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Chapter 249 - Chapter 97

Chapter 97: The Uncharted Archive

​The Bureau's map was a masterpiece of 100% certainty, but at 01:00 Cycles of Volume 2, the ink began to lie. In the center of the Lobby, the Giant Silver Compass didn't spin; it locked its needle toward a solid mahogany wall behind the "Human Trajectories" desk—a wall that, according to every blueprint Ao Bing had ever drawn, led to a structural void.

​"Commissioner!" Assistant Yue buzzed, her new 3D-audio voice sounding like a cello in a cathedral. "THE. COMPASS. IS. TUNED. TO. 'RELICT. NARRATIVES'. IT. IS. DETECTING. A. MASSIVE. DISCONTINUITY. BEHIND. SECTION. C-7. IT. IS. THE. 'DEPARTMENT. OF. LOST. CITIES'—A. WING. THAT. WAS. 'EDITED. OUT'. DURING. THE. FIRST. DRAFT. PRE-PROLOGUE!"

​The Ghost of a Draft

​Ne Job approached the wall. He touched the wood, and instead of a solid surface, his hand felt a 7.5% chill—the sensation of a thought that had been started and then abandoned.

​"We shouldn't go in there," Architect Ao Bing whispered, his golden measuring rod trembling. "The 'Lost Cities' are architectural tragedies. They are places where the 'Internal Logic' failed. They are ruins of 'Maybe'."

​"But the Compass says the 'Great Mainspring' is losing tension because of a leak in the ruins," Ne Job said, adjusting his spectacles. "If a deleted city starts to crumble, it takes the 'Foundational Memory' of the Bureau with it."

​He raised the Semicolon. With a sharp KA-CHUNK, he stapled the "Present" to the "Forgotten." The mahogany wall shivered, turned into a pale pencil sketch, and then dissolved into a dark, dusty corridor.

​The Ruins of Rhetoric

​The team stepped through. They weren't in the Bureau anymore; they were in a Graveyard of Geometry.

​Massive marble arches hung in the air, unconnected to any floor.

​Fountains flowed with "Grey Ink" that never reached the ground.

​The Muse sparked a light, revealing a city that looked like a crumpled page—buildings leaning at impossible 7.5% angles, half-finished towers ending in jagged, unwritten edges.

​"It's a 'Rough Sketch' city," Pip whispered, their voice echoing with a hollow, tinny sound. "Look at the people... they don't have faces, just 'Placeholder' circles."

​The 7.5% Restoration

​In the center of the city stood the Spire of Intent, which was currently leaking "Narrative Pressure" like a broken pipe. The leak was a hissing cloud of "Unfinished Sentences."

​"We have to seal it!" The Muse cried, her hair turning a protective, neon-shield blue. "If the 'Intent' runs out, the Bureau loses its 'Reason to Exist'!"

​Ne Job realized he couldn't just "fix" a deleted city. You had to Integrate it. You had to give the "Draft" a reason to be part of the "Final Version."

​The Semicolon of Inclusion

​Ne Job didn't try to erase the ruins. He used the Semicolon to create a Footnote of Preservation.

​He fired a burst of violet light that wrapped around the leaking Spire. He didn't turn it back into a "Finished City"; he turned it into a "Historical Reference." "You aren't a mistake!" Ne Job shouted into the grey fog. "You are the Context! You are the 'Before' that makes the 'After' possible!"

​The Semicolon linked the "Lost City" to the "Main Archive." The grey ink turned into a rich, deep violet. The faceless citizens gained 7.5% more detail—not enough to be "Main Characters," but enough to be "Respected Ancestors."

​The Archivist's Log

​The corridor behind Section C-7 didn't disappear, but it became a sturdy, glass-fronted display case. The "Department of Lost Cities" was no longer a leak; it was a Museum.

​LOG: CHAPTER 97 SUMMARY.

STATUS: Lost City stabilized. Narrative pressure restored.

NOTE: You can't just delete your mistakes; you have to file them properly so they don't haunt the plumbing.

OBSERVATION: A story is built on the ruins of its previous drafts.

P.S.: Ao Bing has started a 'Preservation Society' for the placeholder people. He's teaching them how to draw eyebrows.

​The Muse leaned over his shoulder, her hair glowing with a respectful, antique violet. "You gave them a 'Legacy', Ne Job. Even the deleted ones."

​Ne Job looked at the Semicolon. It was glowing with a wise, historical violet.

​"Every draft matters, Muse," Ne Job said. "Now, why is Assistant Yue sounding a 7.5% alarm and why has a Giant Silver Anchor fallen through the ceiling, and why is it currently dragging the entire Bureau toward the 'Sea of Subplots'?"

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