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Chapter 67 - Postscript volume 3/4

"You expected a new chapter but it was I, a postscript chapter!"

First of all, the 4th volume isn't finished yet. There are some more chapters before the MC can finally get his ass out of The Demon Continent for good. But those chapters will decide which direction this story is heading to so I will take my extra time to polish and reconsider it.

Just like before, I will take my break for a while. But it will be more than just a month this time since I have many other things to handle (life stuffs, you know?). And the Asura's shit is going fast, that's why I need to review everything again to make them less boring so you guys won't call it a waste of time (˶˃𐃷˂˶).

I know the decision to making too many OCs stuff would be unpopular for some readers. Especially giving Atur the Naruto Shippuden treatment out of the blue like that. It ruined the theme of being a hard work and beat geniuses and stuff right? Define destiny right? But hey, I promise you it's very important for the grand scheme of things. I'm not finding a way to 'buff' him to look good or anything. What I think matter most in a story is how a character developed in their belief and personality after all. I do believe that I did quite a good job on that aspect up to this point. And I promise you, nothing is pointless even the most pointless thing in this story (maybe some...). If you believe me, please stay tune for what I'm cooking next alright? Cool.

A little bit of info.

In the original plan, Atur supposed to get out of the labyrinth alone before meeting Lan Xin and eventually meet another Demon King (not directly and maybe an OC one maybe). In this direction, he would have to join in a some kind of fighting tournament to free himself and the others from an eternal game of gladiators. At the end, I found it kind of cheesy and weird for this world so I crapped the idea.

And in another direction, he supposed to teleported to the Strife Zone and yadayada fight for a underdog kingdom, save his family and stuffs. I think many ffs go with this direction already so I decide to stay away with it (sorry Philip and Hilda).

The only idea I think it's kinda fun is the MC teleported to Begaritt and meet Sandor (like Eris currently is in this ff). I think letting him train under the North God would be fun but in the end, I choose something completely new instead. Since my plan for this fic is to fucking around and find out if my OCs shits could work or not. Some of you may agree, some not, I understand it just fine. But this is the decision I made and I think it's the best for the whole scheme of things so please trust the progress. Everything would make sense at some point.

And yeah I also has a plan for Atur to teleported directly to Fort Necross and became Atofe's guard and I think you know why I didn't go with that already.

Btw if you have your time, please consider leaving a review (if you haven't already). Even good or bad, I won't mind. Some of you may noticed that the number of reviews have been up and down lately because I did delete some of it because it may seem like spam, all of them is from the same reader (sorry darkling). And about the bad review? I never delete those but I did ask nicely the one who give it to me to reconsider it (and seem like they actually deleted it lmao). So if you are going to give me a bad review, please go ahead if you really think this story is bad. It's your right to do so if I made you mad, I don't mind as long as it's valid.

Anyway, lemme give my thank to all of my readers up to this point. Especially those who are actively giving me comments, it's a great tool for me to understand your opinions about the story.

I'm actually curious how many readers actually read this story. If you can, please leave a comment so I know you are there. <3

Good bye and see you all again somewhere in the future.

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