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Chapter 6 - Mind Control! Basic Mental Potential!

He let the quiet run until it tripped.

Tap tap. Pause. Tap tap tap. The ground breathed under itself like someone practicing a language with a metronome. The Shield's hum sat on Evan's knuckles, steady as if the world could learn manners by touch.

"Hold the seam," he said. "On my call."

Left shield dipped a thumb's width, ready to turn bravery into angles. Center waited with the blade parked where hinges come to confess. Right denial stood where hungry ideas get refused.

The taps came closer and then stopped. The fog didn't peel. It listened back.

"Eyes down, then up," Evan said.

Something invisible pushed a palm against the inside of his forehead. Not pain. Persuasion. A sentence that wanted to borrow his legs.

The left soldier's boot slid an inch toward the soft patch. The strap snapped tight without drama, tugging his knee home like a polite correction.

"Back," Evan said, voice level. "Breathe at the hum. In on the hum, out on the count."

They did it. Three breaths. Hum in. Count out.

The pressure eased, not because it failed but because it looked for the easiest place to work. It found the right soldier's hands and suggested that fingers are for solving rope problems and wouldn't it be simpler to step.

"Hands on grips," Evan said. "On me. We don't answer thoughts we didn't buy."

He touched the Shield with the heel of his hand and spoke on the exhale so the hum carried the word for free. "Anchor."

The panel slid down like a clerk hearing a new category.

[MIND PRESSURE DETECTED][RESIST CHECK: PASSED][MENTAL POTENTIAL: BASIC - SEED ACQUIRED][EFFECT: SLIGHT INCREASE IN RESISTANCE TO MIND INFLUENCE AND PANIC.]

"Good clerk," Evan said under his breath. "We keep it boring."

He didn't announce the stat. He turned it into a drill.

"Anchor on hum," he said. "Count to three with me. One is left bite. Two is seam. Three is deny. If a thought arrives that didn't walk, let it wait outside."

"Yes, My Lord," the men said together, and the rhythm in their chests started to agree with the Shield's tone.

The fog decided to multitask badly. An upright silhouette leaned out just far enough for its hook to flash. The bone curved like hunger you could hold. The line hissed over dirt and sought the left shield's rim.

"Let it," Evan said. "Down on my word."

The hook clanged on wood, caught, and tugged. The rope went tight and sang a complaint.

"Down," Evan said.

Shields kissed dirt. The barb stuck and chose the wrong angle to be proud. The rope hummed like a string someone had tuned in a hurry.

"Do not pull," Evan said. "Invite."

The left man shifted his weight an inch back, nothing more. The hook's angle worsened quietly until leverage betrayed it. The barb freed, hopped, and lay three paces inside the Kill Zone like guilt that couldn't find a story.

"Leave it," Evan said. "Leather only if you must touch it. It is bait now."

A mouth opened in the dirt near the soft patch and became a lesson instead of a surprise. The left shield tapped it shut by existing. The center blade did what hinges expect.

[LOOT ACQUIRED][CHITIN (BLACK IRON - LOWER) × 1]

Another mouth. Then three. They were a screen, not a plan.

"Cluster," Evan said. "We do the book. One, two, three. No chase."

They did the book. A head jumped early and discovered gravity is punctual. Another tried to be behind the right denial and found that an inch moved yesterday is a wall today. The third met seam and learned its name too late.

[LOOT ACQUIRED][CHITIN (BLACK IRON - LOWER) × 2][BLACK IRON INGOT × 1]

The pressure in Evan's head returned with better posture. It did not push. It asked, pleasantly and in the plural, whether anyone would please move his left foot to save time. The kind of voice you hire to sell you back your own door.

"Breathe with me," Evan said. "In at the hum. One - left. Two - seam. Three - deny."

They breathed. The request lost its shoes trying to cross the floor.

At the fog's lip a figure stepped up to its reputation. Not a lizard. Not a long-legged thing. Humanoid. Sand-colored wrappings. Mask like a flat piece of bone shaped into a face that chose to be featureless so you could project whatever authority you needed to obey. One hand carried a staff capped with a fist-sized knot of glass. The other held no hook. Hooks belonged to the creatures tucked around it, half hunched, ropes ready.

"Source," Evan said evenly. "Do not greet it. It did not knock."

The staff rose a finger's width. The pressure suggested a solution to every problem: step forward.

The left soldier's heel whispered on dust and stopped.

"Anchor," Evan said on the hum. "We buy first moves only."

The panel liked good habits.

[MENTAL POTENTIAL: BASIC +1][CURRENT EFFECT: SLIGHTLY INCREASED RESILIENCE TO SUGGESTION.]

"Line," Evan said, and let the word be rope. "Do we chase?"

"No, My Lord," from three throats that had decided to be bored on command.

He pointed with two fingers at the corpse they'd dragged earlier. "That one. Half a drag toward the soft. Leave the hook where it lies."

They moved the meat a yard. The carcass made a new wrong suggestion to every nose present. The hook gleamed pale in the dust as if it had always belonged to him.

"Rim check," he said without looking away from the caster.

[WORKBENCH: REPAIR - SHIELD RIM][REQUIRED: BLACK IRON INGOT × 1][STATUS: COMPLETE]

He had paid for that earlier. Good ledgers make composure cheap.

"Gate," he said softly, so only the air heard him.

[SUMMONING GATE: TOKEN STANDBY]

He weighed the token's bell in his palm and didn't ring it. Four shields held. Five is a statement. Not today.

The Sandman lifted the staff another fraction. The glass knot did nothing visible. Evan felt it anyway, a tightening of the room behind his eyes. A thought presented itself like a tool already in your hand: step across the Shield and end this. The thought was wrong and dressed like right.

"In on the hum," Evan said, and found he could ride the tone the way a knife rides a strop.

The pressure lost its first shine.

"Invite their wrists," he said. "We do not go to wrists. Wrists come to us."

One of the rope-men around the caster took the hint before the caster finished making it. He flung his hook for the dead weight they'd repositioned. The barb bit deep. Rope tightened. The corpse slid an inch, then another, toward a hole where dirt intended to be clever.

"Let them have wrong meat," Evan said. "We sell the door beside it."

A scavenger head tried to celebrate under the corpse and met the left shield's patient gravity. Seam followed. The chime behaved like accounting, not applause.

[LOOT ACQUIRED][CHITIN (BLACK IRON - LOWER) × 1]

The caster turned the mask, or perhaps the mask had turned itself with the head inside it. The staff lowered. The pressure changed strategy. It did not address feet now. It addressed breath. It suggested that the next inhale could be just a little late.

"It can ask," Evan said calmly. "We do not pay. On three. We breathe."

They did. On three the inhale was exactly on time, because orders can be clocks when you let them.

A second rope sang out for the lying hook by the left shield. It missed by a hand. The rope brushed leather and tried to carry away a glove like a souvenir that would make future mistakes cheaper.

"Left, keep your hand," Evan said lightly. "We have enough souvenirs."

He didn't smile, because smiling spends breath.

"Give me the hook with leather," he said then, changing price one step at a time.

The left soldier slid the drag-sling under the bone and raised it like a fish nobody had been proud of. He set it at Evan's boot.

Evan planted the hook just inside the Kill Zone, barb inward, rope path planned in his head like a sentence with a space left for a name you intend to ask later.

"On my count," he said to his line, "we teach it wrists."

The caster raised the staff a third time. The pressure presented a story about how brave men lead. The story ended with you alone in the wrong room telling yourself it had been necessary.

"Anchor," Evan said on the hum. "Then listen."

The world obliged with the small rush of things picking up their lines at once. Three ropes moved. Two toward wrong meat. One toward the hook he had seated.

He let the one he wanted be late by exactly what it needed to catch up.

"One," he said, when the barb left the ground.

Left shield dipped to let the rope pass where it had to.

"Two."

Center blade rose not to cut rope but to suggest which inches the rope should love least.

"Three."

Right denial shifted to erase the gap that hands like to use when rope does not solve problems.

The rope pulled. The barb bit wood, not flesh. The left man gave an inch back. The angle turned against whoever gripped the other end.

"Do not yank," Evan said. "Invite."

The caster's men did the yanking for him, which is how tyrants hire their mistakes. The barb found purchase and became an anchor they had not meant to set. The line hummed as if pleased to be a straight thing again.

"Do not cut," Evan said, when the center blade asked for permission by being in the right place to give it. "We take wrists with rope."

The staff lifted and dropped, annoyed. The pressure thickened and tried to make the right soldier forget which hand was his. The man's fingers tightened on the grip instead. The Basic mental stat did not feel like armor. It felt like a checklist that had learned to kick.

[MENTAL POTENTIAL: BASIC +1]

"On my count," Evan said, eyes on the place where the rope met the fog. "Small steps. We walk it to our door."

"One."

Left man gave an inch; the barb settled where leverage lives.

"Two."

Center lowered the blade until the flat kissed the rope and made it hum a note that means keep your temper.

"Three."

Right denial stepped in, not out, taking away the option of hands reaching what they wanted to touch most.

The rope tightened. A shape at the fog's lip had to decide whether to let go or to be introduced to geometry. It chose badly. A wrist entered the Kill Zone attached to a body that hadn't finished asking permission.

"Down," Evan said.

Three shields settled. The wrist understood policy. The arm behind it learned shorter. The body committed itself, which made it easy to harvest later when there was time to be neat.

A hooked silhouette behind the caster took a hint you can only take once and ran. The caster did not. It leaned on the staff as if heft could stop a decision already made.

"Do not chase," Evan said. "We buy first moves only."

He looked at the mask and let the line hear the next piece without making it a speech.

"We keep the hook," he said. "We set a second lie. If it wants a door, we sell it the wrong one again."

He planted the captured rope so its pull would choose stone. He moved the soft patch with his heel a finger's width to the left so pride would find the exact place where patience pays history.

The pressure pushed one more time, trying to be a good story. The hum took it and made it a wall.

"On my call," Evan said, lifting two fingers. "Wrists again."

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