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THE WHEEL OF TIME

Write ✍️ by Parmod Kumar Prajapati....

The seventeenth day of the Great War dawned blood-red. The previous days had been a symphony of carnage. Bhishma had fallen. Drona had been decapitated. The battlefield of Kurukshetra was a charnel house, littered with the wreckage of men, elephants, and shattered chariots.

Today was different. A terrible focus tightened over the chaos. Today, Karna was the Supreme Commander of the Kaurava forces. And today, he would finally face Arjuna.

From his chariot, Karna cut a magnificent, terrifying figure. His golden armour shone with a preternatural light. His earrings gleamed. He was a demigod of war, and his bow Vijaya sang a song of death that decimated the Pandava ranks. He was fulfilling his vow—he encountered Yudhishthira, defeated him with contemptuous ease, but spared his life. "Go," he said to his elder brother, "you are not a warrior, you are a scholar. Do not cross my path again."

But his mind was not on the battle. It was on Krishna's warning. The wheel of your chariot will fail you.

His charioteer, Shalya, the reluctant king of Madra and maternal uncle to the Pandavas, drove with deliberate incompetence. "Faster!" Karna barked as Arjuna's chariot, borne by the divine white horses of Krishna, weaved through the fray towards him.

"The ground is soft, O King," Shalya muttered, a smirk in his voice.

Then it happened. As Karna drew his bow to unleash the Nagastra, the deadly serpent arrow, the left wheel of his magnificent chariot sank deep into the bloody, hidden mire of Kurukshetra. The chariot listed violently.

"Shalya! Free the wheel!"

Shalya made a show of effort."It is stuck fast, Lord Karna. The mud claims it."

This was the moment. The critical juncture. Karna knew the rules of righteous war—dharma yuddha. A warrior could not attack an enemy who was disadvantaged, without a chariot, or engaged in fixing his equipment.

He lowered Vijaya. "Arjuna! My chariot is incapacitated. Observe the codes of war. Allow me a moment to extricate it."

On the Pandava chariot, Arjuna hesitated, looking to Krishna for guidance. Krishna, the divine strategist, the avatar of dharma itself, leaned forward.

"Codes of war, Arjuna?" Krishna's voice was thunderous. "Remember! This is the man who watched silently as Draupadi was disrobed! This is the man who called her a whore! This is the man who aided and abetted the unjust exile of your wife and mother! Where was his dharma then? This is not a duel; this is the redemption of cosmic justice! Strike now, Partha! Strike, or you betray every oath you have sworn!"

Arjuna's face hardened. He raised Gandiva, his celestial bow.

On the ground, Karna saw the decision in his brother's eyes. A profound calm settled over him. This was his last curse, the final act of betrayal by fate. He smiled, a faint, weary smile. He began the mantra to summon the Brahmastra, the ultimate weapon that could obliterate Arjuna and Krishna both.

Om…

The words evaporated. Parashurama's curse gripped his mind. The sacred syllables, practised a thousand times, were gone. A blank, white wall stood where his memory should be.

He was defenceless.

He looked up, not at Arjuna, but at Krishna, who watched him with infinite, sorrowful understanding. Karna gave a slight, almost imperceptible nod. You were right.

"Anija!" Karna cried out, his voice carrying across the sudden stillness of the battlefield. My younger brother.

Arjuna, his bowstring drawn to his ear, froze. The word, so intimate, so unexpected, pierced his warrior's focus.

But it was too late. The moment of hesitation was a flicker. Duty, revenge, and Krishna's will prevailed. Arjuna released the arrow.

It was not a normal arrow. It was the Anjalika, charged with the power of destiny. It flew, a streak of blazing light, unerring and true. It struck Karna at the junction of his neck and shoulder, precisely where the divine armour did not cover him, severing his head from his body in a clean, terrible arc.

The golden helmet, the brilliant earrings, the magnificent armour—they all dimmed instantly, their celestial light extinguished with the life of their bearer.

A great silence fell over Kurukshetra. The sun, Surya, seemed to dim for a moment. The victorious Pandava army did not cheer. They watched, in sombre awe, as the great and tragic hero, the Danveer, the man who was loyalty incarnate, fell.

Krishna stepped down from his chariot. He walked to where Karna's head lay, eyes open, staring at the sky with an expression of peace finally achieved. Krishna bowed. It was a deep, respectful bow from the Lord of the Universe to his greatest devotee, to the man who had lived and died by his own impossible code.

"You were the truest of them all, Karna," Krishna whispered. "In another life, in a world not ruled by caste and lineage, you would have been emperor of the world. Your only sin was to be born to a mother too scared to claim you, and to give your loyalty to a friend who did not deserve its measure."

As Karna's soul ascended, a final vision came to him. He saw his mother, Kunti, weeping uncontrollably on the banks of the Ganga at dusk, performing the funeral rites for the son she could never acknowledge. He saw Arjuna, later, learning the truth from Krishna, collapsing under the weight of fratricide. He saw Duryodhana, his friend, in his final moments, weeping not for his lost kingdom, but for his lost brother-in-arms.

And he saw himself, not as the charioteer's son, not as the King of Anga, not as the cursed warrior, but simply as Karna. The man who was defined not by his birth, but by his deeds. The hero who chose loyalty over kingship, honour over life, and in doing so, became the most human—and thus the most divine—of all the legends born on the bloody fields of Kurukshetra.

His story did not end with the arrow. It began with it. A legend not of victory, but of magnificent, heartbreaking integrity. The legend of Karna, who was, and would forever remain, radiant.

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