# Chapter 14: The Holy Maiden's Surrender
## Guest Manor - Three Days Later
Three days had passed since the confrontation with the Rakshasa God, and Spirit Hall existed in a state of barely controlled chaos.
Bibi Dong had secluded herself in her private chambers, claiming she needed time for "deep cultivation breakthrough." The excuse was accepted without question—no one dared disturb the Pope during such critical moments. What they didn't know was that she was actually processing two decades of suppressed emotions, learning to think with a clear mind for the first time in her adult life, and preparing herself for the terrifying prospect of facing her daughter.
The Elders walked on eggshells, hyperaware that a being of incomprehensible power was residing in their guest manor. Ghost Douluo had shared enough details of the Titan Giant Ape incident that everyone understood: this "Senior Luo Yan" was not to be provoked, questioned, or even approached without explicit invitation.
And in that guest manor, Hu Liena had barely left Luo Yan's side.
She'd taken it upon herself to attend to his every need—bringing meals, preparing tea, managing the servants, ensuring his comfort. To outside observers, it looked like the devoted service of Spirit Hall's Holy Maiden honoring a distinguished guest.
But those close enough to see her face told a different story. The way her eyes followed him with barely concealed worship. The way she blushed when he spoke her name. The way she found excuses to remain in his presence even when her duties technically called her elsewhere.
Hu Liena was falling, and she knew it. She just didn't know how to stop—or if she even wanted to.
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## Evening - The Private Garden
The guest manor's private garden was a masterpiece of landscaping—carefully cultivated spirit plants, a small pond with luminescent fish, stone benches arranged for meditation. Luo Yan sat on one such bench, apparently admiring the sunset, though his true attention was on the System notifications he'd been monitoring.
**[HU LIENA - DAILY INTERACTION BONUSES ACCUMULATING]**
**[CURRENT FAVORABILITY: 47 → 48 → 49]**
*Almost there,* he thought with satisfaction. *Just need the right push to break through to Level 2.*
He heard soft footsteps behind him and smiled without turning. "You're early today, Nana. I wasn't expecting you until after evening meditation."
Hu Liena emerged from behind a flowering spirit tree, carrying a tray with tea and light snacks. She wore a simple but elegant robe—deep purple that complemented her fox-like features, less formal than her usual Holy Maiden attire.
"Teacher is still in seclusion," she explained, setting the tray on a nearby stone table. "And I finished my cultivation practice early. I thought... you might want company."
"I always want your company," Luo Yan replied easily, patting the bench beside him.
The simple statement made her heart skip. She sat down, closer than strictly necessary, hyperaware of the warmth radiating from his body.
"You've been watching the sunset for an hour," Hu Liena observed. "Is it that different from sunsets in your world?"
"Not particularly," Luo Yan admitted. "But I'm not watching the sunset. I'm thinking about what comes next."
"Next?" Hu Liena tilted her head. "You mean with Teacher and her daughter?"
"That, yes. But also..." He turned to look at her directly. "What comes next for you and me."
Hu Liena's breath caught. "I... don't understand."
"Don't you?" Luo Yan smiled slightly. "Nana, I'm not blind. I see how you look at me. How you find excuses to stay near me. How you blush when I say your name."
Heat flooded her face. "I... that's just... I'm grateful for what you did for Teacher—"
"It's more than gratitude," he interrupted gently. "Isn't it?"
Hu Liena opened her mouth to deny it, then closed it again. What was the point of lying? He saw through everything anyway.
"Yes," she whispered finally. "It's more than gratitude. I don't know when it happened or how, but I... when I think about you leaving, returning to your world, never seeing you again..." Her voice broke slightly. "It terrifies me."
"Why does it terrify you?" Luo Yan asked, though he already knew the answer. He needed her to say it.
"Because I've never felt like this before," Hu Liena admitted, her foxy eyes glistening with unshed tears. "I was trained to use charm as a weapon. To seduce and manipulate. But with you, I'm the one who feels helpless. You're the one who has all the power, and I..." She took a shaky breath. "I want you to have it. I want to belong to you."
**[CRITICAL MOMENT DETECTED]**
**[HU LIENA - EMOTIONAL BREAKTHROUGH IMMINENT]**
Luo Yan reached out and cupped her face gently, his thumb brushing away a tear that had escaped. "You're sixteen years old, Nana. Still so young. Are you sure you understand what you're saying?"
"I'm the Holy Maiden of Spirit Hall," she replied, leaning into his touch. "I've killed, manipulated, and survived in ways most people never experience in their entire lives. Don't treat me like a child just because of my age."
"Fair point," Luo Yan conceded. "Then let me ask you directly: what do you want from me?"
Hu Liena's hands clenched in her lap. This was it. The moment of truth. She could retreat to safety, maintain the pretense that this was just respectful admiration of a powerful senior.
Or she could be honest.
"I want..." She took a deep breath. "I want to be yours. Completely. I don't know what that means exactly, or what you want from me. But I know that when I'm near you, I feel safe. Protected. Seen in ways no one else has ever seen me. And I know that I'd rather be your servant, your companion, anything you'd allow, than be someone else's queen."
The words hung in the air between them, absolute and irreversible.
Luo Yan studied her for a long moment, reading the sincerity in her eyes, the vulnerability in her posture. This wasn't the trained seductress speaking. This was the real Hu Liena—young, lonely, desperate for genuine connection with someone who saw past her masks.
"You don't need to be my servant," he said finally. "I have enough people who fear me and obey because they have no choice. What I want..." He pulled her closer, until she was leaning against his chest. "What I want is someone who chooses to be with me. Who gives themselves freely, not out of fear or obligation, but because they genuinely want to."
Hu Liena's eyes widened. "You... want me?"
"Why wouldn't I?" Luo Yan smiled. "You're beautiful, talented, intelligent, and loyal to those you care about. You have a good heart beneath all the training and masks. Yes, Nana. I want you."
**[HU LIENA - FAVORABILITY INCREASED]**
**[CURRENT FAVORABILITY: 49 → 52]**
**[LEVEL 2 ACHIEVED: CLOSE BOND]**
**[REWARDS UNLOCKED:]**
**[+200 System Points]**
**[+10% Cultivation Speed Boost (Permanent, Cumulative)]**
**[Basic Bond Technique Activated: Emotional Sensing]**
**[HOST CAN NOW SENSE HU LIENA'S EMOTIONAL STATE WITHIN SAME UNIVERSE]**
**[CURRENT EMOTIONAL STATE: OVERWHELMING JOY, RELIEF, DEVOTION]**
Through the new bond, Luo Yan felt the tsunami of emotion crashing through her—joy so intense it bordered on pain, relief that she hadn't been rejected, and beneath it all, a fierce, possessive devotion that promised she would burn the world for him if asked.
"Then I'm yours," Hu Liena whispered, looking up at him with eyes that held nothing back. "From this moment forward. Whatever you ask of me, wherever you need me to go, whatever you need me to be—I'm yours."
"Be careful making promises like that," Luo Yan warned, though his tone was warm. "I might actually hold you to them."
"I hope you do," she replied with fierce sincerity.
Luo Yan laughed softly and pressed a kiss to her forehead—gentle, almost chaste, but it sent electricity racing through her body. "You're going to be trouble, aren't you?"
"Probably," Hu Liena admitted, snuggling closer to him with shameless contentment. "But I'm your trouble now."
They sat like that as the sun finished setting, painting the sky in shades of purple and gold. Hu Liena felt like she was floating, her heart so full it might burst. She'd found something she hadn't even known she was searching for—someone who saw all of her, the good and the manipulative, the strong and the vulnerable, and wanted her anyway.
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## Later That Night - Hu Liena's Chambers
Hu Liena floated through her evening routine in a daze. Her roommates—fellow elite students—noticed immediately.
"Nana, what's wrong with you?" asked Xie Yue, her adopted brother, studying her with concern. "You've been smiling at nothing for an hour."
"Nothing's wrong," Hu Liena replied dreamily. "Everything is perfect."
Xie Yue exchanged a worried glance with Yan. They'd both noticed Hu Liena's increasing attachment to the mysterious Senior, but this was different. This was the look of someone completely, hopelessly smitten.
"Nana," Xie Yue said carefully. "That Senior... he's dangerous. Powerful beyond anything we understand. Are you sure getting close to him is wise?"
"Wisdom has nothing to do with it," Hu Liena replied, her smile widening. "And yes, he's dangerous. But not to me. Never to me."
"How can you be so sure?"
"Because he could have taken anything he wanted from me by force," Hu Liena said simply. "He could have commanded me like he commanded that god. Instead, he gave me a choice. He wanted me to choose him freely. That's how I know."
Xie Yue looked like he wanted to argue further, but Yan placed a hand on his arm, shaking his head. They both recognized the futility. Hu Liena had made her decision, and nothing they said would change it.
After her roommates left, Hu Liena lay in her bed, replaying every moment in the garden. The way Luo Yan had touched her face. The words he'd spoken. The promise implicit in his acceptance of her devotion.
*I'm his,* she thought, hugging herself with giddy happiness. *Completely, utterly his. And I've never been happier.*
Through the emotional bond they now shared, Luo Yan felt her joy and satisfaction. He smiled in the darkness of his own chambers, pleased with the progress.
*Two down in Douluo Dalu,* he thought. *Qian Renxue at Perfect Harmony. Hu Liena at Close Bond. And Bibi Dong making excellent progress at 38 favorability.*
*Once I arrange the mother-daughter reunion and help them reconcile, Bibi Dong will jump to Deep Connection easily. Then I'll have three women from this universe.*
*Not bad for a month's work.*
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## Meanwhile - Bibi Dong's Private Chambers
Bibi Dong sat at her desk, staring at a letter she'd written and rewritten a dozen times. Each version tried to find the right words to express two decades of complicated emotions to a daughter she'd failed in every way that mattered.
*Dear Renxue,*
*I don't know how to begin this. I don't know if there are words that can possibly convey what I need to say. But Luo Yan told me you know the truth now—about what happened, about why I couldn't be the mother you deserved—and if there's even a chance you might understand, I have to try.*
*For twenty years, I looked at you and saw him. Saw the monster who destroyed me. And I hated myself for it because I knew—I always knew—that you were innocent. You didn't choose to be born. You didn't choose who your father was. But the pain was too deep, and the Rakshasa God made it worse, amplifying every negative emotion until I couldn't separate what I actually felt from what the corruption was forcing me to feel.*
*Luo Yan freed me from that corruption. For the first time in two decades, I can think clearly. And what I think about most is all the moments I missed with you. All the times you reached for me and I pulled away. All the love I should have given you but couldn't.*
*I know I don't deserve your forgiveness. I know that nothing I say can undo the damage I've caused. But if you're willing to meet with me—to try, even just once, to see if we can build something real—I promise I'll spend the rest of my life trying to be the mother I should have been from the beginning.*
*Your mother,*
*Bibi Dong*
She stared at the letter for a long moment, then carefully folded it and sealed it with her personal wax seal. Tomorrow, she would give it to Luo Yan and ask him to arrange the meeting.
For the first time in twenty years, she felt hope.
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## Guest Manor - Late Night
Luo Yan stood on his balcony, surveying Spirit City's night lights while reviewing his progress through the System interface.
**[CURRENT HAREM STATUS - DOULUO DALU UNIVERSE]**
**QIAN RENXUE**
- Favorability: 100 (Perfect Harmony)
- Status: First Harem Member, Eternal Bond Established
- Cultivation Boost: +50% (Active)
- Special Abilities: Seraphim's Blessing, Soul Resonance
- Location: Heaven Dou Empire (Crown Prince Xue Qinghe)
**HU LIENA**
- Favorability: 52 (Close Bond - Level 2)
- Status: Devoted Follower, Emotional Bond Active
- Cultivation Boost: +10% (Active)
- Location: Spirit Hall
- Progress: Excellent. Ready for deeper relationship development.
**BIBI DONG**
- Favorability: 38 (Interested and Grateful)
- Status: Freed from Corruption, Processing Emotions
- Potential: Very High (Mother-Daughter Reconciliation Will Boost Significantly)
- Location: Spirit Hall
- Next Step: Arrange meeting with Qian Renxue
**[TOTAL CULTIVATION SPEED MODIFIER: +60% (BASE)]**
**[ADDITIONAL MODIFIER WHEN IN DOULUO DALU: +25% (CROSS-UNIVERSAL RESONANCE)]**
**[EFFECTIVE CULTIVATION SPEED IN DOULUO DALU: +85%]**
**[SYSTEM POINTS: 6,450]**
**[ACHIEVEMENT PROGRESS: 2/? PERFECT HARMONY BONDS ESTABLISHED]**
Luo Yan smiled with satisfaction. Everything was proceeding according to plan. Better than plan, actually. Hu Liena's devotion had developed faster than expected, and Bibi Dong's emotional breakthrough meant she would likely reach Deep Connection (Level 3) within weeks rather than months.
*Three more days,* he decided. *Give Bibi Dong three more days to prepare herself emotionally. Then I'll arrange the meeting between mother and daughter. That reconciliation will push Bibi Dong's favorability over 70 easily, maybe even to 90 if it goes well.*
*And once both mother and daughter are secured at high levels, I can move to the next universe. Battle Through the Heavens, perhaps. Queen Medusa should be approaching her transformation crisis soon. Perfect timing for a mysterious savior to appear.*
He felt a pulse through the Heart's Dominion bond—Qian Renxue, reaching out from Heaven Dou Empire. Not words, just emotion. Love. Trust. Anticipation for when they'd see each other again.
He sent back his own emotional response—reassurance, affection, and the promise that he'd bring her mother to meet her very soon.
Through the newer, weaker bond with Hu Liena, he felt her finally drifting off to sleep, her last waking thoughts completely focused on him.
*Two hearts bound to me in this universe,* he thought. *Soon to be three. And then the conquest continues.*
*One universe at a time. One heroine at a time. Building the harem that will make me invincible across infinite realities.*
The night deepened over Spirit City, and Luo Yan stood silently on his balcony, a god among mortals, weaving plans that would reshape this world and countless others.
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To be continue.