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Chapter 3 - Chapter 3 — Buy Box War

2:04 a.m. Neon washed the diner's chrome in bruised pinks and blues. Ethan Cole hunched over his laptop, the Traffic Boost countdown pulsing in the corner like a detonator: 00:55:12.

His page showed one glorious orange cart icon in Orders—proof he wasn't a ghost. Everything else was famine.

The System slid a new card onto the screen:

[Momentum Tip]

• Ship fast. Same-day handling increases offer health.

• Improve click-through: coupon + lifestyle image.

• Avoid price war. Create variation (2-pack) to escape repricers.

He was already halfway there. The two-pack variation had gone live. The lifestyle shot—the matte-black case in his hand against the diner's reflective edge—looked human, not stock.

He added a green 5% OFF COUPON flag. The platform immediately told him how much that bravado would cost in fees. He accepted without blinking.

[Coupon active | Estimated CTR +9–12%]

[Handling time: 0 days → Same-day dispatch enabled]

He printed the first shipping label on the diner's rickety receipt printer—thermal strips curling as they came. He slid the phone case into a bubble mailer, taped it closed, and dropped it into his backpack. There was a 24-hour postal kiosk four blocks away. He would mail it tonight. Metrics mattered, and he needed every atom of advantage Amazon's invisible math would grant a seller who moved like a machine.

On the dashboard, visitors started arriving like shy animals—sniffing, bolting, returning. The coupon flag did its job. The 2-Pack listing received a longer stare time.

The red banner returned anyway:

[Alert: Seller "PrimeChoiceGoods" adjusted price → $6.49 | Shipping: Free | Handling: Same-day]

[Buy Box share: 0% → 6% (you), 94% (competitor)]

Ethan tasted aluminum at the back of his tongue. $6.49 wasn't a price. It was a dare. He could chase it to the floor, bleed out with dignity, and die.

The System offered options with a surgeon's bluntness:

[Counter-Options]

Price Match → Buy Box share +12–20% | Margin: negative at $6.49

Variation Focus (2-Pack) → Avoid direct repricer | Margin intact

Micro-PPC Trial → $5 budget | Keywords: "no-logo slim case," "matte phone case," "minimalist case" | Audit risk +2%

Free Returns Flag → Conversion +3–5% | Return abuse risk +1%

He would not race a bot downhill. He toggled 2) Variation Focus, then clicked 3) Micro-PPC Trial. The System flashed an asterisked warning. He accepted it anyway.

Sponsored slots blinked to life in search results. His 2-Pack thumbnail—clean, white, the word MINIMALIST punchy in the title—appeared in the third position for no-logo slim case. Not page one nirvana, but not exile either.

Clicks rose. It was like watching a heart monitor finally find rhythm. One bounced. Another hovered. A third scrolled the bullets all the way to the bottom—Pocket friendly. Camera lip. Soft-touch grip.—and clicked Add to Cart.

Ethan didn't breathe. The screen changed:

[Order Placed: 1 unit — 2-Pack — $18.99]

[Task Streak: 2 orders within 60 minutes → Early Trust +]

The System stamped a new buff on his HUD:

[Micro-Trust: On-time Shipping + Early Orders → Visibility Multiplier ×1.15 (temporary)]

He had never loved numbers like this. He loved them now because they were indifferent. They didn't care about who you were in a garage under a building at 1 a.m. They only cared if you moved.

He slung the backpack over one shoulder, left cash on the table, and jogged into the cold. The city's breath condensed around him. Three blocks became two. Two became one. He fed the bubble mailer into the kiosk's mouth and watched it vanish down a rubber throat.

[Tracking Uploaded | Handling SLA: Met | Valid Tracking Rate: On Track]

He exhaled for what felt like the first time in an hour.

Back at the diner, the competitor had shifted again:

["PrimeChoiceGoods" price → $5.99]

[Note: Extreme undercut detected. Likely liquidating or using loss-leader.]

[Recommendation: Do not follow. Build defensible differentiators.]

Ethan sat, fingers hovering over the trackpad. Defensible. He had none of the usual weapons—brand registry, patents, influencer armies. What he had was speed, a system that wanted him to win—and a willingness to do the boring things fast.

He added Same-Day Handling to the 2-Pack as well. He rewrote the first bullet to mirror Keyword Radar's phrasing directly: No-Logo, No Bulk—Pure Minimalism. He moved the lifestyle image to slot two; the human shot always worked better earlier.

[Listing Quality Score: 84 → 88]

[CTR: +3% | Conversion: +2–4% (forecast)]

A new message slid up from the bottom of the screen:

[Direct Message (Buyer): "Does it fit around a camera bump?"]

[Response SLA: 24h | Fast replies improve seller metrics]

He answered in thirty seconds with a crisp line and a photo crop. Fast mattered more than perfect. Another message: "Is it rubbery or hard?" He replied: Soft-touch TPU, not sticky.

The Traffic Boost timer rolled past 00:21:09.

The VP's voice tried to creep into his head with that condescending cadence: You're idealistic. Ethan shut it out with motion. He created a 3-Pack phantom listing, then killed it. Too aggressive for now. He added a Gift Message option. He rechecked shipping weights to avoid a fee jump if someone sneezed. He set an alert to walk the package to the mailbox again at dawn if any more orders came in.

They did. A 2-Pack. Another single at $10.99. A third abandoned cart resurrected itself after he toggled Free Returns. He watched the order slip through, smiling without meaning to.

The System ticked off each win with unromantic precision:

[Orders in last hour: 4]

[CTR +11% vs baseline]

[Spend: $4.38 | Est. ACoS: 23% (trial)]

[Audit Risk Accrued: +3% (expires in 30 days)]

Fine. He would live with the risk. He was already living with worse.

The red icon flared again—but this time, it wasn't a price.

[Policy Notice: Your listing is under review for GTIN Exemption Use.]

[Reason: Report received alleging misuse of exemption.]

[Response Window: 24h | Provide evidence of product authenticity and brand status.]

The letters looked like ice. Somebody had filed a complaint, and Ethan didn't need a name on it to guess who had the motive and the habit of pressing advantage when it hurt.

"PrimeChoiceGoods," he said under his breath, tasting the syllables like something bitter.

The System didn't dignify the guess. It provided a path:

[Compliance Playbook (Trial)]

• Upload Invoice/Proof of Purchase (if available)

• State "Generic/No-Logo" truthfully; attach photos showing lack of branding

• Explain customer experience efforts (photos, returns, handling time)

• Avoid brand-name references

[Note: Honesty + Speed > Length. Template available. Use? Y/N]

He had no invoice. The case was a stranded mistake from months ago. He had truth and he had speed.

"Y."

A template populated with brutal economy. Ethan dragged in the lifestyle shot, took a quick video on his phone of the packaging (clear pouch, no branding), and attached it. He typed three sentences:

This is an unbranded, generic phone case sold as such. Listing uses a temporary GTIN exemption provided by Amazon. Photos and same-day handling demonstrate a clear, honest customer experience.

He hit Submit and felt the odd calm that sometimes follows the click you can't take back.

The Traffic Boost timer kissed 00:00:00 and expired. Orders slowed to a normal trickle—the real world returning after the carnival lights flicker out. He had four sales, a live coupon, a running micro-PPC, and a compliance grenade he'd lobbed into the dark with his name on it.

The laptop buzzed with one more notification:

[Message from "PrimeChoiceGoods"]

Nice little hour you had there. Tomorrow we play for keeps.

Ethan's lips thinned. Amazon's system didn't make it easy for competitors to message each other. This had come through Seller-to-Seller Contact—meaning the other guy had gone out of his way to make it personal.

He hovered over Report and didn't click it. Not yet. Let them believe he'd take the bait now, use up his anger on a form.

Instead, he opened Shipping and set a rule: All orders before 6 a.m. → drop at kiosk by 6:20. He scheduled alarms. He poured the cold coffee into himself like penance.

The screen dimmed and brightened as the diner's sign flickered. Outside, a delivery truck reversed with a long, plaintive beep. Ethan watched the clock flip to 2:57 and thought about the elevator, the fog on the glass, the ring disappearing under someone else's hand. Shame wanted space in him. He didn't give it any.

The System etched one last line across his vision:

[New Task (Optional): Hold Buy Box share ≥30% for 72 hours.]

[Reward: Keyword Radar (Full) 7-day trial | Cost: Audit Risk +5%]

He didn't decide. Not yet. Speed and honesty had bought him a day. He would spend it like a weapon.

He closed the lid, grabbed his backpack, and stood. The diner door chimed as he pushed into the cold.

Behind him, on the laptop he refused to carry anywhere but in his hands, the red Policy Notice tab kept blinking—patient, hungry, counting down.

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