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Chapter 20 - “Hell Training: In-Laws Edition!”

Morning light spread across the courtyard of Lily's home in Japan. For a brief moment, everything was quiet and peaceful.

Then—

SLAM!

The sliding door burst open.

Lily's Dad:

"LEO! TRAINING TIME, YOU WEAK SON-IN-LAW!"

Leo froze, holding a cup of tea that he didn't even get to sip.

Leo:

"Sir… I literally woke up one minute ago—"

WHACK!

Lily's dad grabbed him by the collar.

Lily:

"Dad, stop… he hasn't even stretched yet—"

Lily's Dad:

"STRETCHING IS FOR THE WEAK! REAL TRAINING BEGINS IMMEDIATELY!"

Just then, another terrifying presence appeared behind him…

Lily's Mom, wearing training gloves, eyes glowing like a demon general.

Lily's Mom:

"Move, old man. Today I will train him."

Leo's soul almost left his body.

Leo:

"WHY!?! What did I do!?"

Lily:

"Leo… I'm sorry. They're monsters."

Lily's Mom:

"Push-ups! One thousand! With ONE hand!"

Leo:

"I can't do even one—"

Lily's Mom:

"Two thousand extra."

Leo screamed internally.

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The Training Hell Begins

Within minutes, the peaceful courtyard became a war zone.

Dad: "Run around the house 300 times!"

Mom: "Carry these 50-kilogram rice bags while running!"

Leo: "I'M NOT A DELIVERY MAN!!"

Lily did light exercises on the side, casually doing push-ups like this was normal.

Lily (thinking):

"Poor Leo… but he'll survive. Maybe."

Suddenly her dad turned to her.

Lily's Dad:

"LILY! WHY ARE YOU JUST WATCHING!? JOIN HIM!"

Lily:

"Huh!??"

And just like that, Lily was dragged into the madness too.

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 Mid-Training Chaos

Leo tried to take a quick break—just one small breath.

But Lily's dad spotted him instantly.

Dad:

"BREAK!? DURING MY TRAINING!? OUTRAGEOUS!"

Mom:

"You do NOT deserve rest! Knee lifts! HIGHER!"

Leo was almost crying.

Leo:

"I didn't even marry yet and I'm already suffering as a son-in-law! Lily, HELP ME!!"

Lily:

"I can't… if I help you, Dad will make me do double."

Leo: "NOOOOOOO!!!"

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The Ultimate Threat

Finally, Leo collapsed on the ground.

Lily's Dad stood over him like a demon warlord.

Dad:

"Do you want even MORE training?"

Leo whispered in terror:

Leo:

"If you torture me more… I'll tell Mother-in-law everything you did yesterday…"

SILENCE.

Dad froze.

Fear entered his eyes.

Dad:

"…Training break."

Mom:

"What did he say to you?"

Dad:

"N-Nothing dear…"

Lily almost laughed out loud.

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Final Push-Ups

By the end, everyone was doing push-ups together:

Leo: nearly unconscious

Lily: calm

Dad: shouting "FASTER!!"

Mom: shouting "DON'T FALL BEHIND!!"

Leo had absolutely no strength left.

Leo:

"…Even the demon king never tortured me like this…"

Lily giggled at his dramatic collapse.

Just when the chaotic training hell seemed to calm down—

DING-DONG.

The doorbell rang.

All four of them stopped.

Dad:

"…Who's at the door at this hour?"

Nobody knew.

The atmosphe

re suddenly shifted—

from comedy chaos

to quiet tension.

Narration:

"And so, Chapter 20 ends with a mysterious visitor waiting outside the door… their identity unknown."

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