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Chapter 196 - The Moon Shudders. Bai Yan and the Sage Speak Privately.

Chūnin Exam Arena --- Konoha

The scroll opened its next section.

A reward that had been building in the background --- a supplemental evaluation for the Jinchūriki Ranking that the scroll had been holding back --- was finally distributed.

To Gaara.

A second item on top of his Shukaku Synchronization Manual.

It was large.

The reward beam was wider than any previous one.

The golden light hit Suna so brightly that people in Konoha could see the glow on the horizon, even in daylight.

And that was when it happened.

The moon shuddered.

Not metaphorically.

Not the way things seem to shudder in dramatic moments.

The actual moon.

In the actual sky.

A visible tremor moved across its surface the way a ripple moves across still water when something large drops into it from very far away.

People saw it.

In the arena.

In every village watching the scroll's projection.

In every corner of the living world.

Complete silence.

Then several things happened at once:

"WHAT WAS THAT?!" --- Kiba.

"...Everyone look at the moon." --- Shikamaru, very quietly.

"I see it." --- Sasuke, already on his feet.

"Honey," --- Ayame, grabbing Bai Yan's arm.

Group Chat:

[First Hokage Hashirama Senju: Did anyone else just see the moon shake?!]

[Second Hokage Tobirama Senju: Yes. Everyone saw it. It wasn't an illusion.]

[Uchiha Madara: ...]

[Third Tsuchikage Ōnoki: Sage-dono. Is this the resonance you warned us about?]

[Sage of Six Paths: ...]

[Sage of Six Paths: Yes.]

[Sage of Six Paths: That was larger than any previous spike.]

[Fourth Raikage A: How much larger?]

A pause.

[Sage of Six Paths: Enough that I cannot tell you with confidence how long the seal holds.]

[Fourth Raikage A: ...]

[Third Tsuchikage Ōnoki: ...]

[First Hokage Hashirama Senju: ...Madara.]

[Uchiha Madara: I see it, Hashirama.]

[First Hokage Hashirama Senju: If she gets out---]

[Uchiha Madara: I know.]

[First Hokage Hashirama Senju: Your whole plan---]

[Uchiha Madara: I said I know.]

Moon Temple --- Ōtsutsuki Toneri

The instruments in the temple were screaming.

Not literally.

They didn't make sound.

But their readings were at levels Toneri had never seen in his lifetime.

Levels that, according to the old texts, corresponded to the seal approaching a specific threshold.

He'd been watching the scroll all day from the Moon Temple's observation window.

He'd been watching Naruto Uzumaki specifically.

He'd made a decision about forty minutes ago and had been working up to acting on it.

The moon's tremor had just moved his timeline forward considerably.

He sat at the communication altar --- ancient, unused for decades, built by his ancestors for emergencies --- and began the activation sequence.

He was going to need to talk to someone in the living world.

He was going to need to talk to someone very specific.

He didn't yet know how to reach Bai Yan directly.

He was going to figure it out.

Chūnin Exam Arena --- Row Seven

Bai Yan felt the tremor before he saw it.

The Observer's Anchor pulsed once --- sharp and clear, like a bell struck close to his ear --- and in the blurry future-sight it gave him, something resolved into sudden focus.

Not the Kaguya seal breaking.

Not yet.

But a path.

A clear one.

Leading somewhere he hadn't expected.

He stood up.

Ayame had already grabbed his arm.

"Bai Yan."

"I know."

"The moon just---"

"I know."

"What do we do?"

He looked at her.

At the arena around them.

At Naruto, who had stood up and was scanning the sky with that flat focused expression he got when something was actually serious.

"I need to talk to the Sage," he said.

"Can you do that?"

"I don't know." He held up the Observer's Anchor. "But I think this can."

He'd been using the Anchor passively since it was distributed --- letting it show him glimpses, letting the resonance wash over him, staying in observer mode.

He'd told Ayame he was going to stop observing.

Time to find out if he meant it.

He closed his hand around the Anchor.

He thought very deliberately about what he wanted.

Show me the Sage.

The Anchor pulsed.

And in the next instant---

The noise of the arena fell away.

Somewhere Between

It wasn't the Pure Land.

It wasn't the living world.

It was the space the Sage occupied when he wasn't quite either.

Warm.

Lit from no particular direction.

Quiet in the way that real quiet was quiet, not the held-breath quiet of people trying not to make noise.

The Sage of Six Paths was already there.

He looked, as always, like someone who had been waiting for a very long time and had made peace with the waiting.

"Bai Yan," he said.

"Sage-dono," Bai Yan said.

The Sage looked at him.

At the Observer's Anchor in his hand.

"You figured out how to use it," he said.

"Part of it." A pause. "I don't know how long this connection holds."

"Then we'll be efficient." The Sage gestured at nothing in particular. "Sit if you'd like. Or stand. I have no preference."

Bai Yan stood.

"The moon," he said.

"Yes."

"The resonance is accelerating."

"Yes."

"You knew this would happen when the scroll first appeared."

"I suspected." The Sage's face was composed in the way of very old people who have long since decided that anxiety is not a useful response to knowledge. "The scroll's power is not from this world. When rewards of that magnitude are distributed into a world that is already saturated with chakra --- the resonance was always going to build."

"But you didn't stop it."

"I couldn't stop it. I told you that at the beginning. The scroll repelled me." He looked at Bai Yan. "And I didn't try very hard to stop it."

"Why?"

"Because the alternative was worse." The Sage was quiet for a moment. "Without the scroll --- without the changes it's been making --- the Fourth Great Ninja War unfolds as it was always going to unfold. Madara is resurrected. The Infinite Tsukuyomi activates. My mother is freed anyway."

"So the scroll's resonance might release Kaguya faster," Bai Yan said slowly, "but it's also been building the people who need to face her."

"Yes. That is the wager."

Bai Yan looked at the Sage.

"That's an enormous wager."

"Yes."

"On twelve-year-olds."

"On twelve-year-olds who have now received training, seals, synchronization tokens, and the knowledge of what's coming." The Sage held his gaze. "Who have had the chance to know their parents. Who have been told the truth about themselves instead of discovering it in the worst possible circumstances."

Bai Yan was quiet.

"The original story," he said slowly, "Naruto finds out about his parents in the middle of a battle while the Nine-Tails is trying to consume him."

"Yes."

"Now he found out in an arena with his friends around him, watched by the entire world, with an hour to talk to his father."

"Yes."

Bai Yan turned that over.

"That's a different person," he said. "Same boy. But carrying it differently."

"Yes." The Sage looked at him steadily. "That's the wager. The scroll doesn't just give rewards. It gives context. It gives people a chance to know why they matter before they're asked to prove it."

"And Kaguya?"

"Kaguya's seal will hold longer than it should have, all things being equal. The rewards have been building the resonance, yes. But they've also been building the people." He paused. "Whether the people are ready before the seal breaks --- that is the part I cannot predict."

Bai Yan looked at the Anchor in his hand.

At the blurry futures it showed him.

More paths than the original story ever had.

More chances for both outcomes.

"What do you need from me?" he asked.

The Sage looked at him for a long moment.

"You have foreknowledge," he said. "Partial, now, because the story has diverged. But more than anyone else."

"Yes."

"And you have power that operates outside this world's laws."

"Yes."

"And you chose to spend today eating chestnuts."

"...Yes."

"That was not the wrong choice," the Sage said. "The scroll gave people what they needed. You didn't interfere. You let it work." He paused. "But the scroll is almost finished."

Bai Yan went still.

"Almost?"

"One section remains." The Sage's eyes were very calm. "After it opens, the scroll closes. It won't appear again." A beat. "Whatever the last section is --- it is the scroll's final purpose. Everything before it was preparation."

"You don't know what it is?"

"No." For the first time since Bai Yan had known him, the Sage sounded genuinely uncertain. "The scroll is not mine. I cannot read it ahead of time." He looked at Bai Yan. "Can you?"

Bai Yan raised the Observer's Anchor.

Focused.

Tried to see the last section.

The title.

Just the title.

The Anchor pulsed.

Strained.

Showed him---

Six words.

He saw six words.

He stood with them for a moment.

"Well," he said.

"What is it?" the Sage asked.

"It's---" He stopped. "It's not what I expected."

"Is it dangerous?"

Bai Yan thought about the six words.

"No," he said. "I don't think so." A pause. "I think it's the point."

"Of today?"

"Of all of it." He looked at the Sage. "Of the scroll. Of everything it's been doing."

The Sage was quiet.

"Prepare the people close to you," the Sage said finally. "Not to fight. Just to receive." He paused. "And Bai Yan."

"Mm."

"Thank you. For showing up in the middle of it instead of watching from the edge."

Bai Yan looked at him.

"My wife told me to," he said.

The Sage smiled.

A genuine one.

"Wise woman," he said.

"Yes," Bai Yan agreed. "She is."

The connection closed.

Chūnin Exam Arena --- Row Seven

Bai Yan came back to himself.

The arena noise rushed back in.

Ayame was watching him with both hands around his arm.

"Well?" she said.

He took a breath.

"One section left," he said.

"And?"

"And I saw the title."

"What is it?"

He looked at the scroll.

At the last blank section, still dark, still waiting.

"I'll tell you when it appears," he said. "You need to see it yourself."

She looked at him.

"Is it good or bad?"

He thought about six words.

"...It's both," he said. "At the same time."

She held onto his arm.

They watched the scroll together.

Group Chat:

[Naruto Uzumaki: Old man Sage! What do we do about the moon?!]

[Sage of Six Paths: Train. Grow. Trust each other.]

[Naruto Uzumaki: That's it?]

[Sage of Six Paths: That is everything.]

[Naruto Uzumaki: ...Okay. Yeah. Okay.]

[Sage of Six Paths: You're not worried?]

[Naruto Uzumaki: I'm a little worried. But I'm also full of onigiri and my dad just talked to me for an hour so I'm feeling pretty good overall.]

[Sage of Six Paths: ...]

[Sage of Six Paths: Asura's reincarnation.]

[Naruto Uzumaki: That's me!]

[Sage of Six Paths: Yes. I noticed.]

Pure Land

Madara had been very quiet since the moon trembled.

Izuna was watching him.

"Nii-san," he said carefully.

"Mm."

"The moon."

"I know."

"If Kaguya gets out---"

"I know, Izuna."

Madara had spent years planning the Fourth Great Ninja War.

Had spent decades before that building toward it.

The Moon's Eye Plan.

The Infinite Tsukuyomi.

The world remade into a dream where no one lost anyone.

He'd built the entire architecture of it on one assumption:

That no force would interfere with his plan.

He looked at the moon.

At the tremor still fading from its surface.

Kaguya had always been the reason the Moon's Eye Plan led to catastrophe in the original story.

She was the reason Madara's war ended with him being used as a tool rather than being the architect.

He'd known that, in the abstract.

He'd known she was sealed.

He'd assumed she would stay sealed.

The scroll had made the resonance worse.

But the scroll had also put the knowledge of Kaguya into the hands of everyone watching.

Including him.

For the first time in a very long time---

Madara was thinking instead of plotting.

[Uchiha Madara: Hashirama.]

[First Hokage Hashirama Senju: Yeah.]

[Uchiha Madara: If my plan results in my mother being freed---]

[First Hokage Hashirama Senju: She's not your mother, Madara.]

[Uchiha Madara: The Sage's mother. She's not--- I know that. Figure of speech.]

[Uchiha Madara: If my plan results in her being freed.]

[First Hokage Hashirama Senju: Then your plan fails.]

[Uchiha Madara: ...Yes.]

A pause so long that several other chat members wondered if Madara had disconnected.

[Uchiha Madara: I need to think.]

[First Hokage Hashirama Senju: Take your time.]

[Uchiha Madara: Don't be smug about it.]

[First Hokage Hashirama Senju: I'm not being smug.]

[Uchiha Madara: Your last message sounded smug.]

[First Hokage Hashirama Senju: It said "take your time."]

[Uchiha Madara: The way you said it was smug.]

[First Hokage Hashirama Senju: I don't know how text sounds smug---]

[Uchiha Madara: I've known you for eighty years. I know when you're being smug.]

[First Hokage Hashirama Senju: ...Okay I was a little smug.]

[Uchiha Madara: Thank you for admitting it.]

[First Hokage Hashirama Senju: You're welcome.]

[Uchiha Madara: I still need to think.]

[First Hokage Hashirama Senju: I know. I'll be here.]

[Uchiha Madara: ...I know.]

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