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Broken Promise,Rising Queen

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Chapter 1 - Chapter 1 – The Beginning

The worst sound in the world is a house settling into silence when the people inside it have stopped listening to each other.

Nneka first heard that silence on a rainy evening when she and Olu sat on the top floor of his half-finished building and watched water run down the bare concrete like a slow, patient clock. The house wasn't finished—no plaster, no tiles, no windows—just rough walls, open air, and the stubborn smell of cement. But to her, it was the most honest place she had ever been. It belonged to one man who dreamed with his hands.

They met when they were young. Nneka was twenty-one—restless, full of ideas—while Olu was twenty-three, steady, hardworking, and determined. He had saved every small job and every contract until he bought a piece of land and began building a home. He had little else: a few tools, a kettle, and an uncompleted house that leaned like a promise against the skyline.

Nneka laughed the first time she saw it.

"You call this a house?" she teased, touching the rough wall.

But her hand lingered on the cement. She liked its honesty. It was easy to love a man who was building his future from bare things.

Their romance began under the shade of the unfinished building. She brought food; he brought stories—stories about how the house would look someday, about the business he wanted to start, about the family he hoped to raise. They shared dreams like secrets, simple dreams that felt big because they believed in each other.

When her parents complained that Olu was too poor, Nneka shrugged.

"He has a house," she said. "Not finished, but a house."

To her, that was proof of direction.

They married quietly—no big ceremony, no loud celebration. And after the wedding, they moved into the house. Friends joked about the empty echo, but the echo was freedom: no landlord, no noise, no expectations.

For years, they worked side by side.

They opened a small shop.

They saved.

They planned.

They struggled.

They grew.

Olu delivered goods. Nneka sold cloth, cosmetics, and small items. They were not wealthy, but they were building, brick by brick.

Eventually, the business grew.

They finished the house—paint, tiles, doors, a real kitchen.

Customers increased.

Profit improved.

Life became softer.

But money does not change everything—it only reveals it.

Slowly, Olu changed.

First, it was late nights and excuses.

Then the scent of perfume that didn't belong to Nneka.

Then the careless insults.

Then the drinking.

Then the other women.

Nneka kept quiet. She endured, hoping the man she loved would return to himself.

But the more she tried, the worse it became.

When she finally spoke to his mother and sister, hoping they would help, they mocked her—

"Goody-goody! You just want our son's property!"

"You think you're smart?"

"You want to come and control him?"

All she wanted was peace.

All she wanted was advice.

All she wanted was for them to talk sense into him.

But they sided with Olu because he was giving them money.

And the more they collected, the more they fueled the fire.

The house that once symbolized love became a cage.

After years of insult, betrayal, and pain, Nneka reached her breaking point.

She asked for a divorce.

Olu laughed at first.

Then he became angry.

Then he became cruel.

But she did not turn back.

She had already lost everything—her peace, her happiness, herself.

The divorce was messy, painful, and full of unnecessary fights, but she walked away with her dignity.

Alone.

Broken.

Hurt.

But free.

She started again.

A small rented shop.

A little capital.

A lot of determination.

She worked day and night, building the life she deserved.

Within a year, she rose—

Customers loved her.

Her business expanded.

She became successful again… but this time, by herself.

Meanwhile, Olu burned through his money—women, drinks, bad decisions.

His business collapsed.

Friends disappeared.

Even his family withdrew.

Everything he threw away came back to him as emptiness.

One day, fate brought them face to face again.

She was glowing—healthy, peaceful, wealthy.

He was a shadow of himself.

And in that moment, Olu finally understood what he had lost.

Not property.

Not status.

Not money.

He had lost the woman who built him.

And she was never going to beg for what she deserved again.