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Chapter 13 - Chapter 13 – Diomedes, Ariston, Patroclus

Diomedes, Son of Tydeus

The right flank of the Greek line trembled under the Trojan tide. Dust churned like smoke from a forge, mingling with the acrid tang of blood.

Amid the chaos rode Diomedes, son of Tydeus, a storm bound in bronze and fury. His chariot wheels gouged furrows into mud slick with rain and blood, mirroring the paths of death he carved.

His banner, crimson and gold of Argos, lashed violently behind him. The spears in his hands flickered like forked lightning — Athena's blessing humming through the steel.

Every sweep of his blade sent a Trojan crashing into the earth. Every thrust of his spear shattered shields and skulls alike. Three Trojans fell before Diomedes even spoke.

"You came for our ships?" he snarled, eyes blazing, voice cutting through the clamor.

"Then drown in the sea you chased!"

He drove the chariot forward, iron-shod wheels slicing through sand and mud. A Dardanian captain, bronze breastplate dented from prior blows, stepped forward. Diomedes' spear darted, catching the man by the throat. He slammed him into the ground with a sickening crack, the armor buckling beneath Diomedes' relentless strength.

For a heartbeat, he savored the exhilaration of war's early days — when gods whispered his name and he seemed untouchable. The air itself vibrated around him, bending to the rhythm of his rage. Then, a gust of unnatural wind swept the field, tossing dust and ash like a signal from Olympus.

Then, as if the world sensed his hubris, the ground shuddered beneath three thundering charges of Ares' champions.

Deiphobus, son of Priam, emerged, face shadowed beneath helm, flanked by Aeneas, spears gleaming like molten bronze, and Sarpedon, Lycian king, his voice rolling like distant thunder. Three fronts. One mortal.

"You'll fall today, Argive," Sarpedon growled, his blade catching the morning light.

"We'll see who buries whom," Diomedes spat, tightening his grip.

The first charge smashed into him. The chariot shuddered, sand and mud flying in shards. Diomedes ducked beneath a heavy spear, letting it slash past his shoulder. He countered, driving his spear into Deiphobus' midsection, twisting the shaft to force him back.

"Not today," he growled.

Sarpedon advanced from the left, twin swords flashing, crimson streaks marking his path. Diomedes pivoted the chariot; a wheel crushed a Trojan foot, his scream swallowed by the roar of combat.

Aeneas pressed relentlessly — spear after spear probing gaps in Diomedes' guard. The Greek twisted, leapt, ducked. The chariot became an extension of his body, a whirlwind of bronze, blood, and steel. Athena's subtle presence guided his hands, a whisper of movement only he could sense.

"Come on, then!" he shouted, voice hoarse but steady, eyes ablaze.

"Bring your gods if they'll save you!"

With a final swing, he ripped a Trojan commander from his horse, smashing him into the ground. Blood sprayed, mingling with mud. For a fleeting moment, it seemed he could hold — alone against three.

Then a movement at the corner of his eye — a shadow slicing through the chaos. Calm. Precise. Impossible to ignore.

A figure detached from the Greek line, spear poised, every step measured. Ariston.

The shadow moved like a whisper through battle, weaving between Trojans, striking with lethal efficiency. With each swing, Diomedes saw the tide bend, Trojans faltering enough for the Greek line to breathe.

"About time you joined the dance," Diomedes muttered, striking again at Sarpedon, sending the Lycian staggering.

The world condensed to steel, cries, and the rhythmic heartbeat of war. Three fronts pressed, yet now the Greeks carried a spark — a fire reborn by Ariston's presence. Diomedes roared, driving his chariot forward. Each blow, thrust, fallen Trojan felt like reclamation. The shadow of hope — man among men — had turned despair into fury.

The clash was far from over, but for the first time, the Greeks dared hope.

Few hours Before , Ariston at the Ramparts

The rampart glowed red in firelight, a silhouette of men carved into eternity. Smoke clawed at the sky, mingling with sparks from the burning ship, thickening air with copper and ash. Every cry, clash of bronze pressed against Ariston's skull like the hammer of a relentless god.

A wave of Trojans surged, shields flashing, spears jutting. A man fell beside him, chest impaled, eyes wide, metallic blood scent sharp. Another screamed, limbs twisting.

Ariston gritted his teeth. No time for hesitation. A spear struck from the right — he parried, instinct pure and brutal. Then, almost imperceptibly, the air shimmered, subtle warmth on his back — a god's hand whispering protection.

He spun, raising the rim of his shield, stepping into another blow's arc. Parry, twist, and counter— rhythm flowing seamlessly: Hector's measured block, Ajax's defiant thrust, Diomedes' precision. Each merged with his sinew, guided invisibly by divine presence.

His men staggered, eyes wide, as Ariston surged forward. Natural, yet impossible — not taught, not learned, but recalled. Every strike and counter flowed through him, unseen by mortals.

"Push!" he roared.

"Push, by the gods! Drive them back!"

The Greek line obeyed. Shields locked, spears stabbing, men moving as one. The rampart trembled underweight and fury, yet they held.

A chariot burst through smoke, horses screaming, driver leaning low with spear aimed at Ariston's heart. He sidestepped, caught the shaft, and wrenched it down, flipping the man clean from the cart. Horses crashed, scattering men, yet he leapt onto the fallen chariot, slamming his shield down until the driver's skull cracked.

"Hold the right!" he shouted.

"Kleon — with me!"

Every clash fed the next. Each swing deepened the rhythm — Hector's calm, Ajax's force, Diomedes' strike — alive in his blood, subtly guided by gods. Step, thrust, parry — flowing naturally, weighty, masterful.

The Trojans faltered. Burning ship spilled crimson light across the beach, silhouettes moving as one, marked by fear and courage. Ariston drove forward, striking, shouting, dragging wounded back with one arm, throwing javelins with the other.

The horn rose again — savage and unrelenting. Lycian archers, Dardanians, men under Hector surged like a tide. Ariston's pulse slowed, mind narrowing. Every strike precise, perfect, yet entirely his own. He moved through the enemy like a force of nature, aware of line behind him, men to protect.

"Back to the rampart!" he barked.

"Form a wedge! We hold here!"

Shields pressed, spears jutting like teeth of a living wall. Ariston took the point, spear-tip dark with blood, eyes blazing unnatural clarity.

The Trojans hit them. Screaming, raging, immense in skill, weight, fury. Greeks did not break.

For every inch lost, Ariston reclaimed two. Echoes of Hector, Ajax, Diomedes — absorbed and alive in him. How much him, how much divine guidance? Only he and the gods knew.

The rampart blazed, firelight painting warriors in molten red and gold. Men locked in eternity, moving as if time bent.

Ariston exhaled, drove forward again. Spear stabbed, shield rammed, movement seamless. The echoes alive in him, guiding, yet entirely himself — pulse, force, center of the storm.

For the first time in storm, unnatural calm: not fear, not despair, but certainty line would hold.

Patroclus, Son of Menoetius

The smoke reached even here — thick, black, bitter with tar. Patroclus stood on the rise above the Myrmidon camp, eyes fixed on the Greek ships, flames licking wood and sail. The roar of the sea was drowned beneath bronze clashing, men screaming, and the wail of horns.

Below, the rampart had faltered again. The Trojans pressed through, fire spreading from hull to hull like a sickness. Somewhere in that inferno, he thought he heard urgent cries rising above the clash.

"By the gods… they're dying," Patroclus whispered.

His hands trembled. "They'll burn before the sun falls."

Behind him, Achilles sat silent, polishing his father's armor. Each stroke deliberate, ritualistic, the bronze glowing molten in the firelight.

"Do you hear them?" Patroclus asked.

"They're calling for you. They'll be slaughtered."

Achilles didn't look up.

"They are not calling for me," he said, unnervingly calm.

"They call for the one the gods have chosen."

"Ariston?"

Achilles nodded once. "Let him save them if the Fates will it."

Patroclus' brow furrowed. "And if they don't?"

"Then Greece falls. And I will rise — but not yet."

Patroclus turned back toward the burning line. Flashes of bronze, glints of shields, men surging and falling in rhythm with firelight. Ariston was there. He could feel it — the unnatural stillness that clung to him, the calm that heralded impossible acts. Something invisible, subtle, pressed upon the air around him: a flicker of Athena's guidance, a trace of Apollo's favor.

"They'll reach us next," Patroclus said.

"You'd let them burn through the last line before moving?"

Achilles finally looked up. Pale eyes, sharp as dawn steel, cold and unyielding.

"I swore an oath, Patroclus. Agamemnon took Briseis. The gods took my honor. I'll not fight until the Trojans touch my ships."

Patroclus' jaw tightened. "And when they do?"

"Then I'll burn Troy with my own hands."

The silence stretched. Only the distant rhythm of Ariston's wedge slamming against the Trojan line carried, like a heartbeat pulsing through smoke and flame.

Patroclus stepped forward, fists clenching.

"Then let me lead the Myrmidons. They are restless, caged. If you will not save the Greeks, at least let me try."

Achilles studied him, still, the wind carrying smoke and salt across the rise.

"You'll take my armor," he said finally.

"They will see the son of Thetis ride again. That will be enough to turn their courage."

Patroclus blinked.

"Your armor? No — they'll think —"

"They'll think what I wish them to think."

Achilles rose, immense even in shadow. He held the armor between them, the bronze capturing the firelight like a small sun.

"But remember," he said, voice low, deliberate,

"you are not me. You go no farther than the ships. The god-chosen fights at the rampart. The Fates will see to him — and to you."

Patroclus bowed his head, heart hammering.

"I understand." He didn't. Not yet.

As he turned, Achilles called after him:

"When the Trojans touch my ships, tell Ariston — he was never meant to win. Only to remember."

Patroclus paused, eyes narrowing.

"What does that mean?"

But Achilles had already turned, gaze fixed on smoke and fire, on destiny itself slowly converging with the mortal world.

The wind carried the faint echo of war, and above it all, a name that would not be forgotten:

Ariston.

Back at the Rampart

Patroclus moved down the rise, the bronze armor heavy on his shoulders, the Myrmidons following in tight formation. The smoke stung his eyes, flames casting long, wavering shadows over the sand. Every step was a drumbeat of dread; every heartbeat a warning.

Below, the ramparts writhed under the Trojan assault. Ariston moved like a figure carved from the chaos itself. Shields clashed, men fell, yet he slid between enemies, spear a blur, voice cutting through the roar:

"Push! Hold the line! DRIVE THEM BACK!"

Patroclus' breath caught. This was no ordinary man. Even at this distance, he could feel it: the unnatural rhythm of someone who did not just fight — but remembered every motion of every hero he had ever seen. Every feint, parry, deadly strike flowed as though time itself obeyed him.

A flicker of divine favor brushed the air around him. Athena's hand shielded Ariston from a lethal blow just long enough for his momentum to continue.

The Myrmidons slowed at the base of the hill, hesitant. They had seen him, yes — but could they follow? Could any mortal keep pace with one so blessed?

Patroclus lifted his voice, steady and commanding:

"Forward! Follow me! The line will hold — but only if we stand together!"

The Myrmidons surged, armor clanging in unison. They were Achilles' men, bred for battle, yet here they were swept by the current of Ariston's fury, like reeds in a storm-driven river.

Ariston turned, catching sight of the new wave. A fleeting nod — acknowledgment, not command — then his gaze snapped back to the Trojans. His eyes, sharp and unblinking, measured every foe, anticipating movement before it even began.

A shaft of firelight glinted across his spear. He lunged, sidestepped, twisted — echoes of Ajax's block, Diomedes' thrust, Hector's stance — all mirrored in him now, guided subtly by divine favor.

Patroclus followed in awe, realizing what Achilles had meant: Ariston was not merely fighting; he was a conduit of divine guidance.

And still, the Trojans pressed, banners streaming, spears bristling, their screams a tide threatening to drown the Greeks.

Patroclus clenched the spear around the shaft of Achilles' armor.

"Keep them back," he murmured.

"Just… keep them back."

Step by step, he led the Myrmidons forward. Step by step, Ariston drove the Trojans back. Every clash of bronze, every scream, every flash of fire reflected in the smoke — the rhythm of war pulsed through both lines, god and mortal intertwined.

The wind carried the faintest hint of fate, whispering through smoke:

the god-chosen had arrived, and the Myrmidons had come to stand with him.

The tide of battle was about to change.

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