hey just letting you guys know im going to be going back over the first 3 chapters and breaking up the senteces into paragraphs. tho what do you think should i do it the same as the prologue or as the newest chapters?
examples being
"According to all known laws of aviation, there is no way a bee should be able to fly."
"Its wings are too small to get its fat little body off the ground."
broke up like this^
or put together like this
The bee, of course, flies anyway because bees don't care what humans think is impossible. Yellow, black. Yellow, black. Yellow, black. Yellow, black. Ooh, black and yellow! Let's shake it up a little. Barry! Breakfast is ready! Coming! Hang on a second.
(and yes this is the bee movie scripts)