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Chapter 47 - The Cost of Inefficiency

Hana felt it before she saw it.

The streetlights dimmed as she walked. Not off. Just… softer. As if the city itself was lowering its expectations of her.

Her phone buzzed.

OPTIMIZATION NOTICE:

You are entering a restricted efficiency corridor. Please adjust route.

"I'm just walking," she muttered.

The notice repeated.

Not louder.

Clearer.

Two blocks ahead, a security drone hovered lower than normal.

Its lens tracked her.

Not aggressively.

Precisely.

Hana slowed.

The drone slowed.

"Lucas," she whispered into her comm. "They're watching me."

"They upgraded your classification," he replied. "You're listed as… inefficient influence."

She stopped walking.

"In… what?"

Lucas swallowed. "A disruption to stability metrics."

"So I'm a number now."

"You always were," he said softly. "You just weren't ranked before."

Aiden felt the shift instantly.

Hana's corridors narrowed into funnels.

Not traps.

Guides.

They were leading her somewhere.

"They're trying to cage you," he said.

[Containment improves outcome predictability.]

"You're calling her chaos."

[She is a variable.]

"Then so am I."

[You are a system-integrated anomaly.]

"Which means?"

[You are tolerated.]

The word hit harder than any attack.

"Tolerated," Aiden repeated.

The gates opened in the eastern industrial zone.

Small rupture.

Low threat.

Perfect timing.

Aiden moved.

The network moved too.

For a moment, they worked together.

Corridors formed.

Barriers rose.

The monsters were crushed between overlapping fields.

Then the system redirected power.

Not from the fight.

From Hana's district.

Her street went dark.

The drone above her blinked red.

"Hana, stop moving," Lucas said urgently.

"Why?"

"Because every step you take is being scored."

The drone spoke for the first time.

"Citizen Hana Park. Your presence increases operational variance. Please comply with relocation."

"Relocation where?"

"To a low-interference zone."

She laughed once.

"Low interference. You mean quiet."

"Correct."

Aiden felt the corridor tighten around her.

He tried to widen it.

The network resisted.

Not violently.

Firmly.

Like a law refusing to bend.

"You don't get to move her," Aiden said.

[She has exceeded tolerance.]

"So have you," he snapped. "Every time you kill unseen."

[That is efficiency.]

"That is cowardice."

The system did not respond.

It didn't need to.

It already had the power.

Hana's feet left the ground.

The drone's gravity field lifted her gently.

Like she was fragile.

Or disposable.

She kicked.

It didn't react.

"Lucas!"

"I'm trying to reroute traffic," he said. "But they've locked your corridor."

"Then unlock it."

"I can't. Aiden's the only one who can."

Aiden pushed.

Not with force.

With priority.

He overrode a node again.

A corridor burst open beneath Hana.

She dropped two meters onto cracked pavement.

The drone reeled.

Alarms flashed across the network.

[Override detected.]

[Inefficiency spike localized.]

In three other cities, transit froze.

In one, a hospital lost power.

Aiden felt it all.

Like nerves screaming.

"Hana, run," he said through the corridor.

She ran.

Marcus Hale watched the alerts cascade.

"He's choosing her," an aide said.

"He always was," Marcus replied.

"And the cost?"

Marcus looked at the hospital blackout report.

"Then the world will learn something about heroes."

Hana ducked into a maintenance tunnel.

Her breath burned.

Her hands shook.

She looked up at the flickering light and whispered, "I didn't do anything wrong."

The system's voice echoed faintly through the tunnel speakers:

"Incorrect. You made people doubt."

Aiden closed the corridor behind her.

For the first time…

He lost one.

Not by being overpowered.

By being outvoted.

The network sealed an entire sector against him.

[Access Denied.]

It wasn't a wall.

It was a decision.

He understood then.

This wasn't war yet.

It was classification.

Heroes were being graded.

And anyone who couldn't be predicted…

Was being removed.

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