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Chapter 11 - Ashes

The bakery was silent...not a sound..! Quite unusual

The room smells of yeast,sugar and something fishy... something wrong.

But if you stood at the door,you won't notice

No one would!

It pretended to be normal!

On the inside, under the hum of old red and yellow lights,a young man lay inside the oven.

He was unconscious to protest,to scream for help and beg for mercy. Or even regret coming to work when no one was here.

Work was the only thing that can make him sane

The past two months were hellish,his nightmare constant and he can't seem to be in control of his mind anymore.

Only the dough fills him and only the dough will be with him till the end.

His life slowly going over his numb fingertips. The sedative numb him, sinking deep into his every nerve, turning his thoughts into mush.

His slow but rhythmic breathing pace,he couldn't feel the heat creeping in

00:02:14

The timer count down blinked red!

Nothing could stop it

Orion had no idea this would be his end.

If he did he would have preferred death with his family rather than suffer something painful despite his disarray mind

Well he didn't! And there's no escape! No turning back! No regrets!

All he wanted was a stable life

Food on his table, little cash for cotten candy,no disturbance from John or anybody,and more dough to knead, perhaps a promotion!

All he wanted was to fill his meaningless existence with something peaceful... something he can call " MINE!!"

Is there any chance to wallow in pain or regret?

Not a chance!

From below,a cockroach crawled near the oven,it skittered,then paused, before running back to it's hole... running again towards an opening

Trying to save it's life...sensing what humans can't

The temperature climbed... slowly... with so much cruelty

Outside, laughter across the street increases,a lemonade shop seems to be getting customers. A man sighed in satisfaction from the cold refreshing sweet sour taste

No one look over or can guess what's going on inside the oven room

No one knew what was going down

00:01:41

In dim heat, Orion's fingers twitched

Not from will...just muscle resistance

Somewhere in the dark part of his brain,an old voice echoes

"Don't ever think of giving up boy!"

Faint.. possibly real or not

Perhaps a flicker of his memory or not

At this point one can't be sure of anything...the heat is mushing our thoughts

Another image pops in,quite beautiful autumn spring with fine leaves and mid wind blowing

A hand... holding the string and a blue kit flying so free in the sky

It was peace

It was happiness

Something he had wanted that he can only have in his mind

His dreams are fake!

Nothing can never be his

Not even a simple life

Only suffering

Then a laugh..!

Then nothing!...it was all gone

00:01:20

The oven door rattled. Heat wrapped the metal,beads of heat and strings of evaporation flushed off

The time beside the oven pulsed in blinking red lights rhythmically

No alarms. No warning

Time is indeed a cruel judge with no mercy, moving fast and forward.

The new manger passed by...he came back to grab his house keys. Locking himself out is a bit unusual.

He paused..frowned

Something wasn't right!

It doesn't feel right !

He walked around, realizing it's passed time for closing. The bakery hasn't been doing well since the tragic event. Just few workers who choose to come and go.

Seeing the closed sign,so visible across the oven room. He presume no one was there. Orion hadn't been himself which was obvious..and earned him few rest at his disposal.

The manger decided to let it go!

Only if he had knew?

What could have been done?

00:00:54

Inside,the room smells of burning dough,not fully baked but really burnt.

Smells like a bitter accident no one would thought off..

If someone was in..they might have noticed but no one was!

Orion's body shifted slightly with swelling heat

His brows glistened,even in unconsciousness his lips twitched once.

00:00:30

The wires cracked...faint but alive

The small dough sat besides the oven, forgotten, unbaked, untouched,the one thing that keeps him alive and sane is now the one thing that remains with him...

In his memory forever...! That's if he can remember

The light bulb flickered once...twice...then out!

00:00:10

Fire waited..

Outside was cool,a new shop is opening! A cake store, people flooding in and out with happy faces and delicious treat...

00:00:03

00:00:02

00:00:01

Silence...

00:00:00

The blast was like a slit sound..then thunderous

It pulsed and swept the bakery in one full scoop

Windows and glass shattery. Wave of heat collapsed

Fire roared like a lion, swizzled like a snake devouring everything

Inside the oven, Orion ultimately vanished... completely

The place that felt like work, hope,new life,new smile ...

Now a shadow of what it was few minutes ago!

"Where am I?" A voice whispers in the void

"Welcome Orion Lawson!"

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