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Chapter 2 - Whispers in the Square

Morning arrived gray and reluctant, as though the sun itself wished to avoid the village. Elara hadn't slept. She sat at her table with the last stub of her candle spent, her face pale and drawn in its hardened wax. Every time she closed her eyes, she saw the faceless shadows drifting from doorways, the statue pointing at her with its stone hand.

And always that whisper, reverberating through her ribs: You are the key.

She had repeated it in her mind until the words blurred into nothing. A key to what? A key for whom? She had no answers. Only the dread that whatever had found her would not let go.

Her body ached with exhaustion, yet she forced herself to move. Remaining inside would draw suspicion. The villagers were already too quick to whisper about her being strange, half-mad like her grandmother. If anyone noticed she had spent the night awake and trembling, they would find reasons to avoid her all the more.

She dressed quickly, pulling her thickest skirt over bare legs and lacing her boots with fingers that still trembled. Her cloak smelled faintly of smoke from the fire, a comfort, though its weight reminded her of how it had whipped behind her as she fled the square.

For a long time she lingered at the door, staring at the latch. Beyond it lay the statue. The square. The proof, or perhaps the denial, of what she had seen.

Her hand shook as she lifted the bar.

The morning air was cool and damp. Mist clung to the rooftops, and the cobblestones glistened faintly with dew. Villagers were already stirring—she heard the clatter of buckets from the well, the creak of wagon wheels, the distant bleat of a goat. Normal sounds. Blessed sounds. She let them steady her breathing.

She turned her gaze to the square.

The statue stood as it always had, tall and faceless, shoulders squared toward the church.

Toward the church. Not her.

Elara's stomach twisted. Had she dreamed it all? Her rational mind screamed for her to believe that. Exhaustion, shadows, a trick of moonlight. Perhaps she had fallen asleep by the hearth and dreamed the entire hour.

Yet the memory of the silence—absolute, crushing, alive—still clung to her like cobwebs. And the words. The voice. You are the key. That had been no dream.

"Elara."

She jumped, her pulse spiking. But it was only old Marta, bent over her basket of laundry, squinting at her from across the street.

"You're pale, child," Marta said, her voice rough as gravel. "Didn't sleep again?"

Elara forced a weak smile. "Just a long night."

Marta clucked her tongue and shuffled on, muttering about weak constitutions and the dangers of youth wandering after dark.

Elara exhaled slowly. She walked into the square, each step a test of her courage. The statue loomed above her, cold and unmoving. She studied every line, every crack in its stone surface, as though it might reveal evidence of its betrayal.

But there was nothing.

Except—

Her breath caught. At the base of the statue, in the thin moss between cobblestones, lay a faint mark. Scratched into the stone foundation, fresh and raw, as though etched by a blade:

XII

Twelve.

Her stomach dropped.

The bell. The hour. The moment when the world had stopped.

She crouched, brushing her fingers lightly over the mark. It was shallow, hurried, yet deliberate. Someone had left it—or something.

"Elara!"

The shout startled her. She spun to see Tomas, the blacksmith's son, striding toward her with a heavy sack slung over his shoulder. His dark hair stuck to his forehead with sweat despite the morning chill.

"You shouldn't linger by that thing," he said, jerking his chin toward the statue. "Brings bad luck."

"Does it?" she asked carefully.

He frowned. "Don't tell me you believe the stories."

She forced a laugh, though it sounded hollow in her own ears. "Of course not."

But Tomas's eyes narrowed. "My father says your grandmother used to talk to it. Sat out here for hours muttering nonsense when the moon was high. People said she was touched."

Elara stiffened. "My grandmother told stories. That doesn't make her mad."

Tomas shrugged, unconvinced. "Still. You'd do well not to follow in her footsteps." He adjusted the sack and moved on, leaving her with the mark and the statue's silent gaze.

Heat burned behind her eyes. Always the same whispers, the same doubt. She had grown used to it, yet today the words cut deeper. Because maybe they were right. Maybe she was going mad.

But the mark was real. She had felt it beneath her fingertips.

She straightened, pulling her cloak tight around her shoulders, and turned away. The market stalls were beginning to open, their familiar chaos a relief after the oppressive silence of the night. She forced herself to walk among them, nodding politely, buying bread she barely tasted, listening to the ordinary chatter of neighbors.

Yet everywhere she looked, she saw echoes of the night before. The curve of a shadow seemed to twitch, the flicker of lamplight looked too still. She couldn't shake the feeling that the Silent Hour lingered just beneath the surface of the day, waiting to return.

By midday, exhaustion weighed heavily on her. She returned home, clutching the loaf of bread like a talisman, and barred the door behind her.

She didn't notice until later that the loaf bore a shallow imprint on its crust. At first she thought it was just from the baker's peel. But no—the lines were too sharp, too deliberate.

Another mark.Another Roman numeral.

XIII

Thirteen.

Her pulse quickened. She stared at it, cold dread creeping down her spine. If twelve had marked the hour of the statue's turning, then thirteen…

She didn't want to finish the thought.

Night was coming again.

And the Silent Hour would return.

Elara sat at her table long after the sun had climbed above the mist, the loaf of bread resting before her like some cursed object. She had turned it over in her hands half a dozen times, tracing the grooves with her fingertip.

XIII.

The number seemed to pulse, alive, carved into the crust with deliberate purpose. The baker's peel could not have made marks like that—sharp, etched clean, as though a blade had kissed the dough before it ever touched the fire.

"Thirteen," she whispered, tasting the word. It felt wrong in her mouth. There was no thirteenth chime. The bell had only twelve. The village day was twelve hours, then twelve more. What lay beyond that?

Her grandmother's voice haunted her memory: There are hours we do not count, child. Hours that do not belong to us.

Elara pressed her palms flat to the table. She did not want to believe it. She wanted to laugh at herself, to tear the bread apart and call the mark a trick of her weary mind. But the memory of the previous night clung too tightly.

The silence.The shadows.The statue turning.

Her body remembered what her mind tried to deny.

She rose abruptly, pacing the length of the cottage. Every creak of the floorboards made her flinch. The ordinary world no longer felt ordinary. Every sound carried weight, every shadow seemed to stretch toward her.

At last she grabbed her cloak and stepped back outside, unable to bear the stillness of her home. The air was warmer now, though the mist still lingered in shaded corners. Villagers bustled through the square, trading goods, arguing over prices, calling to one another with the ease of people who had never seen time itself fracture.

Elara envied them.

She forced herself into the rhythm of their lives, offering polite smiles, asking after neighbors. Yet she could not shake the sense that they were performing, unaware that the stage beneath their feet had begun to crack.

Near the well, children played with hoops, their laughter shrill. One of them, a small boy with a crooked cap, paused and looked at her. His smile faded. Slowly, deliberately, he raised his finger and tapped it against his lips—shhh.

Her chest tightened. Before she could react, another child tugged the boy's arm and the moment passed, the laughter resuming as though nothing had happened. But Elara's skin prickled. Had he seen? Had he known?

By late afternoon she could stand it no longer. She drifted back to the statue. The square was emptier now, most villagers busy with chores or meals. The Guardian loomed in the fading light, its stone surface glowing faintly gold. To any other eye, it was unchanged.

To Elara, it was a question carved in stone.

She crouched again, fingertips brushing the mark she had found that morning. XII. Still there, sharp and fresh.

Her mind turned circles. Had someone else witnessed the Hour? Had they left the mark? Or had the statue itself scratched it into its foundation, counting something only it understood?

"You are the key."

The whisper came unbidden from memory, but it curled in her gut as though the statue spoke it anew. She pressed her palms against her ears. Stop. Stop. But the words pulsed inside her, steady as a heartbeat.

"Elara?"

Her head snapped up. It was Marta again, peering at her from a doorway, frown deepening. "Why do you sit at its feet, girl? That thing is not for prayer."

"I wasn't—" Elara began, but the woman shook her head and disappeared inside, muttering.

Heat flushed Elara's cheeks. Every eye seemed sharper, every whisper louder. They already thought her strange. If anyone had truly seen what she had witnessed, they would never admit it. Perhaps the others had seen and chosen silence. In this village, silence was safer than truth.

By the time the sun slipped behind the hills, she was raw with exhaustion. She retreated to her cottage, bolting the door. She tore a chunk of the marked bread and chewed mechanically, though each bite felt like swallowing stone. She kept glancing at the window, half-expecting the faceless figures to be waiting outside.

As dusk thickened, unease grew sharper. Shadows stretched across the walls, familiar yet sinister. The hearth crackled weakly, but the sound no longer comforted her.

When the first star appeared, she felt it—a shift in the air, subtle but undeniable. The world seemed to lean forward, waiting.

She hugged herself tightly.

Another night was coming.Another hour she did not want to see.

And the mark on the bread promised that the thirteenth chime—whatever it was—still awaited her.

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