Hi everyone!
How are you all doing? Hope you're great!
I just wanted to say sorry again if this is a bit of a mess. This is only a test/proof-of-concept translation.
My English isn't perfect (it's not my native language), so there might be some awkward sentences, weird dialogue, or things that don't sound quite right.
This is literally my first time writing anything in English, so there are definitely going to be mistakes. I'm still learning!
I'd really love to know what you think of the translation so far. Be honest — good or bad, any feedback helps me improve.
Thank you so much from the bottom of my heart just for giving it a chance. It means the world to me! 🐻
Hope you enjoy it anyway!
— Ashura
P.S.: The original story in Spanish is on my profile if you'd like to check it out!