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Chapter 3 - The Shattered Choir (1910–1920)

I – María's Circle 

The lanterns glowed dimly in María's modest sala. Outside, the streets of Manila stirred with carriages and vendors; inside, a quiet revolution brewed.

María leaned on her cane, her face framed by silver threads of hair. She addressed the young women seated around her — seamstresses, teachers, widows of farmers, even a laundress who had walked two barrios just to be present.

MARIA:" My sisters," María began, her voice calm but carrying iron, "we fought beside our men for freedom from Spain. We bled when our sons fell in Balangiga. And now they tell us we must sit silent while men alone decide our future? No. The mother of a nation cannot remain voiceless."

Gasps, nods, the murmur of agreement.

Rafael sat in the corner, his notebook on his knees, scribbling every word.

SEAMSTRESS: One of the women, barely twenty, raised her hand. "Señora María… will men even listen?"

María's smile was faint, but unyielding. "Not at first. They will laugh. They will call it madness. But today's laughter is tomorrow's law."

Scene II – Emil's Scorn 

At the Vargas estate, Emil paced the veranda with Don Vicente and Whitmore.

EMIL: "Women's rights?" Emil scoffed, sipping his brandy. "Votes for seamstresses and washerwomen? What comes next, farmers deciding policy?"

WHITMORE: Whitmore chuckled. "The boy is right. Democracy is a dangerous seed. Best keep it trimmed before it grows wild."

Don Vicente nodded gravely, but Emil's eyes gleamed with ambition. "Let them dream. While they waste time writing pamphlets, we shall own the newspapers that print them."

III – Seeds in the Wind 

Months turned to years. Pamphlets, handwritten at first, began to circulate — essays titled The Mother's Voice, Daughters of the Nation, On the Equal Rights of the Girl Child.

Some were confiscated by Constabulary [1]officers. Others found their way into the hands of students, journalists, and even a few sympathetic lawmakers.

RAFAEL: One night, Rafael returned to María breathless. "Lola, I spoke with Señor Quezon at the Assembly. He says he admires our boldness, though he calls it 'too early for the islands.' But he listened."

MARIA: María's tired eyes glowed. "Good. That is how history begins. With a single ear willing to listen."

IV – The Shattered Choir 

The women called themselves La Capilla Rota — The Shattered Choir. A name born of their fractured voices, forbidden to sing in the grand halls, yet echoing in hidden rooms.

They met by the Pasig, in candlelit chapels, in teachers' dormitories. They dreamed aloud of a Philippines where women might:

Hold property in their own name. Stand equal in schools and universities. Cast their votes beside their husbands and brothers. 

RAFEL: At times, even Rafael doubted. "Lola… what if these remain only dreams?"

MARIA : María placed her hand on his. "Then promise me this — when you are older, when power comes into your hands, you will not forget the whispers of these walls. Promise me you will turn them into law."

RAFEL: "I swear it."

V – Foreshadowing Shadows 

Across town, Emil received a letter from Tokyo. He read it under moonlight, lips curling:

"A new Asia is rising, free of Western chains. The Philippines will find its place if it aligns with the right power. Watch carefully — history bends to those who are unafraid to seize it."

Behind him, Whitmore's voice was cold. "Your friend Rafael wastes himself on fantasies of votes and freedoms. You, Emil, will learn the true currency of power: obedience."

VI – The Women's Voices

The sala was crowded tonight. María had invited new faces.

"Introduce yourselves, sisters," she said warmly.

A seamstress named Lucía, with needle-pricked fingers, stood up shyly.

LUCIA: "I sew the uniforms for the very soldiers who mock us. I dream that my daughter will wear a scholar's robe instead."

Next was Señorita Felisa, a mestiza widow of a merchant. She wore silk, but her voice trembled. 

Señorita Felisa: "I have wealth but no name. When my husband died, his brothers claimed all our land. I live on charity. If I could vote, if I could sign my own deeds…" Her eyes burned with restrained fury.

Then came Caridad, a schoolteacher, stern and sharp-eyed.

Caridad: "In my classroom, I teach boys and girls letters. Yet only the boys may become lawyers, governors. Why do we feed half our children only to starve their dreams later?"

The women clapped softly, afraid of neighbors overhearing.

Rafael wrote in his notebook: " Voice and Rights are Stone and Mortar. Together, they build a nation's foundation."

VII – Leaflets in the Night

Rafael and Lucía hurried through Escolta's narrow alleys under moonlight, a bundle of folded papers tucked beneath Lucía's shawl.

RAFAEL: "Careful," Rafael hissed. "Constabulary patrols are near."

They slipped leaflets under doorways, into market stalls, beneath the benches of carriages:

"The Mother Nation's Voice Must Be Heard."

"Daughters of the Nation Demand's Equal Rights."

Suddenly, a shout: "Halt!"

Constables with rifles emerged from a corner. Lucía froze.

Rafael grabbed her hand. "Run!"

They scattered into the shadows, Rafael ducking into a drainage alley, Lucía into a churchyard. The leaflets scattered behind them like white birds taking flight.

By dawn, vendors in Quiapo were already whispering: "Have you read this? It says women may one day vote!"

VIII – Clash of Youths

At the Ateneo, Rafael overheard classmates laughing.

"Can you imagine, your wife standing beside you at the polls?" one jeered. "Next, they'll want to sit in the Assembly itself!"

The group roared with laughter.

Rafael slammed his book shut. "Why not? Did not Rizal say a nation's greatness is measured by how it treats its weakest?"

The room fell silent.

One boy muttered, "You sound like a woman."

RAFAEL: "I sound like a Filipino who believes in justice," Rafael shot back, his voice trembling but firm.

IX – Letters of Fire

That evening, María handed Rafael a bundle of papers.

MARIA: "Deliver these carefully."

He unrolled them in secret: letters to Concepcion Felix de Calderon, Pura Villanueva Kalaw — real figures of the suffrage movement[2]. María had been corresponding quietly, lending her voice to the larger struggle.

Her words: "Though I am old, though my voice weakens, the daughters beside me sing the song I can no longer sing. Do not forget us."

Rafael clutched the letters to his chest. "Lola… you are not forgotten."

 X – The American Teacher

In a dim schoolroom, Rafael spoke quietly with Miss Elizabeth Carter, a young Thomasite teacher with kind gray eyes.

Miss Elizabeth Carter: "I envy you, Señor Rafael," she said. "Back home, women are fighting for the same thing. In America, we march in white dresses for the vote. Yet here, I am told I must keep silent if I wish to remain."

Rafael asked, "Would you join us if you could?"

Miss Elizabeth Carter: She smiled sadly. "In my heart, I already have."

Scene XI – The Counter-Current

Meanwhile, in the Vargas study, Emil read the latest La Independencia with disgust.

Emil: "Pamphlets everywhere," he muttered. "Even servants whisper of voting women."

Whitmore lit his cigar. "A dangerous infection. But infections can be contained… or redirected."

Emil smirked. "Let them have their little dreams. When war comes, it is not votes or pamphlets that win battles. It is men with guns — and men like us who supply them."

His words echoed like prophecy.

 XII – María's Vow

Late one night, María sat by the window, writing with trembling hands. Rafael watched silently.

RAFAEL: "Are you writing another letter, Lola?"

MARIA: "Yes. To the future."

She wrote slowly:

"To those who come after me: remember that once, our voices were only whispers in dark rooms. If you now vote, if you now stand equal, do not forget the women who dreamed in silence."

She folded the letter, sealing it with wax.

"Rafael," she said softly, "when the time comes, you must carry this torch. Promise me."

"I promise, Lola."

And in that moment, the weight of history fell upon his shoulders.

[1] a law enforcement officer who maintains peace, enforces laws, and serves legal documents within a specific jurisdiction.

[2] key figures in the Philippine women's suffrage movement, co-founding influential organizations like the Asociación Feminista Filipina (AFF) and Asociación Feminista Ilonga, respectively. Felix was a working-class activist who co-presented a petition for 18,000 women's right to vote in 1920, while Kalaw, the first Queen of Manila Carnival, helped found her own feminist association and participated in later suffrage lobbying efforts. Both women, alongside others, were instrumental in pushing for the eventual passage of a bill granting Filipinas the right to vote.

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