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Forsaken (by ModyVampQuill)

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I walk through streets where no feet fall, where shadows curl and stretch and crawl. I feel them linger behind my back, a hundred eyes in the endless black. They’re watching me from cracks and seams, from behind the veil of shattered dreams. Faces? Forms? Flesh and bone? Or just endless stares that pierce my own? I hear them whisper, soft and thin, inside my skull, beneath my skin. A scraping chorus, a maddening hum, like teeth on glass, a funeral drum. Every laugh around me turns to screams, every smile fractures into schemes. I stand apart, the freak, the blight, the broken thing that shuns the light. As if the sun recoils when I emerge, the stars retreat, the oceans surge. Even the moon averts its gaze from the monster forged in a hellish blaze. There is no sleep, no peace, no end, just endless eyes that twist and bend. my mind, splits and breaks, until the very earth forsakes. I claw my ears but the noise won’t cease, their whispers rising, piece by piece. I can hear them croon and moan, “You walk this world unloved… alone.” And so I wander, mad, undone, beneath the gaze of everyone. And though I beg, though I awaken, I am forever… forsaken.
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Chapter 1 - CHAPTER 1 : EYES

It begins as a whisper at the edge of my awareness

 —a sensation, subtle yet insistent, that burrows

 beneath my skin. At first, I dismiss it as paranoia,

 the lingering remnants of some half-forgotten

 dream. But it does not fade. No, it grows, like a

 shadow stretching under the dying light of day. I

 feel their eyes on me. They are everywhere. In the

 stillness of the morning, when the sun's first light

 breaks through the blinds, I feel it. The warm rays

 touch my skin, but they do not comfort me. Instead,

 they illuminate my every flaw, every imperfection,

 as though the world itself is scrutinizing me. Every

 crack in the plaster, every creak of the wooden floor,

 becomes a conspirator in this silent surveillance.

 The world seems unchanged. People go about their

 lives—walking their dogs, chatting over coffee,

 scrolling endlessly through their devices. They

 laugh, they cry, they pretend. Yet, beneath the

 veneer of normalcy, I can feel their eyes. Hidden

 behind smiles, beneath the glassy reflections of

 store windows, even in the soulless glow of

 streetlights at dusk. They are watching. Always

 watching.

 

I tell myself I'm imagining things. I try to move

 through the day like everyone else, wearing the mask of

 normalcy. But no matter where I go, no matter how

 crowded or empty the place, the feeling never leaves. It

 clings to me like a second skin, tightening with every

 passing moment. In the office, the hum of computers

 and the murmur of coworkers become a chorus of

 unseen whispers. In the crowded subway, every glance,

 every accidental brush of a hand, feels like an intrusion.

 Even in the solitude of my own home, the walls seem to

 breathe, their invisible eyes locked on me. There is no

 sanctuary. Not even the darkness offers reprieve. At

 night, when the world is supposed to be at rest, the

 shadows in my room deepen, stretching across the

 walls like gnarled fingers. I feel their presence in the

 silence, pressing down on me, a suffocating weight. The

 faint hum of the street outside becomes a sinister

 rhythm, a reminder that I am never truly alone. The

 worst part is how ordinary it all seems. The world

 continues to turn, indifferent to my torment. Friends

 and family offer their reassurances, their words hollow

 and meaningless. "You're just stressed. It's all in your

 head." But they don't understand. They don't feel the

 weight of a thousand unseen eyes drilling into their

 soul, peeling back the layers of their mind.

 

And it's not just people. The inanimate, too, have become conspirators. The blinking red light of the

 smoke detector, the reflective surface of a phone

 screen, even the unblinking stare of a clock face—

 all of them seem alive, their focus unyielding. It's

 as if the universe itself has turned its gaze upon

 me, dissecting my every thought, my every breath.

 Privacy is a forgotten luxury. I am an open book,

 my every move a line written for an unseen

 audience. I cannot escape their gaze, for it is woven

 into the fabric of existence. And yet, the most

 terrifying truth is that there is no malice in their

 watching, no grand conspiracy, no evil intent. It is

 simply… there. A passive, indifferent observation,

 as natural and unrelenting as the passing of time. I

 want to scream, to shatter the oppressive silence

 that surrounds me, but I know it would change

 nothing. The eyes would remain, as constant and

 unyielding as the stars in the night sky. For this is

 the nature of existence itself—a ceaseless

 observation, a reminder that we are all but actors

 on a stage, our lives laid bare for the cosmos to

 witness. 

And so, I endure, carrying the weight of their gaze. But the

 question gnaws at the edges of my mind, relentless and

 unanswerable "Who are they? And why can't they look

 away?" My name is Adam. I've lived under the unrelenting

 gaze of the world for as long as I can remember. The feeling

 wasn't something that crept into my life slowly, like a

 shadow stretching at sunset. No—it was always there. From

 the moment I learned my first words, I felt the weight of

 invisible eyes pressing down on me, scrutinizing my every

 breath, my every thought. As a child of fifteen, I should

 have been free. Free to explore, to stumble and rise again,

 to make the mistakes that come naturally with youth. But

 that wasn't my reality. Every small misstep I made was

 magnified, twisted into an unforgivable sin. My mother,

 the woman who should have been my shield, became my

 harshest judge. Her gaze bore into me, not with the

 warmth of love but with the cold, unyielding severity of

 disappointment. I would drop a glass, and she would look

 at me as if I had shattered the very foundation of our

 home. "Adam," she would say, her voice heavy with disdain,

 "why must you always ruin everything?" The weight of her

 words pressed into me, a brand seared onto my soul. And it

 wasn't just her. My teachers, my peers—they all seemed to

 share that same unspoken agreement. Adam must be

 watched. Adam must be held accountable for every minor

 flaw. 

School was no refuge. It was a battleground. The

 other kids—brats, really—found a perverse joy in

 tormenting me. They were masters of deception,

 capable of causing chaos and pinning the blame on

 me without hesitation. A missing textbook? Adam

 must have stolen it. A shattered window? Adam must

 have thrown the stone. Their lies were their shield,

 and my silence, born of exhaustion and futility, was

 my undoing. But there was one day—one defining

 moment—when everything changed. It began like any

 other: the usual jeers and taunts, the cruel laughter

 echoing in the hallways. But this time, they went

 further. They cornered me, their grins malicious,

 their words venomous. "Look at him," one sneered.

 "Always so quiet, always so pathetic." Another shoved

 me, his eyes alight with a sick pleasure. "Do

 something, Adam. Or are you just going to stand

 there like the useless trash you are?" And then it

 happened. A surge of emotion, raw and untamed,

 rose within me. It was like a storm, a tempest of fury

 that I could no longer contain. My vision blurred at

 the edges, my heart pounded with a deafening

 rhythm, and my hands trembled—not with fear, but

 with an overwhelming, all-consuming force.

 

It was anger. No, it was more than that. It was

 rage. A primal, ancient fury that coursed through

 my veins, igniting every nerve in my body. It was

 as if every injustice, every insult, every ounce of

 pain I had ever endured had coalesced into a

 single, undeniable force. My mind screamed for

 release, for retribution, and in that moment, I

 could no longer hold back. Before I knew it, my

 fist connected with the face of the nearest bully.

 There was a sickening crunch as his nose

 shattered under the force of my blow. Blood

 spurted from his nostrils, and his eyes widened in

 shock and pain. The other boys stepped back,

 their laughter silenced, replaced by stunned

 disbelief. But I felt no triumph, no satisfaction.

 Only a hollow silence as the red mist of my rage

 began to fade. And then, as expected, the world

 pounced. I had messed up. I knew it even before

 the principal summoned me to his office, before

 the disapproving glares of my teachers bore down

 on me, before my mother's voice, cold and cutting,

 condemned me once again. "How could you,

 Adam? What have I done to deserve such a

 disgrace for a son?" 

It was as if the universe had been lying in wait, ready

 to descend upon me the moment I faltered. My act of

 defiance, my brief moment of standing up for myself,

 was not seen as the righteous defense of a tormented

 soul. No, to them, it was a confirmation of my failure, a

 testament to my inherent flaws. And this wasn't the

 last time. Time and again, I would find myself pushed

 to the brink. And each time, I would snap under the

 pressure, committing some foolish act that only served

 to tighten the noose of judgment around my neck. It

 was as though the world was a predator, circling its

 prey, waiting for that inevitable misstep, ready to

 pounce and devour me whole. In those moments, I

 realized a bitter truth: the world does not wait for

 grand failures. It is the small mistakes, the quiet lapses,

 that it seizes upon, magnifying them until they

 become unbearable. And for me, it felt as though every

 gaze, every word, every breath conspired to remind me

 that I was never safe, never free from its watchful eyes.

 The weight of their judgment was suffocating, a

 constant reminder that I was, and always would be, a

 prisoner of their expectations. My life was not my own.

 It was a performance, scrutinized and critiqued by an

 audience I could neither see nor escape. And the most

 terrifying part? They didn't even need to speak their

 condemnation. Their silence was enough.