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Chapter 8 - A Stranger with Sharp Eyes.

The corridor narrowed as we descended, the ceiling lowering until it felt like the ruins were leaning in to listen. Our footsteps echoed too loudly for comfort, every scrape of boot against stone sounding like an announcement.

Kael slowed, raising a hand.

I stopped instantly.

Something was wrong—not danger, not yet, but attention. The whispers had gone quiet. That alone was unsettling. The ruins were rarely silent.

Then the system flickered.

WARNING

UNKNOWN OBSERVER DETECTED

THREAT LEVEL: UNASSESSED

I didn't turn. Turning was what prey did.

Kael shifted slightly, angling his body so his crossbow covered the tunnel behind us while his eyes stayed forward. "You feel that?"

"Yeah," I said softly. "We're being watched."

A slow clap echoed from the darkness ahead.

Measured. Unhurried.

"Well spotted," a voice said. Calm. Amused. "Most people don't notice until it's too late."

A figure stepped into the faint glow of the runes lining the walls.

Human. Definitely human.

Tall, lean, wrapped in layered leather armor stitched with symbols I didn't recognize. A hood shadowed most of their face, but sharp gray eyes gleamed beneath it, missing nothing.

The system struggled.

ENTITY IDENTIFICATION FAILED

LEVEL: ???

STATUS: MASKED

Kael muttered a curse under his breath.

The stranger tilted their head slightly, studying us like a puzzle. "Two survivors. One newly leveled." Their gaze flicked to me. "And one pretending he's not exhausted."

Kael stiffened. "Who are you?"

"Someone who doesn't enjoy surprises," the stranger replied. "And you've been making quite a bit of noise."

They moved closer, boots silent on the stone. Every instinct screamed danger, but not the straightforward kind. This wasn't a brute or a crawler.

This was a predator that thought.

"I'm not here to fight," the stranger said, as if reading my thoughts. "Not unless you make it necessary."

I kept my sword lowered but ready. "Then why announce yourself?"

A faint smile tugged at their lips. "Because sneaking forever gets boring. And because you walked past something you shouldn't have survived."

Kael frowned. "The ashbound brutes?"

"No," the stranger said. "The obelisk."

My heart skipped.

"You were there?" I asked.

"Nearby," they replied. "Close enough to feel the system ripple when it chose you."

The system pulsed uneasily.

SYSTEM NOTICE:

USER INTERACTION UNDER OBSERVATION

"I didn't know it chose," I said.

"Oh, it does," the stranger said lightly. "It always does. The question is why."

They circled us slowly, eyes scanning my stance, Kael's grip, our gear. I felt like a specimen under glass.

"You're not veterans," they continued. "Too rough around the edges. But you're alive. That makes you interesting."

Kael shifted his weight. "We're not looking to join anything."

"Good," the stranger said. "Neither am I."

They stopped in front of me, gaze sharp. "You fight like someone who adapts quickly. Not strongest. Not fastest. But you listen—to the system, to the ruins, to the space between attacks."

I said nothing.

They nodded, satisfied. "That'll keep you alive longer than brute force."

"What do you want?" I asked.

The stranger considered the question. Then they reached into their cloak and pulled out a thin metal disc etched with shifting symbols. The air around it felt… tense.

"A warning," they said. "And an offer."

The system reacted instantly.

ITEM DETECTED: RUIN SIGIL (BOUND)

RARITY: UNKNOWN

EFFECTS: UNKNOWN

"You're heading toward the Inner Ring," the stranger continued. "The deeper sectors. You think the monsters are the real danger."

"They're not?" Kael asked.

The stranger laughed quietly. "They're symptoms."

They crouched, pressing the sigil against the stone floor. The symbols flared briefly, projecting a faint image—ruins layered atop ruins, entire sections collapsed inward like a broken crown.

"This place isn't just old," they said. "It's hungry. The deeper you go, the more the system stops pretending it's neutral."

I remembered the message.

Leveling increases capability, not compassion.

"What happens down there?" I asked.

"Rules change," the stranger said. "Rewards become… selective. And people?" They shrugged. "People start making ugly choices."

Kael crossed his arms. "And the offer?"

The stranger stood, meeting our eyes. "Survive long enough to reach the fractured spire. If you do, use this."

They pressed the sigil into my hand. It was warm. Almost alive.

ITEM ACQUIRED: RUIN SIGIL

STATUS: LOCKED

CONDITION: ACTIVATES NEAR FRACTURED SPIRE

"And then?" I asked.

"Then we talk again," the stranger said. "If you're still you."

I didn't like that phrasing.

"You could just come with us," Kael said. "Strength in numbers."

The stranger shook their head. "I don't walk paths twice. And I don't stay where the system's attention lingers too long."

They stepped back, already fading into the shadows.

"One more thing," they added. "Trust the system's information. Never trust its intentions."

Then they were gone.

No footsteps. No sound.

Just silence.

The whispers returned slowly, uncertain.

Kael exhaled. "Well. That was unsettling."

"Yeah," I said, staring at the sigil. "But useful."

The system chimed softly.

SYSTEM NOTE:

NEW VARIABLE INTRODUCED

CAUTION ADVISED

We moved on after that, quieter than before. The corridor widened into a chamber dotted with broken statues—figures in regal armor, faces worn smooth by time.

"This was an empire," Kael murmured. "Hard to imagine."

"Everything powerful ends up as ruins eventually," I said.

He glanced at me. "You sound like you've thought about that before."

"Hard not to," I replied.

We rested briefly, sharing water, checking gear. My body still ached, but the new level made it manageable.

As we prepared to move again, the system pulsed one last time, highlighting the sigil faintly.

SYSTEM OBSERVATION:

EXTERNAL ACTORS INCREASING

SURVIVAL PROBABILITY: VARIABLE

I tucked the sigil away.

A stranger with sharp eyes had crossed our path, and somehow, I knew that wasn't the last time.

In this world, attention was a currency.

And we were starting to accumulate it.

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