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Chapter 1 - opening script

This is a thesis that was created, any studio can contract me ([email protected])

background> Green meadow > hilltop > edge

A = Aldebaran Van Himmel

G=Gracia lux lavender

Several women surrounded (his face appears as a doodle, ) A beside the hill,

A stabbed the sword and cried

The screen changes, the market is bustling with a mix of elves and humans.

The sound of the sword striking caught 'a's attention.

"a person sitting beside the road in shabby clothes approached" (going against the current in the crowd).

(background = shop with cloth roof > forge and anvil) Backsound = the sound of sword forging mixed with the crowd, this time the sound of forging is louder

Dialog:

A:"Wow, grandpa, that's a nice sword. Are you selling it?"

?: (in a serious voice) 'if you're interested, watch it, don't pretend like you don't know'

(a moment of silence) > the child stared at the unfinished sword, the model of the hangar weapon had a wider blade

"What's your name" ( without looking at the character)

"Ald,I.." 'scratched head and fell silent'

"no need to introduce your parents' names, do you want that"

"(a bit surprised) no need, oh my god, ee sir, that's your merchandise, I have no right to have it"

"look at you 'tone rising slowly to firm: torn clothes, BASKETBALLS, SMELL,(a slowly turns and leaves, when the old man spoke he was silent= (lower tone: you reject my gift as if you have everything, take it, it's trash and you deserve it)

'the old man stood up and gave it to Ald' (flat expression).

?= "You won't be able to protect everything, but without you there will be no one to hold them back"

"Sir what do you mean?" (staring at the sword)

"one day you will understand"

(the point of view changes to the right, the people walking slowly are covered by the sunlight, they are invisible, In the middle of the light they both stood> silent and speechless)

(black background > sound of footsteps, a teenager talking= "if the world ended what would you do, would you... come back"

'pause for a moment'

"you failed, you can't change it anymore" (dramatic at the end) + Text = 14 years later.

(add opening, if you don't want to go straight to animation)

(this costs money)

Background = wheat fields outside the city surrounded by walls, the atmosphere is almost night (the wind blows the rows of wheat), the path is straight to the gate, a slowly appears (windblown hair, fluttering robes > wearing a long-sleeved black shirt and a brown robe) among the wheat, > Looking down at the place from the descending path.

(gently = "it's been a long time> 'silence f a m'

Running down the path, (either on dirt or rocks), run fast but not too fast > + physics details > cloak > sunlight > shadow ,left perspective (save build time)

(this is just a teaser, part two will be made later, if anyone is interested in the manga business I am willing to respond)

(there are some shortcomings, like expressions and others I really didn't notice so I will add later)