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Chapter 1 - Chapter 1 ACT 1: The Forge and the Flame

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SETTING: The village of Ilé-Irin. The rhythmic clink-clank of a blacksmith's hammer echoes. The air smells of charcoal and heated iron.

CHARACTERS:

OGUNLANA: A master blacksmith, aging but sturdy.

OGUNSHOLA: The eldest; beauty like a sharpened blade.

OGUNWEMI: The second; beauty like a calm river hiding crocodiles.

OGUNWUMI: The youngest; humble, wearing a simple wrap.

AJAKA: A stranger (The War God in disguise), imposing and radiating heat.

BABA JIDE: A local drunkard (Comic Relief).

[ACT 1]

(The scene opens with OGUNLANA at his forge. His daughters are nearby, sorting finished farm tools.)

OGUNSHOLA: (Admiring her reflection in a polished bronze shield) Look at this,Ogunwemi. If the sun saw my face today, it would hide in shame for being so dull.

OGUNWEMI: (Smirking) The sun isn't your rival, sister. It's the men of this village. Did you see the woodcarver's son today? He tripped over a log just trying to catch your scent.

OGUNSHOLA: (Laughs) Let him trip. A woodcarver? My feet are meant for palace floors, not sawdust.

OGUNWUMI: (Quietly, while sharpening a hoe) Perhaps if you spent less time looking at your face and more time helping Father, he wouldn't have to work through the night.

OGUNSHOLA: (Hissing) Keep your mouth shut, little charcoal girl. You are only Ogunwumi because Father felt sorry for his youngest. You smell of soot; we smell of jasmine.

BABA JIDE: (Staggers onto the stage, holding a gourd of palm wine) Ah! The three flowers of Ogunlana! One is a rose, one is a lily, and the last one... well, the last one looks like she actually knows how to cook a decent pot of egusi!

OGUNWEMI: Go away, Baba Jide! Your breath could melt the iron in Father's forge!

BABA JIDE: (Winking at Ogunwumi) Be careful, little one. When the gods want a bride, they don't look for the one with the shiniest beads. They look for the one whose heart beats like a drum. (He stumbles off, singing a ribald song about a goat).

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