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Chapter 16 - the message

Night had settled heavily over Hong Kong, wrapping the Dragon Hotel in a deceptive calm. The city outside still breathed through distant traffic and glowing neon lights, but inside the hotel, silence ruled the corridors like an unspoken law.

Vikram was asleep.

For the first time since arriving in Hong Kong, exhaustion had finally overpowered his restless mind. His body lay still, but his thoughts had not fully let go. Even in sleep, fragments of the day lingered. Daniel's controlled smile. Maria's hesitant words. The locked door of Room 309. The faint bloodstain in the basement.

Sofia slept beside him, turned slightly toward him, her breathing slow and steady. She looked peaceful, unaware of the invisible danger hovering around them.

At exactly 2:00 a.m., Vikram's phone vibrated softly on the bedside table.

Once.

Then again.

The sound was barely audible, swallowed by the thick silence of the room. Vikram shifted slightly in his sleep but did not wake up. The screen of the phone lit up, casting a pale glow on the wooden table.

A WhatsApp notification.

Unknown Number

The message appeared, sharp and cold.

"There is still time. Leave Dragon Hotel now. If you stay, you will lose more than you can imagine."

The phone went silent again.

Outside the room, the corridor lights flickered faintly, as if reacting to something unseen. Somewhere on the third floor, a door creaked, slow and deliberate, though no one was supposed to be there at that hour.

Inside the room, Vikram slept on.

Minutes passed.

Then another vibration.

This time, Vikram stirred.

His brows tightened slightly, his hand moving instinctively toward the sound. His eyes opened halfway, disoriented. The room was dark, quiet. For a moment, he thought it was a dream.

Then the phone vibrated again.

He reached for it and unlocked the screen.

The message stared back at him.

Vikram's sleep vanished instantly.

He sat up slowly, careful not to wake Sofia, and read the message again. And again.

Leave Dragon Hotel now.

His heartbeat quickened, not from fear alone, but from recognition. This wasn't a prank. The timing was too precise. The words too deliberate.

He checked the sender's number.

Unknown.

No profile picture. No name.

Vikram glanced at the time.

2:03 a.m.

He looked toward Sofia. She was still asleep, unaware that their sense of safety had just cracked open. Vikram stood up quietly and moved toward the window. Outside, Hong Kong looked the same as before. Bright. Alive. Indifferent.

Yet the warning echoed in his mind.

You will lose more than you can imagine.

He returned to the bed, sat down, and rubbed his face slowly. His instincts, sharpened by years of storytelling, told him one thing clearly.

This message came from someone inside the hotel.

Someone watching.

His phone vibrated again.

Another message.

"This is not a story. This is real."

Vikram exhaled slowly.

Whoever this was, they knew exactly how to reach him.

He typed a reply.

"Who are you?"

The message showed as delivered.

No reply came.

After a few seconds, the chat status changed.

Last seen at 2:04 a.m.

Then nothing.

Vikram locked the phone and sat there in silence. The hotel felt different now. No longer mysterious in a cinematic way, but dangerous in a real, suffocating sense.

He lay back down, but sleep did not return.

His eyes remained open until the faint light of dawn began to seep through the curtains.

Morning arrived quietly.

Sofia woke up first and noticed Vikram staring at the ceiling.

"You look like you didn't sleep at all," she said softly.

"I didn't," Vikram replied.

She sat up, concerned. "Nightmares?"

"No," he said. "Messages."

That caught her attention.

"What messages?"

Vikram hesitated for a second, then handed her the phone. Sofia read the texts carefully. Her expression changed with every line.

"This is creepy," she said finally. "Do you think it's a joke?"

"No," Vikram replied. "This is a warning."

"From who?"

"That's the problem," he said. "It could be Maria. It could be a staff member. Or it could be someone else entirely."

Sofia wrapped the blanket tighter around herself. "Then let's leave."

Vikram looked at her. "That's what they want."

"That's what keeps us alive," she countered.

Vikram stood up and walked toward the bathroom. He splashed cold water on his face, grounding himself. When he looked back at his reflection, he didn't see a filmmaker anymore.

He saw a man trapped inside his own story.

"No," he said firmly as he returned. "We don't leave. Not yet."

Sofia frowned. "Vikram—"

"Someone is trying to scare me," he continued. "Which means someone is hiding something."

The morning passed slowly. Vikram avoided Daniel deliberately, watching him from a distance instead. The manager moved through the hotel with his usual confidence, greeting guests, giving instructions, smiling effortlessly.

But Vikram noticed something new.

Daniel kept checking his watch.

And he avoided the third floor completely.

Around noon, Vikram went down alone to the café area. He sat quietly, pretending to scroll through his phone, observing the staff. Maria moved between tables, her expression tense.

When she noticed Vikram, she froze for a brief second.

Then she approached him.

"Good afternoon, Mr. Vikram," she said politely.

"Good afternoon," he replied. "Can I ask you something?"

Maria glanced around nervously. "Here?"

"Yes," Vikram said. "Did you send me a message last night?"

Her face drained of color.

"I don't know what you're talking about," she whispered.

"Then someone else did," Vikram said calmly. "Someone inside this hotel."

Maria swallowed hard. "Some doors are better left closed."

"And some secrets kill people," Vikram replied.

Maria's hands trembled slightly as she placed a cup of coffee on the table.

"Please," she said in a low voice. "If you care about her… leave."

Before Vikram could respond, Daniel's voice echoed across the café.

"Maria!"

She flinched.

"Yes, sir," she replied quickly and walked away without looking back.

Vikram sat there, his jaw tightening.

The warning was real.

The danger was real.

That evening, Vikram received another message.

"Tonight, you choose."

No explanation.

No name.

Just four words.

Vikram showed it to Sofia. She didn't argue this time.

"This isn't normal," she said quietly. "Someone is playing with us."

"No," Vikram said. "Someone is desperate."

As night fell again, the Dragon Hotel returned to its unnatural stillness. The corridors dimmed. The staff thinned. Cameras blinked silently.

At 1:58 a.m., Vikram lay awake, phone in his hand.

Waiting.

At 2:00 a.m., the phone vibrated.

One final message appeared.

"Room 309. This is your last warning."

Vikram's heart pounded.

He slowly turned his head toward Sofia. She was awake now, staring at him.

"You're not going there," she said.

"I have to," Vikram replied.

"Then I'm coming with you."

"No," he said firmly. "Stay here."

Sofia grabbed his arm. "If you walk out that door alone, I swear—"

"I'll come back," Vikram said quietly. "I promise."

He stood up, slipped on his jacket, and stepped into the hallway.

The corridor was empty.

Silent.

Room 309 waited at the far end, just like before.

This time, the door was slightly open.

And whatever waited inside was no longer hiding.

The past was ready to speak.

And Vikram was finally listening.

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