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Ashes of the Last Dawn

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Chapter 1 - Chapter 1 – Ashes of the First Night

The end of the world did not come with thunder or fire.

It came as a whisper.

A soft hiss in the sky, like paper being torn across the heavens.

At first, people thought it was nothing — maybe the storm season arriving early. Clouds had been heavy all week, rolling black on the horizon like bruises in the sky. But then the ash fell.

Not flakes of snow, not soot from some distant fire. This was thicker, darker. It drifted in sheets across rooftops, layering over cars, coating skin. It carried a smell — burnt copper and something sour, like rotten eggs. By nightfall, every street in the city of Dunmar was grey. People joked that winter had come early, that the power plants must have blown smoke again. They didn't joke long.

Because the ash moved.

Under streetlamps, when the wind stilled, it didn't settle naturally. It swirled, curling into shapes too deliberate, as if unseen hands stirred it. Some swore they saw faces in it — gaping mouths, eyeless sockets. A child pointed at the drifting veil and said, "They're whispering."

By midnight, hospitals overflowed. The ash clogged lungs, thick and gritty. People coughed black. Infants suffocated in their sleep. And those who inhaled the most began to change.

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The First Break

I was standing outside the station when I saw it. I had been a police officer for eleven years, but I knew nothing in my training prepared me for that night. The streets were empty, the city muffled beneath its blanket of soot. Snowstorms silence a city; so did this, but it wasn't silence. It was listening.

That was the impression I couldn't shake. Every breath, every step crunched too loudly, as if the air itself was eavesdropping.

And then the man stumbled from the alley.

He was coughing, bent double, his body caked in ash. I went to help him — instinct. His skin looked wrong, charred in places, flaking like paper. His eyes glowed faintly red beneath lids heavy with soot. He reached for me, and his hand disintegrated at the fingertips, scattering embers.

"Help—" he rasped. Then his throat split open.

The ash poured out of him.

Not blood. Not vomit. Ash. Black clouds vomiting from his lungs until his whole body collapsed, bones cracking like charcoal under heat. And from the heap that used to be him, something clawed its way upright.

Its body was a ruin of burnt flesh, its head little more than a skull wreathed in embers. It screamed — not with a voice, but with the sound of a hundred papers tearing at once.

And then another rose. And another.

The first of the Ashborn.

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Fire Does Not Burn Them

The city went to fire that night. Gunfire, car alarms, windows shattering. People ran, stumbled, choked. The Ashborn moved through streets in clouds, their bodies crumbling and reforming, scattering soot with every lunge.

We shot them. Bullets punched holes, but every hole became a mouth spilling more ash. Fire worked worse — flames only fed them, glowing hotter, stronger.

I remember sprinting through Fourth Street with a boy under my arm, his mother gone in the chaos, his screams thin and broken. Behind us, ash roared, filling the alley like smoke from a furnace. It burned the back of my throat even as I tried not to breathe.

The boy coughed, and my stomach turned cold. Was he changing? Was he already one of them?

I didn't stop running to find out.

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Collapse

By dawn, Dunmar was gone. Entire blocks collapsed beneath the weight of soot. People suffocated in their homes, trapped behind doors that would not open against the pile pressing in. Cars clogged highways — desperate families trying to flee. Their engines choked out, clogged by dust.

The Ashborn swarmed over them. Hundreds at a time, ember-eyed figures tearing at windows, spilling blackness into the cabins.

We tried radios, but all we heard was static. Static that sometimes sounded like breathing. Sometimes like whispering.

The world had ended in one night, and we hadn't even understood what had killed us.

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The Choice

By the time I found the others, I had stopped believing in rescue. We huddled inside the metro tunnels, the boy, a nurse named Karis, two teenagers, and an old mechanic with trembling hands.

We didn't speak much. Speaking felt dangerous, like it would draw the ash down. Karis tied cloth around our mouths and told us to breathe shallowly. It didn't help much.

The boy was feverish, skin pale beneath streaks of soot. I thought of leaving him. I thought of putting a bullet in him. But he looked at me with cracked lips and whispered, "Don't leave me."

I didn't.

That was my choice — one that would follow me into every other night of ash.

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