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Chapter 95 - Not Suitable

"How exactly do I start learning the Mind Transfer Technique?" Satoru asked.

His voice was calm and earnest, neither rushed nor hesitant. It carried the tone of someone who had already accepted the premise and now sought the method.

Shiro did not answer immediately.

He studied Satoru for a long moment, head slightly inclined, as though weighing not the question itself but the one who asked it. Then he inhaled quietly and spoke, unhurried.

"Learning Shintenshin no Jutsu is not a matter of memorisation," he said. "It is alignment."

The word settled heavily.

Satoru's brow furrowed, and he nodded once, slowly, signalling that he was listening rather than understanding. Shiro continued without pause, his voice measured and precise.

"Most ninjutsu are learned by building structure: hand seals, chakra quantity, and repetition. This technique is different. You are not constructing something new; you are removing what does not belong."

He lifted one hand, palm up, fingers slightly spread.

"The first step is mental quieting. You must strip away stray thoughts, memories, anxieties, and internal narration. Anything that asserts the self too loudly becomes noise. Kinda like the usual Meditation every Shinobi does."

As Shiro spoke, Satoru became acutely aware of his own mind; the faint hum of thoughts beneath the surface, the reflexive cataloguing of sensations, the echo of his past life that never fully faded.

'This won't be easy in a mission unless I master it to my bones.'

He swallowed and focused, nodding again.

"The second step," Shiro continued, "is chakra thinning. Not compression; refinement. Your chakra must be drawn into a narrow, cohesive thread. Dense chakra resists extension; it clumps, collapses, or rebounds."

He drew two fingers together in the air, illustrating the concept.

"And finally," he said, "projection of intent rather than force."

Satoru's eyes narrowed slightly.

"You are not pushing chakra outward," Shiro emphasised. "You are extending your consciousness along it. The chakra is a conduit, not a weapon."

The distinction sent a ripple through Satoru's understanding. His posture shifted subtly, shoulders easing as he reframed the technique in his mind. This was not about overpowering another will; it was about reaching it.

"I see," Satoru murmured.

Shiro inclined his head once, acknowledging the response.

Satoru glanced around the hall then, almost unconsciously. His gaze swept over the open floor, the wooden pillars, the empty space where he half-expected to see training dolls or marked targets. He imagined practice seals drawn in chalk, scrolls unrolled with dense calligraphy, incremental drills to ease him into the process.

Instead, Shiro said calmly, "Your first target will be me."

The words fell into the space like a stone dropped into still water.

For a heartbeat, the hall seemed to quiet even further.

Satoru's eyes widened, his pupils contracting sharply. His mouth parted before he could stop it, a soft intake of breath escaping his lips. "You?" he echoed.

He straightened instinctively, shoulders tensing, fingers curling slightly against his thighs.

"Sensei," he said carefully, "is that… safe?"

Shiro's expression remained composed.

"And is it even possible?" Satoru continued, his concern genuine rather than fearful.

"You're a master. Your experience, your control; wouldn't that make success impossible? I mean; if I can't even reach your mind—"

"You misunderstand," Shiro said gently.

He raised a hand, palm outward, a subtle gesture that halted Satoru's spiraling thoughts.

"I will lower my mental guard completely," Shiro said. "I will remain passive."

Satoru blinked.

"For beginners," Shiro explained, "a clean mental surface is essential. Resistance obscures feedback. You need to feel the connection; where it falters, where it collapses. A defended mind would only confuse you."

Satoru exhaled slowly, the tension in his shoulders easing by degrees. The reassurance did not erase his concern entirely, but it steadied him enough to proceed.

Shiro shifted his posture slightly and raised his hands.

"Watch closely."

He demonstrated the hand seals with deliberate slowness, each motion precise. Fingers interlocked, separated, rejoined; tap, slide, press. The soft sound of skin against skin punctuated the silence.

"These seals do not invoke power," Shiro said as he moved. "They guide alignment. They establish the initial pathway."

He paused at the final seal.

"Chakra originates here," he continued, gesturing toward his own chest, "moves upward along the central channel, then forward. The rate of flow must be steady; too fast and it destabilizes; too slow and it dissipates."

Satoru watched intently, lips moving faintly as he repeated the sequence in his mind. He traced the imagined path of chakra internally, committing the sensations to memory rather than the motions alone.

"Remember," Shiro added, "excess chakra is worse than insufficient control."

Satoru nodded, committing the warning to heart.

When Shiro finished, he lowered his hands. "Begin when ready."

Satoru drew a slow breath, then mirrored the hand seals. His fingers moved carefully, each position deliberate. He closed his eyes and focused.

He quieted his mind as best he could, pushing stray thoughts aside. He thinned his chakra, coaxing it into a narrow stream. He extended his intent forward.

Nothing happened.

The silence stretched.

His chakra wavered, then collapsed inward with a faint internal thrum, like a snapped string recoiling.

Satoru opened his eyes.

Disappointment flickered across his face, brief but sharp.

"That is expected," Shiro said calmly. "Again."

Satoru nodded stiffly and reset.

The second attempt yielded nothing.

The third misfired; his chakra surged unevenly, dispersing before it could extend. On the fourth, mental noise intruded; memories surfaced unbidden, disrupting his focus.

His thoughts sharpened with each failure.

'Am I pushing too much chakra?'

'Is it too dense?'

'Am I fragmenting my focus?'

He adjusted instinctively, making micro-corrections with each attempt. Sweat beaded on his brow, a single drop trailing down his temple with a faint tick as it struck the mat.

Across from him, Shiro activated his chakra field fully.

At first, his expression remained neutral as he observed the structure of Satoru's chakra. He sensed irregularities; fluctuations that did not align with typical patterns. Time passed, marked only by Satoru's measured breathing and the soft fsssh of incense.

Then Shiro's brows knit.

Concern surfaced in his eyes for the first time.

'The clan head was right,' he thought. 'Exceptional sensory potential.'

A memory surfaced unbidden; words spoken in private council.

'But did they test him in 'that' way?'

The realisation struck him with sudden clarity; something fundamental was wrong.

"Stop," Shiro said sharply.

Satoru froze mid-breath.

The word landed like a blow. Frustration peaked, coiling tight in his chest. He lowered his hands slowly, eyes dropping to the mat as the familiar weight of failure pressed down on him.

Shiro raised a hand.

"We are making no progress," he said. "We will test something else first."

Satoru clenched his jaw, annoyance flickering beneath his composure, but curiosity won out. He nodded once.

"Alright."

"Clear your mind," Shiro instructed.

Satoru complied, drawing a steady breath.

Shiro formed a single hand seal.

Satoru felt a sudden pull; sharp and disorienting, like the floor dropping away beneath him. The world tilted; sound vanished; light collapsed inward.

Darkness.

When he awoke moments later, the hall swam into view. He blinked rapidly, disoriented, his head pounding faintly. He noticed immediately that Shiro's expression was grave.

"What…?" Satoru began.

"I have identified a problem," Shiro said plainly.

Satoru's heart skipped. "What problem?"

Shiro hesitated, just briefly.

Then he said, "You are not suitable for Yamanaka clan techniques."

The words fell like a guillotine.

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