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Chapter 9 - The Lines Which Seperated Life And Death

The Day of the Shattered Thread (Dagur Slitins Þráðar)[1]

After Thor and Monsieur enter the realm of Hel, both of them begin to go further on the place and they reached Hel's gate. They passed the trial with the help of Thor and they were starting to finally enter Hel but suddenly.

*Something hits Thor*

"THOR!" said Monsieur*frighten Ly*.

Thor gets dizzy but he gets control over his mind and then starts to look at the direction where the attack came but all that Thor sees is "a bent, frail, wrinkled woman".

Thor realizes who that person is and then starts to laugh.

"Ha-ha, didn't expect to see you here," said Thor.

"Who's that old lady?" questioned Monsieur.

"Didn't expect to see you here to child" said the mysterious women to Thor.

"Who are you?" said Monsieur.

"I am Ellie, {One of the personifications of forces that live in Helheim}. I may seem old human but "don't judge a book by its cover". Now, what brings you here?" questioned Ellie.

"We are here to bring one of my old friends back from the dead," said Monsieur.

*Thor gets up slowly and in a dizzy state*

"When- was the last time- we met?" Thor says*dizzily*.

*Ellie ignores Thor*

"Are you sure child? Breaking the rule of Hel and bringing a person who died in his own fate is out of rule and not allowed," said Ellie.

"He didn't die in his own fate! He was killed and was banished from the land" said Monsieur in high tone.

"Fate is a factor which binds each and every one child, just because he was murderred doesn't prove that he was killed out of fate." said Ellie.

"Just let us in Ellie. We don't have much time." said Thor.

"I don't have time either, but I am waiting for the correct answer and then I shall go to my own place" said Ellie *Full confidently*.

Thor was about to speak but Monsieur interrupts and says-

"We do not come here to talk, we were here because his fate is yet to come, and he must live. I know that it is out of the rule and the law but i request you to grant us permission for this gate, not because of an order but as a personal request which I must fulfill," said Monsieur.

Thor stops talking for some time and just stares Monsieur out of disbelieve of how perfectly he did the talking's.

"Fine child"

Thor stares in at her afterwards with surprised looks.

*Elliot casually walks away after hearing the request and ignores the chat after it and she walks like she had never even talked*.

"Well, I will be dammed," said Thor.

"You sure do talks well-mannered and also in a surprising tone which could easily fool others said Thor.\

"Thanks" said Monsieur.

"But can your destiny be as easy as that?" said Thor.

"Well, I guess no,"said Monsieur.

Okay enough chatting and let's just go.

"I was about to say that" said Thor.

"Well, to bad "says Monsieur.

After that Thor precedes to go closer and closer to the final door and opens it fully.

-A breezing cold wind starts to come very sharply.....

-The Dark atmosphere and the presence of countless souls which has been locked in this place .....

-Screams and foriveness sounds whispers through the ears in a quick and steadily voice.

"Well, looks even worse than i imagined," said Monsieur.

Thor looks around for some seconds and then makes a decision.

"Okay so kid, what we Gona do is that we will separate our paths and then find clues about where your friend might be or where his fragments are to resurrect" said Thor.

Alright! Am rea-

Wait separate?

"Yes, because this place is to dam big and we can't stay here for longer since the creatures will be alerted and then it would be quite problematic," said Thor.

Bu-

"No more questions and no more talks, just go to the other side and then tell me what is there after you return exactly at the middle okay? "Said Thor.

Thor flys away very far and then starts checking all the areas....

Meanwhile Monsieur is having trouble with the creatures in the areas and analyzes every single place.

While both of them are at their separate ways, something starts to grow much closer to Monsieur and then watches him very carefully.

Thor feels the sensation and the aura to so he stops going further deep and heads back to the place.

Something is making a strange runic language out to thin air and tells Monsieur to jump through it.

Thor keeps flying very very fast but to Thor something feels off. It's as if he is in a time loop.

The bright light tells Monsieur to enter and tells Monsieur about everything that he has wanted and the experiences.

"Are you something? "says Monsieur.

"Who knows?" said the strange entetity.

Thor starts to get annoyed of the loop and starts using some bits of his powers and starts to crack the reality.

The strange creature notices that and just tell Monsieur to head inside and learn the truth.

"Why should I trust you?" said Monsieur.

"It's because..... you're the only one who could pull this off," said the strange entity.

Monsieur starts entering the bright portal and then starts to vanish,

Thor finally breaks the reality and Charges at full speed at the bright light, but the light is gone at the moment he was close.....

[1] Odin Whispers:“This was not woven. This is the day beyond fate.”

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