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The House on Vale Street

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Detective Elias Ward has spent his life trusting logic, believing every mystery has a rational solution. Detective Mara Kade, sharp and instinct-driven, thrives on intuition and a stubborn defiance of authority. Once rivals, now forced to work together, they are called to investigate a baffling murder at an old, decaying house on Vale Street. The victim, a retired psychology professor, is found dead under impossible circumstances a locked room, no trauma, and a distorted expression of sheer terror frozen on his face. As the detectives uncover tapes, mirrors, and cryptic symbols, they realize Locke’s death is only the beginning. The house seems to bend reality, challenging their perception, sanity, and trust in each other. Paranormal forces blur the lines between the mind and the world around them, forcing Elias and Mara to confront not only a supernatural threat but also the unresolved tension of their own past. In a city that refuses to name the unexplainable, they must unravel the mysteries of Vale Street before the house claims more than just lives.
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Chapter 1 - The House on Vale Street

Chapter One: The House on Vale Street

The rain hadn't stopped for three days. It came down like the city was trying to wash itself clean

the gutters vomiting dirty water, the neon signs bleeding color into the puddles.

Detective Elias Ward stood beneath the weak shelter of his coat collar, cigarette trembling between his fingers, as the morgue van backed into the narrow alley of Vale Street. It was past midnight, the kind of hour when the streets turned silent except for the low hum of streetlights and the faint, restless whisper of the wind.

The house stood crooked at the end of the lane number 47, a three-story ruin of wood and rust. Its windows were blind, its porch half-rotted. Even from outside, Elias could sense it: something wrong about the air. It pressed against him, dense and cold, as if the night itself didn't want him here.

He'd been on homicide for twelve years. He'd seen every way a human being could destroy another

but this case already felt different. The call had come two hours ago: body found inside, alone, no forced entry, room locked from the inside.

Classic setup. Except the patrol officer's voice on the radio had been shaking.

Elias dropped his cigarette, crushed it beneath his heel, and started toward the house.

"Ward!"

The voice came sharp, clipped, too familiar.

He turned to see Detective Mara Kade stepping out of a dark sedan. She wore a long, water-slick trench coat, her dark hair pulled back but already losing the battle to the rain. Her boots clicked against the wet pavement as she approached steady, confident, and, as always, unreadable.

"You've got to be kidding me," Elias muttered. "They paired us again?"

Mara gave him a half-smirk, the kind that cut more than it charmed. "Don't sound so thrilled. You can't hog every strange case in the city."

"Thought they'd learned their lesson last time."

"Apparently not."

The two of them stood there for a moment, the rain whispering between them. They hadn't worked together in almost a year not since the Bellview Asylum case, where everything had gone sideways and ended with two officers injured, a suspect missing, and their partnership dissolved under a pile of paperwork and mutual silence.

But the Chief must've decided that whatever was happening on Vale Street needed both of them.

Mara nodded toward the house. "What do we know?"

Elias exhaled, rubbing the stubble on his jaw. "Male victim, late forties. Neighbors heard screams around eleven. Patrol found him in the study. No sign of break-in. Room was locked from the inside — key still in the door."

Mara raised an eyebrow. "Locked room mystery. Cute."

"Yeah, until you see what's inside."

They pushed through the threshold.

The hallway smelled of mildew and something sharper ozone, maybe, or the faint sting of burnt metal. The floorboards whined underfoot. Water dripped steadily from the ceiling into a cracked basin near the wall. Every shadow looked heavier than it should have been.

A patrol officer waited by the staircase, pale and wide-eyed. His name tag read Reed.

"Detectives," he said, his voice trembling. "I….I didn't touch anything. The scene's upstairs, Second door to the right."

"You look like you've seen a ghost, Reed," Mara said, brushing past him.

He didn't laugh. "Ma'am, I think I might have."

Elias shot him a look but said nothing.

They climbed the stairs together, the wood groaning beneath their boots. The second floor was darker, colder. The wallpaper had peeled in long curls, revealing gray plaster beneath. A faint hum like static hung in the air.

When they reached the door, Elias saw it immediately: deep gouges around the handle, as if someone had clawed at it from the inside. The brass key was still in the lock.

He turned it slowly. The door creaked open.

The study was a square room, dimly lit by a flickering lamp on the desk. The window was shut tight. Bookshelves lined the walls, though most of the volumes were toppled or torn. Papers fluttered across the floor like fallen leaves.

And in the center of the room sat the victim.

He was slumped in an armchair, body rigid, eyes wide open. His face was frozen in a grotesque expression not pain exactly, but pure, unfiltered terror. His hands were curled tight against his chest, nails sunk deep into his own skin.

No blood. No wound. Just that look.

Mara stepped closer, crouched, studying him. "Jesus. Looks like he saw something that scared him to death."

Elias nodded slowly. "Except people don't die like that. Not clean. Not with no sign of cardiac trauma."

She glanced at him. "You checked?"

He pulled on gloves and leaned in, brushing the collar aside. The skin beneath was pale, almost translucent. "No lividity. No petechial hemorrhaging. It's like… the life just shut off."

"Name?"

"Samuel Locke. Retired professor. Lived alone."

Mara rose, scanning the room. "Professor of what?"

"Psychology. Special interest in human perception and trauma."

"Perfect." She sighed. "Maybe he finally saw the inside of his own mind."

Elias ignored the jab. Something on the desk caught his attention a tape recorder, old-fashioned, with a spool still turning slowly. He hit stop, then rewind.

The machine whirred. Then he pressed play.

A man's voice crackled through the static

Locke's, thin and urgent.

"the dreams are worsening. The faces… I recognize them, but they aren't mine. When I wake, the room changes. The mirror doesn't reflect me anymore. I think… I think something's trying to come through."

There was a pause a scraping sound, distant, wet. Then Locke whispered:

"If you find this, don't look at the mirror. It's not me in there anymore."

The tape cut off with a shrill hiss.

Mara straightened, eyes narrowing. "Please tell me you staged that for effect."

Elias said nothing. He was staring at the mirror on the far wall.

It was a tall, cracked thing, the frame carved with symbols he didn't recognize. The glass shimmered faintly, like it was breathing.

Mara caught him looking. "Don't even think about it."

He took a step forward. "You heard the tape. He mentioned it for a reason.""Yeah to warn us not to."

But curiosity was a hard habit to kill. Elias stepped close enough that his reflection filled the glass. The light in the room seemed to dim around him. For a split second, his reflection lagged a heartbeat slower than his movement.

Mara saw it too. "Ward" He blinked. The image snapped back. Everything looked normal again.Except for one thing.His reflection was smiling.

The lights flickered, once, twice then burst.

Darkness swallowed the room.

Elias stumbled back, drawing his weapon. "Kade?"

"I'm here!" Her voice was tense. "Don't move!"

Something rustled in the dark a whispering sound, too low to make sense of, like hundreds of voices beneath water. The air turned thick, heavy. The smell of ozone returned, stronger now.

And then silence.

The lights came back on.

The chair was empty.

Locke's body was gone.

Only the deep indent in the cushion remained.

Mara's breath hitched. "What the hell..."

Elias spun, scanning the corners. "Check the door!"

"Still locked."

The window was shut. The key hadn't moved. No footprints, no signs of struggle. Just… absence.

He looked back at the mirror. The crack had widened. A faint outline a silhouette…..lingered inside it, like a shadow burned into glass.

Elias holstered his gun. His voice was quiet. "We're not writing this up as a disappearance. Not yet."

Mara crossed her arms. "Then what, exactly, do you call it?"

He hesitated, then said softly, "The start."

They left the house as dawn began bleeding over the skyline. The rain had stopped, but the streets still glistened like wet film.

At the curb, the coroner's team waited impatient, uninformed. Elias signed the report, said the body was being held for review, and avoided their questions.

Mara stood beside him, her eyes distant.

"Ward," she said finally, "what did you see in that mirror?"

He didn't answer right away. "A glitch. A reflection delay. Nothing supernatural."

"You're lying."

He glanced at her. "You think so?"

"I saw your face. It wasn't yours that smiled."

They stood there, the city slowly waking around them. Somewhere a siren wailed, distant and thin.

Mara said quietly, "I don't believe in ghosts, but I've learned not to laugh at things I can't explain."

Elias lit another cigarette. "Belief doesn't change reality."

"Neither does denial."

She turned and walked away, her silhouette cutting sharp through the morning fog.

Elias watched her go. The cigarette trembled slightly between his fingers. Then he looked down at his reflection in the puddle near his boot and saw it smile again.

Later that day

The precinct was half-asleep when Elias returned. The old building smelled of paper, coffee, and failure. He made his way to his desk a scarred piece of wood beneath a dying fluorescent light and dropped the case file onto it.

He couldn't shake the feeling that something had followed him from Vale Street. The silence behind his ears felt alive, pulsing.

He opened the file Locke, Samuel and skimmed through the attached documents.

Born 1953. Professor of cognitive psychology. Retired early after the death of his wife. No children. Known among his peers for his work on mirror neurons and self-perception disorders.

The last note was dated three weeks ago: Subject exhibits increasing paranoia, claims to experience episodes of "displacement."

There was also a photograph the study, before the scene was disturbed.

Elias froze.

In the photo, the mirror was unbroken.

And standing behind the reflection of Locke… was a second figure.

No face. Just shape and shadow.

A knock pulled him from the trance.

Mara stood in the doorway, holding two coffees.

"Couldn't sleep," she said. "Thought I'd check if you were still brooding."

"Always." He gestured to the chair. She sat.

They sipped in silence for a while, the tension between them less sharp now, but heavier.

Mara finally said, "I talked to the patrol officers again. One of them said something weird claimed when he first entered the house, the clocks were all running backward."

Elias looked up. "You believe him?"

"I don't know what I believe. But whatever happened in that room…..it wasn't natural."

He leaned back, exhaling smoke. "Locke studied perception. Maybe he found a way to fracture it. Or maybe it fractured him."

Mara smirked faintly. "You sound like you're trying to convince yourself."

He didn't respond.

She glanced at the mirror behind his desk a small rectangular thing, plain. "You covered that with paper?"

"Couldn't hurt."

"Scared it'll smile again?"

He met her gaze. "You saw that too?"

"Yeah." Her voice was low. "And I've been seeing it since."

Elias frowned. "Seeing what?"

She hesitated. "Reflections that move when I don't. Not always. Just… enough."

He studied her face…..tired, wary, but still defiant.

"We're going back to Vale Street," he said finally.

Her eyebrows lifted. "Why?"

"Because that house isn't done with us."

Vale Street Midnight Again

They returned under a bruised sky. The rain had started once more, whispering like a warning.

The house looked even deader now, the windows darker, the air heavier.

Mara held her flashlight steady. "You sure about this?"

"No," Elias said. "That's how I know it's necessary."

They stepped inside.

The hallway seemed shorter this time. The smell sharper. The walls seemed to hum faintly, like they remembered them.

When they reached the study, the door was open. The mirror was gone.

Only the outline of dust on the wall remained where it had hung.

Mara's light trembled slightly. "Someone took it."

Elias crouched near the floor. "Or it took itself."

She gave him a sharp look. "Don't start."

He pointed. In the dust on the desk, faint but deliberate, was a set of handprints one larger, one smaller pressed side by side.

Mara whispered, "Locke and someone else."

"Or Locke and what replaced him."

He turned toward the window. The glass was fogged from the inside. In it, faintly, two shapes stood their reflections, distorted, grainy.

Only in the reflection, they weren't standing still.

Elias saw his reflected self lift the gun.

Before he could react, the sound of a gunshot ripped through the air deafening.

Mara screamed.

But when he turned no bullet hole, no smoke, no sound but the echo of his own heartbeat.

The reflection still smiled.

The sound of sirens rose somewhere far away, the world slowly stitching itself back together.

Mara's voice shook. "Ward, we have to leave. Now."

He nodded, eyes fixed on the window. The reflections still lingered, grinning faintly, patient.

As they backed away, Elias whispered, "Whatever this is it's not about Locke anymore."

Mara's reply was almost a breath: "Then who?"

He hesitated, then looked down at the wet floorboards their footprints side by side.

Two sets going in.

Three coming out.