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Chapter 1 - The Crouched Man

The rain pattered soft and endless, a

whispering curtain over a street that had forgotten joy. At the far end of the

cobbles, beneath a crooked lamp that buzzed and spat, a figure crouched. His

arms dangled long, his back curled forward like a snapped bow. In the gutter's

glow, his face seemed carved from pale wax—thin lips peeled back from yellowed

teeth, cheeks caved and raw with lines that went nowhere. But the eyes were

worst of all: two black pits without glint or glimmer, eyes that did not

reflect the world but devoured it.

He looked monstrous, yes. But he had

not always been so. Once, he had been Elias Hart.

Elias had come into the world plain

and quiet, and the world had punished him for both. Other children in the

village of Whitcomb had voices like bells—bright, carrying laughter, brimming

with the surety of being wanted. Elias's voice cracked and tripped over itself.

When he spoke, he was met with rolled eyes or smirks, so he learned to speak

less, until silence became a habit, and habit became a cage.

 He was never striking to look at. Not

handsome enough to be admired, not strange enough to be memorable. A mop of

flat brown hair, eyes the colour of dishwater, skin that burned red under sun

and blotched under cold. He was a blur at the edge of every group, the one

people forgot to name when counting who had been there.

 At twelve, when boys first began

daring the girls with flowers stolen from their mothers' gardens, Elias plucked

a single violet and tried to give it to Ruth, a girl with freckles and a laugh

like spring. She looked at him for only a second before bursting into cruel

laughter, and the other children joined her. Elias dropped the flower into the

dirt, his ears burning so hot he thought he might faint. That night, he swore

he would never try again.

By sixteen, he had retreated into

himself completely. When the others played games in the square, Elias lingered

at the edge of the fields, watching shadows stretch. When the village gathered

for festivals, he feigned illness and lay awake in his empty bed, listening to

music and voices drift through his shutter. Self-isolation wrapped him like a

second skin—part comfort, part curse. It was easier not to try. It was easier

not to hope.

Yet hope gnawed at him still. He

carved little animals from scraps of wood, imagining the day he might give them

as gifts to someone who would smile, just once. He practiced conversations in

whispers, hoping that if the chance came, the words would not trip. Sometimes,

in moments of weakness, he trailed behind couples in the lanes, watching the

way their hands brushed, the way laughter leapt between them like sparks. He

felt like a starving man staring into feasts he would never taste.

The world moved without him. Boys

became men, men became husbands, husbands became fathers. Elias remained Elias:

overlooked, unwanted.

He tried to pray. At first, his

prayers were gentle—asking only for someone to talk to him, someone to notice

him. As the years passed, they grew sharper. Why not me? What is wrong with me?

By thirty, his prayers had become pleas shouted into the trees beyond the

village, words breaking from his chest like cracks in stone.

No one answered. Until one night,

someone did.

The clearing was drowned in fog when

she appeared. At first, Elias thought he had gone mad from loneliness. She was

too sharp, too bright—eyes glowing red like banked coals, lips curling into a

smile that promised and threatened in the same breath. She listened to him pour

out his heart, his years of isolation, the bitterness, the aching hunger for

love. She did not laugh at him. She did not turn away.

 "I can give you time," she whispered.

"All the time in the world. Live long enough, Elias, and someone will love you.

Someday, you will be chosen."

It was the first kindness he had ever

been shown. He agreed before she even told him the price.

The decades came and went like tides. Elias moved from town to

town, always searching, always waiting for that "someday." But while the world

spun on, he withered. The curse revealed itself slowly: his hair thinned to

nothing, his teeth yellowed and twisted, his skin turned pasty and stretched

tight over bone. The scent of decay clung though no illness came. Time did not

take him, but it carved him into something grotesque.

He

could feel himself rotting, but never ending. He sometimes pressed a knife

against his chest, but the flesh healed, slow and mocking, as if death itself

recoiled from him.

Where once he had been invisible, now

he was unforgettable—people stared not because they admired, but because they

recoiled. Children screamed at him in the streets. Markets drove him away with

thrown stones. Priests called him an omen of God's wrath.

He drifted through

villages where children he once knew had grown into wrinkled elders, then into

graves. He watched houses crumble, rebuilt, crumble again. Wars rose and ended;

kings lived and fell. And always Elias remained, unchanged, as if time circled

him like a river flowing around a stone.

The dream of being chosen curdled into

mockery. The longer he lived, the less he was seen as a man. And what is a man

without the possibility of love? Elias learned the answer: he was nothing.

He built himself a shack in the woods,

hidden beneath twisting branches, where no one could find him unless fate

willed it. His bitterness festered there, growing sharp as a blade.

Now, when he crouched under the

lamplight in the forgotten streets, he was not Elias Hart, the man who once

carved wooden trinkets and prayed for tenderness. He was the Hollow Man, a husk

filled with rage at the sight of others' joy.

And it was in this state—broken,

starving for what he could never have—that he would one day see her. Elise. A

young woman whose laughter might have once saved him, and whose love for

another man would instead damn him further.

But that would come later. For now, he

crouched in the rain, remembering a flower dropped in the dirt, a prayer left

unanswered, and a demon's smile.