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Chapter 5 - Chapter 5 — Predator in the Hall

The office still reeked of sweat, perfume, and sex. Helena lay draped across the desk, blouse torn, skirt bunched around her waist, body twitching with the aftershocks. Jack zipped up, grinning at the sight of her ruined mask of elegance.

She'd walked in like a queen. Now she was bent, broken, and moaning his name.

The System chimed, cold and sharp:

[New Rival Detected]

[Eros System User — Class: Predator]

[Status: Proximity — Within 50 meters]

Jack froze, every nerve wired tight.

Another player.

He glanced at Helena, still trembling, and leaned close. "Get up."

She blinked, dazed, lips swollen from biting back screams. "What—"

"Now."

[Obedience Whisper Activated]

Her body obeyed before her mind caught up. She stood, smoothing her skirt with shaking hands, eyes flicking to him for guidance.

The System pulsed again:

[Warning: Rival System User hunting the same target — Helena Cross]

Jack's grin sharpened. "Oh, so that's how it is."

The footsteps came first. Heavy. Confident. A presence that pressed down like a storm. Then he appeared: tall, broad-shouldered, eyes glowing faint red with the same HUD Jack saw in himself.

The man smirked. "Looks like I'm late to the party." His gaze slid over Helena, blouse torn, skin flushed. "But not too late to take my turn." I want to feel that pretty tight pussy of yours.

Helena gasped, instinctively pressing against Jack's chest. "Who… who are you?"

The rival's smile widened. "Name's Marcus. And sweetheart, you're my Quest."

The System roared in Jack's head:

[Rival Challenge: Marcus (Predator Class)]

[Objective: Secure Helena Cross as Asset]

[Reward: +1000 XP | Rival Suppression Bonus if Victor]

[Penalty: Asset Lost, -200 XP, Reputation Damage]

Jack gripped Helena's hip possessively. "She's already mine."

Marcus chuckled. "Funny. The System doesn't care who gets there first. Only who finishes best." What if we take turns ? Marcus smile widened.

Helena's eyes darted between them, panic mixing with heat. "I… I can't—this isn't—"

Jack leaned down, lips brushing her ear. "Ignore him. Focus on me."

Her body shivered. Marcus stepped closer, and a heavy aura pressed into the room like gravity itself.

[Rival Skill Detected: Predator's Presence]

[Effect: Weakens target's willpower, amplifies lust, overrides minor commands]

Helena whimpered, thighs clenching. Marcus smirked at the sound.

"See that? She's already melting for me," he taunted.

Jack snarled. The System pulsed again.

[Dominance Aura Activated]

[Effect: Suppresses rival influence within 3m | Resistance boost granted]

The pressure shifted instantly. Helena's eyes cleared, snapping back to Jack. Her breath hitched. "Y-you…"

Jack smirked. "That's right. You're mine."

Marcus's grin faltered. "Interesting. Looks like the System gave you teeth too."

He stepped closer. Jack shoved Helena harder against the desk, staking his claim.

He bent her over on the desk.

The System flared:

[Micro-Quest: Assert Dominance]

[Action: Force Target to choose between you and rival]

[Reward: +300 XP | Rival Influence Weakened]

Jack slammed his hand beside Helena's head, lips hot against her ear. "Say it. Who do you belong to?"

Her lips trembled, torn between the predator's pull and Jack's aura. Sweat rolled down her temple. "I—"

Marcus's aura pulsed harder, making her moan involuntarily. "Careful, boy. She wants more than one taste."

Jack growled and pressed in tighter. "Look at me, Helena. Say it. Now."

Her pupils dilated. Her voice broke, a ragged scream: "YOURS!"

The System exploded with notifications:

[Micro-Quest Complete: Assert Dominance]

[Reward: +300 XP | Rival Influence Suppressed]

[Target Bond Strengthened]

[Corruption +5]

Helena collapsed into Jack's chest, panting. Marcus's smirk twisted into a snarl.

"You think this is over? She'll crack again. They always do."

Jack's grin was feral. "Not this one. Not with me."

The System buzzed again:

[Rival Challenge Updated: Ongoing Contest for Helena Cross]

[Warning: Rival may attempt to reclaim target later]

Marcus's form shimmered, eyes glowing brighter. He gave a final sneer. "Enjoy her while you can. I'll take her when it matters." I'll have her choking on my dick sooner or later.

Then he vanished. Gone, like smoke.

Helena sagged against Jack, trembling. "What… what just happened?"

Jack tilted her chin up, forcing her to meet his eyes. "Another man thought he could take you. He was wrong."

Her lips parted. "I—I don't understand…"

"You don't need to," he cut in. "You just need to remember who owns you."

[Obedience Whisper Triggered]

Her voice broke into a desperate moan. "You. I'm yours."

The System chimed:

[Quest Progress: 75%]

[Warning: Rival Marcus will return]

Jack's grin widened. "Good. Let him come back. I'll break him like I broke you."

He dragged her back onto the desk, crushing her mouth with his. She met him frantically, clawing at him, body betraying everything her words couldn't. The System purred.

[Weakness Exploited: Voyeurism]

[Effect: Rival Influence reduced further]

[Reward: +150 XP]

Helena's cries tore through the office, reckless, shameless, echoing into the hall as if daring Marcus to return. Jack dick hard as ever slammed into Helena, stroking thrusting gently then roughly , sweat dripped off both there bodies Helenas pussy dripping with cum. It didnt stop until she was ruined again, clinging to him like her world would collapse without him.

As Jack zipped up, the System dropped one final warning across his vision:

[Hidden Alert: Marcus has claimed another target.]

[Asset Lost: Secretary]

Jack froze. His grin twisted into something darker.

"Oh, he wants a war," he whispered.

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