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Chapter 4 - Chapter 4:Rapid progress

The musty air of the shack was no longer just air. It was a thick, tangible sea of potential, shimmering with the invisible life of ambient mana. Each mote was a possibility, a particle of power waiting to be claimed. My grief for Elian was a cold, hard stone in my gut. My fury at the village was a smoldering coal. And my resolve—that was the bellows. Together, they had become a vortex, pulling the world's energy toward me. This wasn't the gentle, hopeful invitation of my first, fumbling attempts. This was a command. A sovereign's claim on his stolen birthright.

I sat cross-legged on the rough-hewn bed, the straw ticking poking through the thin blanket. My eyes were closed, but my perception was turned inward, then outward, feeling the flow. Tiny, almost imperceptible motes of light, visible only to this heightened sense, streamed into me. They flowed through my skin not like water, but like a cool, tingling mist, gathering in the hollow of my chest, feeding the dormant core that was my true self. I could feel it, a dim, dark red glow that brightened with each passing moment, pulsing like a newborn star struggling against the void to ignite.

A sharp, drilling pain blossomed behind my eyes, a familiar, unwelcome guest. It was the warning sign of a vessel straining, pushed far beyond its limits. A warm trickle of blood seeped from my nose, tracing a slow, deliberate path over my lip. The metallic taste bloomed on my tongue. I ignored it. I welcomed it. The pain was a price I was willing to pay. The weakness of this body was a wall, and I would be the hammer that shattered it.

More.

The thought was not a word, but a pure, undiluted intention. I pulled harder, drawing the mana from the very walls of the shack, from the air trapped inside, from the earth beneath the floorboards. The vortex intensified.

Hours bled together, losing all meaning. The gray, lifeless light from the single grimy window faded into the deep, solemn indigo of night. The temperature dropped, and a chill seeped into the shack, but I didn't feel it. The mana flowing through me was its own kind of warmth. The sounds of the forest at night—the hoot of an owl, the rustle of some small creature in the undergrowth—faded into a distant hum. My world had shrunk to the rhythm of my own heartbeat and the flow of energy into my core.

Only when the first true ray of sunlight, pale and weak, pierced the dusty window and fell across my closed eyelids did I finally, slowly, release the flow. The vortex dissipated. The mana settled.

I slumped forward, catching myself on trembling hands, my breath escaping in ragged, shuddering gasps. My head pounded, a brutal, rhythmic throbbing that made my vision swim. Every muscle in my body felt frayed and beaten. I was utterly, completely drained, yet… beneath the exhaustion, something was different. Something was fundamentally new.

I focused inward. The cool knot in my chest was no longer a dormant, inert pebble. It was a steady, faintly warm ember, glowing with a consistent, solid red light. It was small. It was the lowest possible stage of a core, the foundation upon which every cultivator built their power. But it was stable. It was mine. It was a foundation laid not with gentle care, but with bloody-minded desperation.

I opened my eyes. The beam of sunlight cutting through the dusty air and painting a bright rectangle on the packed earth floor seemed… new. I looked at it, and a new understanding, a latent knowledge gifted by the Forest-Fruit, clicked into place within my mind. I could feel the light on my skin, and it was more than just warmth. It was… sustenance.

Tentatively, I held my hand out in the beam. My body, starved and aching, began to passively absorb the photons, breaking them down into a basic, thrumming nutritional energy. It wasn't the same as eating a hearty meal—the gnawing emptiness in my stomach didn't vanish—but it receded, becoming a distant echo rather than a screaming, immediate demand. A ghost of a need my body no longer wholly relied on.

A slow smile touched my lips, cracking the dried blood there. This changed everything. My desperate two-week timeline to avoid starvation evaporated. I had time. Not just to survive, but to prepare. To become strong.

The next two months were a blur of relentless, obsessive effort. My world shrank to the confines of the shack, the small clearing outside its door, and the profound depths of my own being.

My days began and ended with core cultivation. Each morning, as the sun crested the trees, I would sit in its direct light, the Forest-Fruit's ability synergizing with my efforts. I learned to walk the razor's edge between drawing in mana as fast as possible and rupturing my own nascent energy system. The headaches and nosebleeds were constant companions, painful markers of my progress.

"Again," I would whisper to myself, my voice hoarse from disuse, as a particularly violent surge of mana made my vision blur and fresh blood drip onto my lap. I wiped it away with a grimace, focusing on the warm ember in my chest. Slowly, painstakingly, it grew brighter. Its red light became richer, more vibrant, more solid. It was no longer a faint glow but a definite, pulsing orb of concentrated potential energy within me.

But a core was just a battery. A beautifully crafted, personally forged battery, but useless without the wiring to channel its power. I needed to learn how to use the current.

My first experiments were with reinforcement. I remembered the stories and novels about cultivators strengthening their bodies with Qi, making their skin like iron and their punches able to shatter stone. The principle had to be similar.

Sitting on the cold earth floor, I focused on that solid red core, envisioning a single, trickling thread of its energy seeping out, flowing down the invisible pathways of my arms toward my hands. It was like trying to push cold, thick sludge through a network of clogged, atrophied pipes. My meridians, unused and underdeveloped, resisted fiercely. For a week, I did nothing but this maddeningly tedious practice: moving an infinitesimal amount of mana from my core to the tip of my index finger and back again.

I'd feel a faint flicker of energy, a whisper of warmth, and then it would gutter out, absorbed and dissipated by the lethargic, mana-starved flesh. Frustration was a constant temptation, but I crushed it. I was driven by the memory of Elian's weakness, of my own helplessness and humiliation in the village square.

Then, one afternoon, as a late autumn breeze sighed through the cracks in the shack, it happened. I focused everything on that single finger, pouring a steady, unwavering stream of mana into it. The skin grew warm, then hot, not unpleasantly so. I watched, mesmerized, as the faint red glow of my core became visibly traceable under the skin of my finger, a delicate, pulsing web of light. Heart pounding, I pressed the tip against the packed earth floor. Instead of the nail bending against the hardness, it scraped a shallow, clean groove into the soil. I had done nothing but touch it.

A laugh, sharp and triumphant and utterly alien to this place, escaped my lips. It echoed in the silent shack. That was it. That was the key.

I expanded the practice relentlessly. I learned to flood my legs with mana, to leap the ten feet to the shack's mossy roof, landing with a jarring impact that I quickly learned to cushion with a last-second burst of energy to my feet and knees. I reinforced my arms and fists, punching the thick, unforgiving trunk of a needled tree until my knuckles, protected by the thrumming energy, stopped bruising and the bark began to splinter and crack under the assault. My reflexes sharpened; the world seemed to slow down as mana-enhanced perception processed the minute details of a falling leaf's spiral or the frantic darting of a squirrel.

I was no longer a child trapped in a fragile prison of bone and weak flesh. I was becoming the architect, the warden, of my own body.

Next came true magic. Mana reinforcement was internal, turning my body into its own weapon. True magic was external, a act of will shaping the energy of the world outside.

I started with the elements I felt the deepest, most instinctual affinity for, fire and wind.

Fire was passion and destruction. It was the heat of my anger, the spark of my will to live. I would sit for hours, a single spark of mana coalescing above my palm. At first, it was nothing. Just a wisp of heat, a distortion in the air like over a hot stone. Then it became a faint shimmer, a lens focusing the sunlight. Then, nearly a month into this focused training, it happened. A tiny, flickering flame, the size of a candle's kiss, danced erratically above my skin. It was pathetic, a child's trick. But it was fire. My fire. My breath caught in my throat. I learned to feed it, to shape it with my intent, to compact it into a small, searingly hot projectile I could launch at a target. It would streak through the air and sizzle against a tree trunk, leaving a blackened, smoking mark. The smell of burnt pine became the smell of victory.

Wind was intuition and motion. It was the freedom I craved, the ability to be anywhere but here. It was subtler than fire, harder to grasp. I practiced by trying to still the dust motes dancing in a sunbeam, to bend the fall of a leaf from its predetermined path. My first success was a faint, almost imperceptible breeze that did little more than stir the dust on the floor. But I persevered, matching my breathing to the imagined rhythms of the air. Soon, I could conjure a sharp gust to slam the shack's stubborn door shut with a satisfying bang. I learned to focus it, to form a blade of compressed air that could slice a falling leaf in two with a faint whirring sound. Most crucially, I learned to wrap wind around my body, making my movements swifter, my leaps longer, my landings as light as a feather. It was the first taste of the freedom to come.

And then, there was the other power. The one I'd brought with me belonging to another world. The Tremor-Tremor Fruit.

I understood its nature instinctively. It was not mana. It was something else, a fundamental force of vibration bound to my very soul that used mana as a catalyst, a power source. It slept for a long time, until my core was strong enough to whisper to it.

One day, frustrated with the limits of my elemental training, I placed my palm flat against the largest tree in my clearing, a giant needled pine that had surely stood for a century. I pushed mana into my hand, not for reinforcement, but with a different intent. A vibrational intent. A desire to make the world shake.

A low, subsonic thrum traveled up my arm, a sensation that was felt more in the bone than heard. The tree didn't shake. For a heart-stopping moment, nothing happened. I felt a fool. Then, with a sound like a thousand tiny twigs snapping, a web of hairline fractures exploded from under my palm, crawling up the ancient bark for a full foot before the energy dissipated. The tree stood firm, mighty and untoppled, but a perfect, hand-shaped section of its outer bark had been silently turned to dry, crumbling powder.

My heart hammered against my ribs like a wild thing. This… this was a power of an entirely different magnitude. This was not reinforcement, nor was it simple elementalism. This was something deeper, more profound, and utterly terrifying.

I began to experiment in secret, away from the shack, deep in the woods where the sounds of cracking stone would not carry. I learned that the vibrations worked best through solid, continuous matter. The earth itself was my best conduit. A focused pulse of vibrational energy through my bare foot could create a localized tremor that cracked the ground in a ten-foot radius, sending shockwaves through the soles of my feet. But it was incredibly draining, consuming my hard-won mana at a terrifying rate.

The most practical application, the one I devoted weeks to mastering, was infusion. I took a stout branch of oak, whittling it with my mana-sharpened fingernail into a rough, knife-like shape. I gripped it tightly, pushed a steady stream of mana into my arm, and focused the vibrational energy down into the wood itself.

The branch shuddered violently in my hand, humming like a struck bell, threatening to shatter into splinters. It was a battle of control, a fight to find the precise frequency, to harmonize my will with the material's natural resonance. Sweat beaded on my brow. Finally, after countless failed attempts, I found it. A stable, deadly resonance. The humming settled into a barely-audible, high-pitched whine. I swung the branch at a head-sized rock.

The wood didn't break. Instead, the rock shattered into a dozen pieces with a loud CRACK, not from blunt force, but because the vibrations had transferred into it, overloading its structural integrity at a molecular level. I stared at the shattered remnants. I had effectively created a weapon that could bypass durability, that could break anything it touched. A weapon of absolute breaking though the smallest application of it drained large quantities of mana making it curantly my trump card.

During this period of intense physical and spiritual transformation, I noticed another, more subtle change. Two small, sensitive nodules on my back, between my shoulder blades, that I had long dismissed as strange bone deformities from a childhood illness, began to ache and itch with a persistent fervor as my core solidified and my mana reserves grew. The itch was a constant distraction, a nagging sensation that grew worse after every cultivation session.

One night, after a particularly grueling session of wind manipulation that had left every muscle screaming, the itch became unbearable, a burning, stretching sensation under the skin. On pure, raw instinct, I drew a large amount of mana from my solid red core—a reckless amount—and pushed it directly into those two aching points.

The sensation was beyond pain. It was a feeling of tearing muscle and stretching sinew, of bones reshaping themselves. It erupted across my back and shoulders. A choked cry was torn from my throat and I fell to my knees, my hands slapping against the cold dirt floor. There was a sound like unfurling sails, like the rustle of a thousand leaves.

From my shoulders erupted not one, but two pairs of wings.

They beat the air once, twice, a powerful, unexpected downdraft that stirred the dust and debris of the entire shack, sending Elian's papers fluttering. I gasped, the pain receding as quickly as it came, replaced by a bewildering sense of… fullness. Completion.

Twisting my head,my heart pounding a frantic rhythm, I tried to see them. They were real. They were a part of me. They were small, perhaps three feet in span each, but utterly breathtaking. The upper pair were a brilliant, snowy white, feathers like polished alabaster that seemed to gleam in the dim light. The lower pair, emerging from just beneath the first, were a deep, crimson red, the color of freshly spilled blood or a setting sun. In the middle of the two pair of wings a fist sized crimson flame rested,it was warm to the touch, thrumming with the same energy as my core.

Seeing this i knew it was a byproduct of my lunerian bloodline from this body finally awakening . Which prompted me to start to train me flight abilities and look more closely at wind magic to help air movement.

Flying was not easy. The first few attempts were comical, pathetic crashes into trees that left me tangled in undergrowth and picking leaves out of my feathers. It was a completely novel set of muscles to control, a new dimension of movement to master. But I learned. I used my burgeoning wind affinity to assist, to create lift and stabilize my clumsy, frantic efforts. Within a week, I could stay aloft for minutes at a time, wobbling unsteadily over the clearing. Within a month, I was swooping silently between the tall needled trees on the hill, a four-winged specter against the moonlit sky, the wind rushing past my face. It was freedom incarnate. It was a perspective I had never dreamed of.

Three months after I first opened Elian's diary and saw the reflection of a dead boy in a dirty puddle, I stood in the center of the shack for the last time. My body, though still a boy's in frame, was wiry and taut with lean muscle forged in mana and relentless exercise. My core pulsed with a steady, solid red light, a deep well of power that was mine to command. I could move faster than a striking snake, hit harder than a grown man with a hammer, and sense the world with a preternatural clarity. I could call flame and wind to my hand, and shatter stone with a touch.

The shack, once my prison, now felt like a cocoon. It was time to break out.

I gathered my pitiful belongings. The half-sack of stale oats, the rock-hard wedge of cheese, the few wizened potatoes—I left them. They were remnants of a life of scarcity. I took the small, coarse burlap sack from under the bed. I left the diary on the pillow. It was Elian's story, his pain and his love, and it belonged in this place. It was a grave marker. But I took the two gold coins from their hiding place. They were no longer my escape money. They were seed capital. I would use them to build a life worthy of the second chance his suffering had granted me.

I stepped outside into the dead of night. The world was painted in shades of silver and black. Below, the village of Stonehaven lay sleeping, its windows dark, its people ignorant. I felt no burning urge for revenge, no desire for a dramatic confrontation. Their small-minded cruelty was a relic of a past life. They were ants scurrying in the dirt, and I had grown wings. They were beneath me now.

I focused my will. With a soft, rustling sound and that now-familiar sensation of stretching fullness, my two pairs of wings—white and red—manifested from my back. They felt strong. They felt right. I poured mana into them, feeling the powerful muscles in my back and shoulders tense. With a single, powerful downstroke that kicked up a swirling vortex of dead leaves and dirt, I launched myself into the air.

I rose above the sagging roof of the shack, above the needled trees, into the vast, cold, open sky. The world spread out below me, bathed in monochrome silver moonlight. I could see the whole of the insignificant village, the dark, sprawling expanse of the forest beyond, and the thin, pale ribbon of a road leading away into the unknown.

I hovered for a moment, the steady beat of my four wings holding me aloft, and looked down at the lonely hill, the shack a dark blotch against the earth. A final, silent farewell to the boy who had lived and died there. Elian. And the boy I had been.

Then I turned my back on it all. With another powerful beat, I flew north, toward the horizon, toward a future I would shape with my own two hands,i did not know where i was headed but in truth i trusted my hearth. The night air rushed past me, cold and clean, carrying the distant, tantalizing scent of faraway places—of pine forests, of cold mountains, of seas I had only read about. I was alone, but I was free.

And the hunger in my chest was no longer for food, or for light. It was a vast, yawning hunger for more. More power. More knowledge. More of the world. And I would have it.

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