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Alright, let's carry the tension forward. After Elara's breaking point in Ch.14, Damian won't just let her crumble—he'll tighten his grip. Meanwhile, the captive's identity begins to matter more. Here's the next chapter, expanded past 500+ words.
Chapter 15 – The Price of Obedience
The metallic tang of blood lingered in the air long after the captive's scream had faded. Elara's hands still trembled, her knuckles pale, her palms slick with sweat and crimson. She pressed herself against the cold wall, as if the concrete could swallow her whole, hide her from what she'd just done.
But Damian wouldn't let her hide.
He stepped into her space, his shadow covering her completely. His suit remained flawless, untouched by the chaos he orchestrated. His hand tilted her chin up, forcing her gaze to meet his.
"You see now," he said softly, his voice like velvet wrapped around steel. "Power requires sacrifice. You've crossed the line, Elara. There's no going back."
Her breath stuttered. She wanted to scream at him, to tell him he was wrong, that this wasn't who she was. But the words tangled in her throat. Because the truth was bleeding before her, tied to a chair, groaning in agony because of her.
"I didn't…" Her voice broke. "I didn't want to—"
Damian silenced her with a finger against her lips. "Desire is irrelevant. Choice is irrelevant. Survival is all that matters. And you chose to survive."
The captive lifted his head, blood dripping from his shoulder, his swollen eye barely open. His voice was hoarse but burning with fury. "She didn't choose. You forced her."
Damian turned his head toward him, and in that moment the temperature in the room seemed to plummet. His gaze cut sharper than the knife Elara had dropped.
"You mistake coercion for clarity," Damian said coolly. "I showed her what the world truly is. Cruel. Unforgiving. Those who hesitate are crushed."
The captive spat blood onto the floor. "You're the one doing the crushing."
Elara's chest tightened. The man's words cracked something inside her, a small flicker of resistance buried under her fear. She couldn't deny the truth in them.
Damian ignored the insult. Instead, he bent closer to Elara, his hand still cradling her chin, his breath warm against her ear. "You'll thank me one day. For saving you from weakness."
A shiver ran down her spine. Not entirely from fear. And that scared her most of all.
He finally released her, turning to his men. "Take him away. Patch him up, but don't let him forget who holds his life."
The guards moved immediately, untying the captive only to drag him across the floor. He didn't stop glaring at Elara, his expression a blend of pain, disappointment, and something she couldn't name.
"Who is he?" she whispered as they hauled him out. The question tore from her before she could stop it.
Damian's eyes flicked to her, unreadable. "Irrelevant."
Her stomach churned. Liar. She could feel it in the way he said it—casual, dismissive, too quick. The man mattered. And that meant her test had been more than a lesson.
When the door shut, sealing them in silence, Damian reached for her hand. He lifted it to his lips, brushing a kiss across the palm still stained with blood. His voice dropped, deep and commanding.
"This is the price of obedience, Elara. You bled your innocence tonight. And now, you belong to me."
Her knees trembled, her chest constricted, and her heart screamed in confusion. Because as much as she wanted to hate him, a dangerous part of her felt drawn closer—like a moth circling the flame that would consume it.
And Damian knew it.