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Chapter 17 - The chiefdom of kurogane.

The city had settled into evening, the sun dipping behind black timber walls and casting long shadows across Kurogane's bustling streets. Smoke from forges rose into the purple sky, curling into patterns that danced like restless spirits. Raizen, Haruka, Aoi, Mika, and Kaito walked with measured pace along the riverwalk, their senses still sharp from the day's skirmishes.

Word of their recent victory had spread quickly. Civilians whispered their names, and merchants offered small tokens of appreciation: a loaf of bread here, a jar of pickled vegetables there. The team had smiled politely and accepted only what they needed. Kaito, of course, grinned far too widely, holding up a loaf and muttering, "This city has excellent bread."

"This is… civilized," Kaito added after a bite, crumbs falling onto his tunic. "No wild mountain wolves, no ambushes… just people."

"Don't get comfortable," Haruka replied dryly, eyes scanning the rooftops. "The Tsuchigumo don't care about your comfort."

The Invitation

By nightfall, they reached the gates of a large manor set atop a slight hill within the city. Lanterns hung from its eaves, illuminating polished wood and stone walls. Guards in uniform bowing slightly as the team passed; banners fluttered above with the emblem of the chief: a stylized crane intertwined with a crescent moon.

Inside, a tall man in ceremonial armor awaited. His hair was streaked with silver, and his gaze was sharp but not unkind. "I am Chief Hirokawa," he said, bowing low. "Your actions in the city have been… remarkable. To face a Tsuchigumo in the streets and protect civilians without asking for reward is rare. I offer you shelter within my chiefdom."

Aoi's eyes widened as she scanned the grand interior: polished floors, tatami mats, sliding doors etched with intricate carvings, and the faint smell of incense lingering in the halls. "And they invite us?" she whispered to Mika, who only raised an eyebrow with a slight nod.

Kaito, predictably, had other priorities. "Do they have beds? Hot water? I need hot water."

"Focus," Raizen said quietly, his calm gaze surveying the room. "This chiefdom could be valuable. Observation and learning come first."

Meeting the Retainers

Chief Hirokawa led them to a wide training hall. Around the room stood two dozen retainers, samurai and ninja mixed, their stances disciplined, yet cautious. They had heard of Raizen's feats through the chiefdom's network. Whispers ran among them: a young warrior who bested a Tsuchigumo scout in the streets of Kurogane—without losing a single civilian.

"Test yourselves," Raizen said simply. "I wish to know the skill of this city."

The retainers exchanged nervous glances but stepped forward in formation. Raizen's eyes swept the room, assessing not just their speed and strength but patterns, spacing, and likely strategies.

Sparring Begins

The first retainer lunged with a forward strike. Raizen sidestepped, feeling the momentum, then redirected it with a light push that sent the man stumbling without serious injury.

He analyzed, always calculating:

• Angle of attack: Predict the strike path

• Weight distribution: Use enemy's force against him

• Environment: Pillars, tatami mats, sliding doors, roof tiles above

A second retainer attacked from the flank. Raizen spun, tapping their shoulders, legs, and wrists in precise motions that disrupted their balance. Each strike was minimal, efficient, calculated, yet overwhelmingly effective.

Aoi watched, heart racing. He doesn't just fight… he sees every move before it happens.

The sparring continued, with Raizen gracefully dodging multiple attacks at once, sometimes using a retainer's momentum to throw them into their teammate, creating harmless but disorienting collisions.

The room was filled with the sounds of movement—footsteps on polished wood, sliding mats, the light thud of controlled throws—but no one could land a decisive blow on him.

Kaito leaned against the wall, muttering, "How is he doing that? He's not even… using brute force."

Raizen's mind was working several steps ahead, imagining formations, attack chains, possible reinforcements, and Tsuchigumo strategies in urban environments. Every movement was a lesson, not just for him, but for the retainers observing in awe.

The Retainers' Realization

After what felt like hours of sparring, Raizen slowed, breathing evenly. The retainers, panting, bowed deeply.

"We… surrender," one whispered, eyes wide. "We… we have never seen anything like this."

Another added, trembling slightly: "You—your speed, your mind… It's terrifying and… amazing."

Aoi felt a strange warmth in her chest as she watched Raizen. His calm, unwavering presence, the precision of his strikes, and the way he thought several moves ahead… it stirred something she hadn't admitted to herself before. I… I respect him. More than anyone.

Mika nudged her lightly. "Focus. Admiration is fine. Just… don't stare too long."

Raizen inclined his head toward the chiefdom fighters. "Do not fear me. Take this as a lesson in observation, strategy, and restraint. Strength without thought is meaningless."

The retainers bowed again, a mixture of shock, fear, and happiness evident in their expressions. They had been bested without humiliation. Respect filled the hall.

The Chiefdom's Offer

Chief Hirokawa stepped forward, clapping once. "Your skills are exceptional. It is rare to find warriors who combine wisdom and strength in equal measure. Therefore, I offer you not just shelter, but knowledge. We will teach each of you a special form of ninjutsu, tailored to your abilities and spirit."

He gestured to five separate instructors:

• Raizen: advanced chakra control and elemental augmentation

• Haruka: healing-based combat and suppression techniques

• Aoi: shadow displacement and hand-to-hand ninjutsu

• Mika: spiritual awareness and infiltration ninjutsu

• Kaito: basic offensive techniques and chakra channeling

Aoi's gaze lingered on Raizen, now with a new glimmer of awe and… something else. I want to learn. I want to be strong, like him. She pressed her hands together unconsciously.

Raizen's expression remained calm, but he noticed. He didn't comment. He didn't need to. Actions, not words.

A Quiet Evening

That night, the team gathered on the terrace of the manor. Lanterns flickered, casting warm light across their faces. The city below hummed quietly, a reminder that civilization could survive despite lurking shadows.

Kaito tried to complain again about the lack of pastries for dinner. Aoi smirked, nudging him, and Mika simply shook her head. Haruka sat across from Raizen, watching silently, as if weighing the team's future against the city's stability.

Raizen's gaze was distant, focused on the rooftops and winding streets. He thought of the scouts, the priest, the shadows moving unseen. He mentally traced potential formations, predicted patrol routes, and ran simulations in his mind: how to defend civilians, how to intercept Tsuchigumo supply lines, how to train his team effectively.

Aoi sat a little closer than necessary, her hair brushing against his arm. She didn't speak. She didn't need to. She was learning, observing, and, unknowingly, feeling.

The night deepened, and with it, the calm before the storm. Somewhere along the river, faint spider-shaped silhouettes flickered in the shadows. Kurogane City slept—but not for long.

Raizen allowed himself a small, almost imperceptible smile. The team was together. The city was theirs to protect, and the lessons here would shape them for the battles to come.

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