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Chapter 39 - Chapter 39: Hollow Drum, Carrying Names

Morning came square and useful. Oakwatch blinked — . (ready) from its glass eye; the river, fuller but polite, shouldered past Glass Isle; the horn cairns along Founders' Way hummed when Jory tapped them—each a syllable in the language of ready. 🙂

— Morning Brief — Novaterra• White-Cut (Day 2/6): repeat protocol at left bank (mid-sun)• Parley Prop: build hollow drum (transparent frame) for white checks• Day 3 prep: stretcher team (Calder/Ameline + binders) to receive Tomas if presented• Cordon: arcs steady; sand lines fresh; caltrops/whiplines reset (non-white)• After-Sight: Ready (0/1)• Spawn Window: 4–9 days (watch)• Morale: Work-bright, alert 🙂

"Make the drum so honest it embarrasses liars," Elara said.

Hadrik, Kessa, and Jory set to it like a joke they intended to win. Hadrik planed a ring from ash, Kessa riveted three spokes to a shallow rim, and Jory stretched thin hide across one face only, leaving the back open—a drum you could inspect by sight, not faith. Kessa stamped a small open circle on the rim with a gearwright's punch.

Jory thumped it with two fingers. Ponk—a proper hollow note, no pegs, no map hiding in wood. "If they bring a map," he said, wicked, "we'll hear the consonants."

Mara set the Parley Box again: water, shade, rules chalked where pride can read. "Water first," she reminded, ladle cocked like punctuation. 🍲😑

Bryn checked the bank, sanded the slickest lip, and put a child's toy—two pebbles and a stick—at the white line where idle fingers might learn count without planning trouble. Lia's cousin stood the child-sun at the clinic lane, chin high like a small magistrate. 🫡

Day Two White-Cut ran like a line that had practiced its meter. Ten foragers; no drums; Mokh counted with the paint-striped foremen; Tavi kept the rope token visible on his belt. Reeds gave; mats filled; one knife nicked a thumb and two short brought Calder to rinse and bind before embarrassment could ferment.

A small test came wrapped as courtesy: a mask on a stick, faceless lacquer, carried by a young cutter who paused at the line to ask—wordless—if he could prop it on the bank for shade.

Elara shook her head once, white steady. "No masks within white," she said, simple as gravity.

Mokh watched her say no the way a man watches a gate prove itself. He did not argue. The mask went back to the palisade.

Downstream, Bryn and Hale uncorked a mirror nest before it learned to squint—canvas, cheap glass, a child's slate with a Pike-style stamp that had forgotten to chip its serif. The boy under it looked at the water bucket, looked at Mara's ladle, and chose broom over coin after three sentences. 🍲🙂

— White-Cut (Day 2/6)• Foragers: 10 (no drums) → 8 mats (two sent back early)• Incidents: 1 thumb nick (treated); 1 mask denied at line; 1 mirror nest cleared• Conduct: wall steady; foragers cautious → cooperative; no stones (ours)

"Tomorrow is the name," Calder said as they packed away the salves. You could hear the binder's mind laying out towels and futures.

"Tomorrow is hills with eyes," Bryn added. "We'll put patience everywhere a foot can get greedy."

Aiden thumbed After-Sight and did not spend it. "We'll buy tomorrow with boring," he said. Elara approved that arithmetic.

They rehearsed the stretcher twice in the afternoon: Ameline at the head, Calder at the feet, Renard's two fox-lads at the corners to steady and not editorialize. Rella and Lute ran the serpentine screen to teach dust how to behave without becoming drama. Garran and Orla walked with standards planted in the rhythm of breath, not pride.

Venn posted a plain board at the river shrine—Green Terms—for everyone to read:

Cut tops, not roots.

No mats across white.

Eight mats full; two back early.

No drums; hollow drum for parley only.

Two short opens help; one long ends day.

"Why write what everyone already knows?" a mill hand asked.

"So tomorrow keeps remembering yesterday," Venn said, happy to be tedious.

Clove drifted by with empty hands. "The Moth will try a white with a drum," he reminded gently. "Make them knock on yours first."

"We'll let the air judge," Jory said, patting the hollow rim.

At Glass Isle, Kessa and Émile pulled two small lenses for Jory's shelf; the bench stayed covered when wind idled; the latrines minded their lids; the island smelled like heat doing its job. Calder signed off on water clarity with a smug jar. Hadrik banged the scorpion shed's roof one more time and declared it un-leaky, which is a word he swears is real.

The Fort smoked like a kettle counting to five with a cough. Tavi walked the palisade twice, rope token flashing like a patient word.

— Cordon Update• Fort: smoke anxious; sally appetite low• Spawn window: 4–9 days (watch)• West Run: quiet; no raider dust

Mara hung Night Soup by the shrine—the white awning now a shade where tired feet could learn to trust their own restraint. "Eat after you decide not to be stupid," she advised, which is a theology that travels well. 🍲🙂

"Novaterra," Aiden told the cairns and the tower and the island that held fire without gossiping, "we made white ordinary, built a drum too honest to lie, and staged a road where a name can walk without tripping on pride. No heroics. Just work." 🙂

Morning came in the shape of a promise. Oakwatch blinked — . (ready); the river practiced politeness; the cairns hummed all the same note when Jory tapped them—each a syllable in ready. 🙂

— Morning Brief — Novaterra (Day 3 White)• Name Walk: receive Tomas (if presented) under white; stretcher & screen ready• Hollow Drum: present at Parley Box; they knock it first; no drums otherwise• After-Sight: Ready (0/1)• Cordon: sand lines swept; knee teeth set (non-white)• Optics: no mirrors within bowshot (posted)• Morale: Work-bright, steady 🙂

Ansel cut the white posts anew; Garran and Orla planted semicolons where the bank had learned to lie overnight; Fen stood the middle; Reeve Piet set the reserve in the shade with the patience of a door leaned on. Jory hooded the gourds and set the hollow drum on the table, its open back facing the palisade like a dare.

They came.

Fourteen goblins this time: Mokh at point, jaw set; Tavi with the rope token and a face that had slept briefly; two paint-striped foremen; ten with mats stacked empty. Two more carried a litter—sticks and sacking—bearing a man whose cough had learned to be an argument. No drums.

They stopped at the line with a habit that looked like respect and felt like counting. Elara raised white to waist. Two short, soft, rolled the air flat.

"Hollow," Aiden said, tapping the drum's rim.

Mokh's eyes flicked. Pride decided to pretend it liked honesty. He tapped—the open ring gave back a clean ponk. Tavi tapped a second time, rhythm stall/edge—Ras's fingers echoed wait; left bank. The air offered only air. No pegs. No map.

A younger cutter reached, sneaky, for a pouch at his belt.

Mokh caught his wrist without looking. "White," he said in their tongue, and let go as if the word had weight.

Elara lowered white to the length of a breath—proceed.

The litter crossed the line between two semicolons and the world learned how a sentence carries a clause. Calder met them in three steps; Ameline lifted the cloth; the man on the sling blinked at sunlight like someone remembering his own name.

He was human. Forty maybe, with a beard sick people grow and the Millcross look you get from wind off stone—skin that freckled at the idea of work. A copper tag hung on a thong at his neck: Tomas, the T crooked where a child had once pressed too hard.

"Tomas," Elara said.

He coughed, then made a shape with his mouth that turned into a word. "Aye." The sound of riverbanks and grinding wheels.

Calder's hands were polite and busy. "Breathe here," he said, tucking a folded cloth into Tomas's palm and placing it at his mouth. "Little sips. Don't wrestle air."

Ameline palpated ribs, counted beats, nodded to herself. "No blood. Good." She smiled at Tavi because gratitude is also policy. Tavi looked at the smile like it was a tool he could learn.

"Proof," Mokh said, because dignity needed a ceremony.

Venn, who had arrived quietly with a slate and the pleasure of getting something right, asked three small questions a liar wouldn't know: "What color is Millcross mud in spring?" (Gray-green.) "Which tooth on the mill gear squeaks?" (Third from river.) "Who sells needles at market?" (Old Ana, and don't let her catch you short on coin.)

Tomas got two and laughed at the third until a cough pushed the laugh aside. "Ana's granddaughter now," he wheezed. "Ana's eyes went and her mouth got kinder."

"That will do," Venn said, happy as rainfall on books.

Calder raised a hand to Elara—the smallest two short a healer can make. She lifted white higher. "We carry him home under white," Elara said. "We return the litter at sun-down."

Mokh did not like that sentence and liked it anyway. "No stones," he said, warning or promise.

"No stones," Elara agreed.

The stretcher rose—Calder and Ameline at head and foot, Renard's fox-lads at the corners. Garran and Orla took two steps ahead and planted semicolons like road music. Rella and Lute drew a serpentine curtain at a polite distance that taught dust to behave without making theater. Jory walked with horn tucked under one arm, mouthpiece ready to refuse anyone's urge to run.

Aiden thumbed After-Sightonce. The world admitted one petty malice: a knee-stealing rut at the ford's lip; a canvas patch near the Knoll hiding a bead-seller's little stink packet. Bryn and Hale peeled off without drama; one sand sprinkle here; one wet cloth on a packet there. The road lied less.

— After-Sight• Used: 1/1 (Name Walk route); flagged knee-rut at ford; neutralized hidden stink packet near Knoll• Cooldown: 12h

They walked.

People learned how to not clap. Children learned how to wave without pride. Mara moved ahead with a cup of water that existed outside of politics. At the Knoll, Ana of Silverbrook stood from her bench with both hands on her knees and bit her lip when she saw the copper tag.

"Tomas," she said, a small sound with a large job. "You old fool." She met his eyes; he grinned like a broken fence letting light in.

"We'll bring him to Millcross first," Calder said. "Bed, broth, breathing. The market can have his grin tomorrow."

Mokh and Tavi stood at white and watched a man leave their shadow. Tavi lifted a hand; Tomas—out of breath and owning it—lifted two fingers back. It meant thanks in a dialect nobody had written down.

At Millcross, the door to a small cottage breathed like a tired lung. A woman with a braid like rope met them on the path and ran a hand down Tomas's cheek without asking permission. "Idiot," she said, the affectionate kind. The stretcher sank onto a clean pallet; Calder set breath and broth in their places; Ameline tucked a blanket that knew exactly how much to weigh.

Venn put Tomas's tag beside the bed like a ledger closing itself. Lia's cousin stood the child-sun standard in the corner and tried not to look like a hero. She failed with dignity. 🙂

Back at the river, Tavi looked at Mokh, then at the hollow drum, then at white. "He returns litter sun-down," Tavi promised, and Mokh did not contradict him.

"Bring two mats tomorrow," Elara said evenly. "We'll teach your cutters salve for sedge-bite. Bring no drums. Knock on ours."

Mokh grunted. Which is sometimes yes.

— Name Walk — Outcome• Tomas (Millcross) recovered under white; condition: weak cough; no blood• Route: secure; no incidents; After-Sight mitigations applied• Litter: to be returned at sun-down• Standing: trust +small; white respected by both lines; no stones; no drama 🙂

Evening poured honey on the Flats. Thorn and Bramble slept under their cloths like punctuation marks that know not to interrupt. The hollow drum leaned against the Parley Box, open back empty as a well-kept promise.

Mara ladled Night Soup at the river shrine. A fox-lad took two bowls to Millcross without crowing about it. 🍲🙂

Lucien arrived just long enough to take off his hat at white and put it back on at soup. "You have invented a corridor where courage can be quiet," he said, eyebrows conceding admiration.

"Corridors are cheaper than wars," Venn answered, already scribbling Name Walk (Day 3) at the top of a page he hoped would see a sequel.

Clove left a folded leaf on the Parley board.

You put a noun (Tomas) where there would have been numbers.Moth math hates nouns.Keep the drum hollow; keep the soup hot.— C.

Elara leaned her elbows on her knees and let her helm sit beside her like a dog taking a break. "Tomorrow we do it again," she said.

Aiden bumped her shoulder with his. "No heroics," he said.

"Just work," she finished, content.

"Novaterra," Aiden told the cairns and the tower and the river that had learned to carry a man without spending him, "we made a drum too honest to cheat, walked a name from shadow to bread, and taught feet to behave without applause. We used sight where malice hid and soup where pride wanted noise. No heroics. Just work." 🙂

The wind ran down a gourd and came out two short—make way. Sleep stepped into the road; the town did not charge it a coin.

— Evening Summary — Novaterra / Left Bank / Millcross• White-Cut (Day 2/6): completed; 0 stones (ours); 1 thumb nick treated; 1 mask denied; mirror nest cleared• Hollow Drum built & enforced (open-back inspection)• Name Walk (Day 3): Tomas recovered to Millcross; route secured; After-Sight used (ford rut, stink packet)• Green Terms posted; stretcher doctrine practiced; serpentine screen effective• Cordon steady; spawn window 4–9 days; Fort sally appetite low• Morale: Quiet-proud; white trusted; soup excellent 🙂

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