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Chapter 88 - Concerning Two Brothers and an Unexpected Invitation

In a smoky city in central England, in the early days of September 1907, there lived two brothers with a name that did not quite sound English in an English mouth.

They were called Tolkien.

Now, if you imagine them living in a neat little cottage with roses and a low stone wall, you have imagined the wrong kind of story. The Tolkien brothers did not live in the countryside, where the air is clean and the neighbors know your aunt's cousin's dog by name. They lived in Birmingham, a modern industrial city—a place of factories, foundries, rail lines, and chimneys, where coal smoke could hang in the air like a permanent grey curtain and the streets always seemed busy with noise and movement.

And if you imagine them living in a private home with a stable routine and a family dining table, you have imagined the wrong kind of home as well.

They lived in a boarding house.

A boarding house, in those days, was simply a large house divided into rented rooms, where people stayed because they could not afford a home of their own—or because life had knocked them off the path that led to one. In such places you share staircases, corridors, and sometimes meals with strangers. You learn quickly not to leave your best things unattended. You learn that "privacy" is something you borrow, not something you own. You learn to listen for footsteps.

The Tolkien brothers had learned all of that early.

The younger was named Hilary. He was practical, quick to grin, quick to run, and good at being alive in the real world.

The elder was named Ronald—and he was the one this story truly follows.

Ronald was the sort of boy who noticed words the way other boys noticed football scores. He collected languages the way other boys collected marbles. He could sit quietly for an hour and come out of it having invented an entire alphabet in his head. He was poor, orphaned, and watched over—at a distance, but firmly—by a Catholic priest, which meant that even before anything unusual happened, Ronald already lived slightly outside the comfortable middle of English society.

And yet the brothers still had a simple daily routine, like thousands of boys in thousands of streets:

They woke up.

They washed.

They ate a careful breakfast.

They walked through smoke and morning chill to school.

They sat in classrooms and listened to masters explain history, grammar, and the proper shape of the world.

And in the time left over—between homework and chores and whatever the city demanded of them—they dreamed.

Not the soft dreams of comfort, but the hungry dreams of boys who want to become something more than what the world has prepared for them. They played at heroes with other boys from nearby streets and yards, not merely for laughter, but with a kind of seriousness that looked almost like practice. They acted out knights and raiders, defenders and invaders—wooden swords cracking, borrowed shields thumping, breath steaming in the air—because the idea of being brave was too beautiful not to rehearse.

Nothing about that sounds like the beginning of an adventure. Just children being children.

But adventures do not begin with drums and banners.

They begin with one small change in an ordinary day—something so simple that most people would miss it.

And on a particular morning in early September, just as Ronald Tolkien sat down and opened his notebook at school, the British government—quiet, nervous, and very powerful—finally found the place where the Tolkien brothers were living.

They did not arrive with a parade. Governments never do.

They arrived the way governments prefer to arrive: through paper, and whispers, and men who did not look like men sent by anyone important.

Somewhere, a clerk checked a name. Somewhere, a hand underlined it twice. Somewhere, a message was carried to a superior office. And from that moment forward, without Ronald or Hilary knowing it, their lives were no longer only their own.

The next day began like any other.

It began with the boarding house waking slowly—floors creaking thoughtfully, cold light slipping through the curtains with no intention of being cheerful, the distant city breathing soot and steam and the faint metallic smell of money being made by other people.

Hilary was awake first, as he often was, already swinging a wooden sword in the small space where it would not break anything valuable—because valuable things and boarding houses rarely got along.

Ronald woke later, blinking as though dragged up from a deep place. His mind had been running ahead of his body, as it usually did. Words had gathered overnight—not English words necessarily, but pieces of sound and meaning that wanted to fit together into something cleaner, sharper, more right. He lay staring at the ceiling for a moment, turning a thought over like a coin he did not fully trust.

Breakfast was modest in the way poverty often is: not dramatic, not starving—simply careful. Bread appeared. Tea was poured. Butter was rationed with a seriousness usually reserved for international treaties.

Ronald ate like a person whose body was an inconvenience attached to his head.

Hilary ate like a person who intended to remain alive.

And then there were the newer habits—things that had crept into their lives over the last year or two without anyone officially inviting them.

Shoulders held themselves a touch straighter. Hands looked a little more used. Ronald's arms, for all his bookishness, had the lean definition of someone who had discovered that tree branches could be gymnasium equipment if you were stubborn enough. Hilary moved with the easy balance of a boy who had learned to run, climb, and fall without panic.

It was not vanity. It was not fashion.

It was a quiet belief—picked up from cheap printed pages that smelled of ink and excitement—that a person could not polish the mind while neglecting the body, not if he wanted calm, strength, and dignity. That the two were meant to be balanced. That greatness was not inherited; it was trained.

After breakfast, they walked to school together.

They did not walk in quite the same way. Hilary walked toward things—puddles, corners, dogs, and occasional opportunities for mild mischief. Ronald walked through things: streets, conversations, whole stretches of time, emerging on the other side with the faint sense that something important had happened, though he was not always certain what.

King Edward's School waited for them with the patience of an institution that had seen many boys come and go and had learned not to grow attached.

The morning began normally. Lessons. Chalk. Latin. The dull grinding hum of education. Nothing remarkable, nothing ominous.

Then, before midday, a small change occurred.

Not the sort of change that causes panic in the corridors—no shouting, no alarms, no windows broken. Merely the quiet announcement, delivered with the casualness of a man discussing the weather, that their usual teacher would be away for a time. "Family matters," someone said. Or "a sudden illness." Or some other polite explanation that meant: Do not ask.

In his place stood a substitute.

He was not theatrical. He was, in fact, painfully ordinary: clean collar, steady hands, mild voice, and eyes that seemed to rest on you only in passing.

Yet when the roll was called and Ronald's name was spoken aloud—clear enough, ordinary enough—the substitute paused for just a fraction too long.

And Ronald, who was good at noticing tiny wrongness in words and hidden patterns in sentences, felt something unpleasant and faint rise in him: the sense that those eyes were not passing over the room at all.

They were measuring it.

The substitute taught history that day—or something close to it. It was history braided with questions about duty and nations and "the character of peoples," the sort of thing that sounded harmless until you noticed how often it returned to the same corner of the room.

To Ronald.

The man asked Ronald questions more than once, in a manner that looked like interest to anyone not being watched. He drifted past Ronald's desk. He paused. He let his gaze fall on Ronald's notebook as if by accident.

Ronald's notes were not scandalous: dates, names, fragments of thought, a word or two written in a tidy hand that was almost—though not quite—too careful. There were also, tucked between the ordinary lines, the signs of a mind that collected languages greedily: Latin roots, Greek shapes, and—newest of all—a few German words the brothers had begun teaching themselves because they liked the sound of them, because they sounded brave, like something a knight might shout before stepping into darkness.

And there, in the margin—because margins were where Ronald's mind went when the world was being slow—was a drawing.

A helmet.

Spiked. Angular. The kind you did not see on English soldiers in storybooks. Not evil—just foreign, and therefore strange, and therefore impressive. It was simply an interesting shape to Ronald: a thing that belonged to the world of knights and machines.

A Pickelhaube, copied from the pages of the German Man comics he and Hilary had read until the spines bent.

The substitute noticed it and stopped.

"What is this?" he asked, lightly.

Ronald blinked. "A helmet, sir."

"A German helmet."

"It's only a drawing."

The man's voice remained mild. "And why draw a German helmet?"

Ronald, caught between honesty and instinct, made the smallest mistake a clever boy can make: he answered plainly.

"I saw it," he said. "In something I read."

The substitute's eyes did not harden. That would have been too obvious.

They simply became a little less human. A little more… official.

"I see," he said.

Then, after the smallest pause—quiet enough that only Ronald truly felt it—he added, colder than before, "Don't do it again."

And he wrote something down.

Ronald felt heat rise in his face, not from shame, but from the sudden unfairness of the coldness. Other students noticed too and did what students always do when a master turns sharp: they looked away, desperate not to become the next target.

When the bell finally released them, the air felt different. Not colder—only as if someone had opened a window to a room you had thought was private.

After-school Hilary found Ronald at the gate, and they walked home together the way they always did.

Except that both of them were quieter. There were no plans spoken of—no games, no jokes, no talk of friends. Only the shared feeling that something had shifted and neither of them knew why.

After a few minutes Hilary said, "We had a new master today."

Ronald looked at him. "So did we."

Hilary frowned. "He asked… odd questions."

Ronald's mouth tightened. "Yes."

They slowed.

Hilary glanced sideways, as if the street itself might be listening. "He asked if I'd ever read German things. And what I thought of Prince Oskar."

Ronald felt his stomach dip in a way that had nothing to do with hunger. "Mine looked at my notes."

Hilary's voice dropped. "Mine looked at mine too."

They walked a little faster then, though neither of them said it aloud. The city felt the same as it always did—smoky, busy, indifferent—yet suddenly it seemed full of places where eyes could hide.

And that was when they heard footsteps behind them.

Not the casual steps of a neighbor. Not the easy scuff of boys running home.

These footsteps were measured—too steady, too heavy, too sure of themselves.

A hand came down on Ronald's shoulder.

Another on Hilary's.

Not friendly hands.

The boys froze.

A man stood behind them—large and broad, close-cropped hair, a face that looked built for refusing arguments. His coat was plain, but it sat on him the way uniform sits on a soldier even without buttons. He did not smile. He did not introduce himself. He did not bother to pretend.

"Boys," he said, and his voice was low and rough, "we need to talk."

Ronald's heart hammered once—hard.

"Who are you?" he demanded.

The man's eyes did not answer. They measured.

They took in the boys the way a butcher takes in a carcass: the angle of the shoulders, the set of the jaw, the small hard fitness that did not belong—in the mind of an empire—to poor boarding-house schoolboys. His gaze lingered on Ronald's hands, on Hilary's stance, on the way neither of them quite collapsed into fear.

He stepped closer.

And the street suddenly felt too narrow.

"You'll call me sir," he said. "And you'll answer what you're asked."

Hilary tried to twist away. The man's grip tightened—not enough to bruise, not enough to count as an injury, just enough to make resistance feel childish and therefore humiliating.

Ronald's voice rose. "We've done nothing!"

"Not yet," the man replied.

It was said quietly, almost conversationally, but it landed like a verdict. As if he had already decided what kind of people they were going to become, and had come to cut that future out of them while they were still young enough to be easy.

He took their bags as if they were already his property.

Ronald lurched forward. "That's mine—!"

The man snapped his gaze up. "Quiet."

He dumped the contents against the brick wall with brisk contempt: notebooks, pencils, folded pages, scraps of copied vocabulary, and the unmistakable cheap print of comics—the bold ink lines, the heroic silhouettes, the promise of a world where strength and goodness were simple.

German words flashed in the margins.

A phrase here. A copied slogan there.

A childish attempt at a foreign grammar, written with the seriousness of boys who believed language could make them larger than their circumstances.

The man's jaw tightened.

"Playing at Germans, are we?" he muttered.

"We're not—" Hilary began.

The man leaned in close enough that Hilary could smell tobacco and cold air and something else—authority, the scent of a person who has never been told no.

"Listen carefully, you little rats."

Ronald flinched—not at the insult, but at how easily it was said. As if they weren't boys at all, just pests that had wandered into the wrong part of the world.

"You will keep your noses out of German matters," the man said. "You will stop filling your heads with foreign rubbish. You will stop writing foreign words in your books as if this is some grand adventure."

Ronald's throat tightened. "We'll tell the police."

The man's expression did not change.

"You'll do nothing," he said softly. "Because if you make noise, you'll discover how small you are."

He began selecting items with methodical contempt. Anything with German. Anything with drawings. Anything that looked like admiration. He slid them into his coat as if collecting evidence from a crime scene.

Hilary's voice cracked. "Those are ours!"

The man didn't even look at him. "Now they're mine."

"Who are you?" Ronald demanded again, trembling with rage and helplessness in equal measure.

The man paused, considering, as if deciding whether boys deserved names for their nightmares.

Then he said, almost pleasantly, "Someone who doesn't like surprises."

He stepped back. Released their shoulders. Turned away.

And then, as if it were merely advice from a stranger, he added:

"Behave. Stay English. Stay quiet. Or you'll learn what happens to boys who think they can belong to two worlds at once."

He walked off without hurry.

Ronald and Hilary did not move until he was gone.

Then, without speaking, they ran.

They ran the way rabbits run when the hawk has landed too close—fast, low, foolish with fear.

When they reached the boarding house, the front door was closed the way it always was, but the house itself felt… wrong.

A chair had been moved from its place, not far, just enough that the room looked like someone had tried to put it back and failed.

A drawer sat half-open.

The air held that peculiar smell of intrusion—dust disturbed, soap, cold outside air, and the invisible stain of чужая рука, a stranger's hand where it did not belong.

And the people of the house were gathered in the hall like a jury.

Not a formal jury with wigs and polite language—no. A boarding house could not afford that kind of dignity. This was the common jury of frightened adults who paid rent and did not want trouble near them.

Someone muttered as the brothers entered.

A woman's voice: "There they are."

A man, sharply: "I told you it'd come back on all of us."

Ronald slowed, dread pooling in his stomach. Hilary clutched his empty bag straps like he could still protect what had been taken.

Father Morgan stood near the sitting room, coat half-buttoned, face pale with anger. He looked as though he had been dragged out of peace mid-breath and forced to stand in the aftermath of a violation he had been unable to prevent.

His eyes went to their lighter bags at once.

"What did they take?" he asked.

Ronald swallowed. "Our books. Our notes. Anything German."

A ripple went through the hall—half outrage, half accusation.

"German?" someone repeated, as if it were a stain.

Another voice: "I said it. I said that name weren't right."

A woman with hard eyes looked from Ronald to Hilary. "What have you boys been doing?"

Hilary's face flushed. "Nothing!"

"Then why would the government come?" the woman snapped. "Why would they tear through rooms? Why would they frighten decent people?"

Because they can, Ronald thought. Because they want to. Because we're small.

But he did not say it. Boys learned quickly what happened when you accused grown-ups of cowardice.

Father Morgan's mouth tightened, not in shock—no. In recognition.

He looked past the faces in the hall, as if seeing through the walls to the machinery beyond. His voice, when it came, was controlled, but it had iron in it.

"This," he said, "is what it means to be watched in a nation that congratulates itself on fairness."

Hilary whispered, broken, "Why would they do this to us?"

Father Morgan cut him off gently, but without softness.

"Because you are convenient," he said. "Because you are poor. Because you are Catholic. Because you have a foreign name and clever minds and no one important to shout on your behalf."

He exhaled through his nose, the way a man does when he has swallowed rage too many times and learned it tastes familiar.

"They will not admit what they fear," he said. "So they will call it prudence. And they will call you boys, as if that makes you harmless."

The landlady shifted, uncomfortable. "Father, with respect… it's not about religion. It's about—about safety. We've got families here."

"Safety," Father Morgan repeated, and there was a bitter edge to it. "Yes. That word is always used when power wishes to hurt the small and still sleep at night."

Ronald stood very still.

Something in him—something that had been content yesterday to be a quiet mind in a quiet body—shifted.

Not into hatred, not yet.

Into attention.

Because he understood a lesson that did not belong to children:

That evil does not always arrive with fire and horns.

Sometimes it arrives with a clean collar, a polite substitute, and a hand on your shoulder in the street.

And it speaks to you as if you are already guilty of what you might one day become.

The next days made the lesson worse.

At school, whispers followed them like shadows.

Not loud ones. Not brave ones. The kind whispered behind hands, in stairwells, just out of earshot—so that you could never answer them directly.

"German boys."

"Spy boys."

"Heard the Navy was involved."

"My cousin says they're being watched."

Even friends—boys who had swung wooden swords beside them and laughed—began to drift away, eyes averted, smiles too quick, excuses too convenient.

It wasn't hatred.

It was fear.

Fear that trouble was contagious.

Fear that association was a kind of guilt.

Ronald and Hilary became, without explanation, dangerous to be seen with.

At the boarding house it was worse. Doors closed a little faster. Conversations stopped when they entered. Plates clinked with strained politeness. The brothers became something like smoke: always present, always unwelcome, always blamed for making the air uncomfortable.

So they did what small creatures do when a large world turns hostile.

They stayed together.

They kept their heads down.

And they went to the one place in Birmingham where silence was not a punishment but a rule.

The library.

There, among shelves and old paper, they tried to breathe again. They read anything that felt like light: old tales of courage, explorers, knights, heroes who endured long darkness and still remained good. They tried to remind themselves that their lives could still be shaped by something noble.

But even in the library they felt it.

The sense of being watched.

Not always a person—sometimes only the idea of eyes, the feeling of attention, like a cold finger sliding along the spine.

Ronald began to think of it as a creature.

A dog made of shadow, lying just behind them, jaws working slowly, patiently, eating away at them one day at a time, an unseen enemy from an unseen world.

Weeks passed.

The shadow did not leave.

And then, one afternoon, a letter came.

Not dramatic. Not sealed with wax. Not written in blood.

Just a plain official notice delivered with the dull indifference of bureaucracy:

A transfer was to be arranged soon.

They were to be moved to a smaller rural place—"for their own good," the words would say, because official cruelty always wears a polite mask.

And the worst part was not the move.

The worst part was the line that meant the world had decided to cut their only certainty in half.

They were not to be moved together.

They were to be separated.

Hilary read that line and went pale.

He looked like a boy suddenly told his brother was going to die.

"I don't want to go," he whispered. "Ronald—please—"

Ronald's hands shook.

Not with fear.

With fury so helpless it tasted like poison.

What could a fifteen-year-old boy do against paperwork?

Against men who did not introduce themselves?

Against a nation that could simply decide you belonged somewhere else?

That night they did not sleep.

The next day, before anyone could stop them, they ran.

Not to school—and not far either—because they had no money, no plan, no secret refuge waiting beyond the city. They had no heroic road out of England, no ship ticket, no map with an X on it.

They ran to the only place that had ever felt like something close to safety.

The library.

They slipped inside with the careful urgency of hunted things and took seats at a table near the back, where the shelves rose high and close, where the light thinned into a kind of respectful hush. Here, words were allowed to breathe. Here, silence did not accuse.

Rain tapped against the tall windows. Somewhere, a clock ticked with infuriating calm.

Hilary sat with his hands clenched in his lap, knuckles white. His voice broke before he meant it to.

"What do we do?"

Ronald stared down at the grain of the table. His jaw was clenched so hard it ached. Thoughts crowded him—plans, arguments, languages, impossible futures—but none of them would stand still long enough to become words.

"I don't know," he said at last.

It was the first time in his life that the answer had truly been empty.

For the first time, the world felt larger than language.

And that was when a shadow fell across their table.

Not the shadow of a uniformed man.

Not the heavy presence of the dark hound that had followed them through corridors and streets.

This shadow was softer. Human. Almost gentle.

A voice said, lightly and with just enough amusement to sound kind:

"You look like boys in need of saving."

They looked up.

She stood there as if she belonged to a different story.

She was English, yes—but not the dull, frightened England of soot and whispers. She was light made into a person. Her hair was dark, thick, and glossy, falling in soft waves that caught what little brightness the day allowed. Her face had the clear, open beauty of someone who had not yet learned to fear the world—eyes bright, mouth quick to smile, posture easy and unafraid.

To Ronald, she was the most beautiful thing he had ever seen.

Not in the way portraits were beautiful, or actresses on posters—no. This was the beauty of arrival, of something good turning up when you have stopped believing it can.

Her eyes rested on him for half a second longer than necessary, and he felt heat rush to his face. She stepped closer, close enough that he caught the faint scent of clean rain and paper and something unnamable that made his heart stumble.

"My name's Edith," she said, smiling. "I'm eighteen. English. And—" she glanced between the brothers with quick intelligence, "—I believe we're all orphans here, so that saves us some explanations."

Hilary blinked. "How do you—?"

She waved a hand. "Details. Libraries are full of them."

She leaned forward then, lowering her voice, and Ronald's thoughts scattered like startled birds.

"I've been looking for you," she said. "Both of you."

Ronald swallowed. "Why?"

Edith's smile turned conspiratorial, almost playful. "Because," she said, "I've been invited on a rather grand adventure. And I was told not to go alone."

She drew a chair back and sat with them as if this were the most natural thing in the world.

"Picture this," she went on, eyes shining. "A journey across Europe. Trains. Cities. New languages. New skies. And at the end of it—" she leaned closer still, voice dropping to a whisper, "—a meeting with the most extraordinary man alive."

Ronald felt his breath catch.

Hilary whispered, "Who?"

Edith tilted her head, pretending to consider. "Tall. Powerful. Brilliant. Rich beyond sense. Builds machines that save lives. Writes books that teach people how not to die. Comics about heroes who lift the weak and fight monsters under the earth."

Ronald's heart began to pound.

"Do you mean—" he started.

"Prince Oskar of Germany?" Edith finished, eyes dancing.

She didn't say yes.

She didn't need to.

She smiled.

That was answer enough.

"He asked for us," she said lightly. "All three, by name. I've no idea why he'd want me—an ordinary girl—but I asked, and the people who invited me didn't deny it. They just smiled. Which is rather their way, I've learned."

Hilary's breath came quick. "The government—"

Edith waved that away too. "Oh, they won't stop us. Not this. Not with German papers and German protection." She leaned back, confidence settling around her like a cloak. "Besides, do you truly think anyone who tries will succeed?"

She placed her hand in the middle of the table.

"What do you say?" she asked brightly. "Do you want to join this little fellowship? There is a carriage waiting for us just a few streets away. A man and a woman—Germans—very polite, very serious, very terrifying in that calm way people are when they could break you in half and choose not to."

Hilary didn't hesitate. He placed his hand atop hers.

"Yes," he said at once. "Let's go."

Ronald hesitated.

"What about the government intelligence agents?" he asked quietly. "They're watching us."

Edith leaned in until only he could hear her.

"Don't worry, if we work together there is nothing we cannot achieve." she whispered. "Strength is not meant to wait. Nor courage. Nor friends." Her smile softened. "Besides… isn't everything Prince Oskar touches meant to make the world better? He chose us for a reason, and so we cannot hesitate now."

For a heartbeat, Ronald saw the road ahead split in two: one path shrinking, dimming, closing around him; the other opening into motion and light and impossible promise.

He set his hand atop theirs.

"All right," he said. "Let's do it."

They did not leave through the front.

They slipped out the back, into an alley slick with rain, and ran.

Rain soaked their coats. Their breath burned. They crossed streets without looking back, hearts pounding in rhythm with their feet.

At the end of the alley waited the carriage.

It was elegant. Dark. Almost unreal against the wet stone.

The door opened.

Edith climbed in first, skirts gathered, eyes shining. Hilary followed without pause. Ronald hesitated only a moment longer—then stepped in after his brother.

Inside sat two figures who did not feel entirely human, not to his young eyes at least.

A man and a woman, tall, fair-haired, blue-eyed—postures perfect, movements precise, bodies shaped by training rather than chance. They looked like something out of legend: not armored, not glowing, but finished, as if each motion had been chosen and perfected.

Elves, Ronald thought absurdly.

They smiled.

"Welcome," the man said, his English crisp with a German edge. "You are safe now."

The carriage lurched forward.

Rain streaked the windows.

The man produced a thick document, covered in dense writing.

"Sign here," he said pleasantly. "And here. This makes everything official."

Ronald stared at the paper.

It looked very much like the beginning of a contract.

And like Bilbo Baggins would do in the future—though Ronald did not yet know that name—he picked up the pen.

The adventure had begun.

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