed. Controlled.

Elias didn't turn.

He crossed another street, then another, taking paths that twisted and doubled back. The city shifted around him—buildings growing taller, streets wider, lights brighter. This was a transition zone. Neutral ground.

Usually.

The footsteps followed.

Elias ducked into a closed subway entrance. The metal gate was bent open just enough for one person. He slipped through, landing softly on concrete steps slick with grime.

The air underground was thick and stale. Water dripped somewhere in the dark.

The footsteps paused above.

Elias moved deeper, hand brushing the concealed blade at his side. His heart rate stayed steady. Fear didn't help. Panic got you killed.

A shape dropped from the gate.

Light flashed.

Pain exploded across Elias's left side.

He hit the ground hard, breath knocked from his lungs. The blade slipped from his grasp and skidded across the floor.

"Target confirmed," a calm voice said.

The attacker stepped into view.

He was tall and dressed simply—dark jacket, dark pants, gloves. His face was plain, forgettable. The kind of face that vanished from memory the moment you looked away.

But his eyes were wrong.

Empty. Focused. Professional.

Elias rolled, reaching for the blade.

A shot cracked through the tunnel.

Stone shattered inches from his hand.

Elias froze.

The gun leveled on his chest didn't shake.

"You were warned," the man said. "You know too much."

Elias laughed again, blood bubbling at the corner of his mouth. His side burned, hot and wet.

"So that's it," he said. "No exit clause."

"No," the man replied. "No exits."

The blue panel flared bright.

[SYSTEM NOTICE]

Termination Protocol Authorized.

Elias stared at it.

Not at the gun. Not at the man.

At the System.

"That's funny," he said softly. "After everything…I thought you'd at least pretend."

The man pulled the trigger.

The sound was deafening in the tunnel.

Darkness slammed down.

For a heartbeat, there was pain. Sharp, absolute.

Then there was nothing.

No city.

No rain.

No System.

Just silence.

Elias drifted.

Time lost meaning. Thoughts came apart, scattered like ash. He felt weightless, then heavy, then neither.

A memory surfaced.

A small house. Warm light through a window. Laughter. A table set for dinner.

He didn't know whose memory it was.

He clung to it anyway.

"I just wanted a normal life," he thought. "A family. That's all."

Something moved in the dark.

Not a voice. Not a presence.

An attention.

Elias felt it settle on him, calm and vast.

The silence deepened.

Then—

Light.

Not the harsh glare of neon. Not the flicker of broken lamps.

This light was soft. Endless.

Elias tried to breathe.

He did.

Air filled his lungs, clean and cool. His chest rose and fell. His heart beat—slow, steady, real.

He opened his eyes.

And the world was gone.

Elias didn't know it yet, but this death was not an ending.

It was a deadline.

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