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Chapter 2: Ghost in the Machine

Consciousness returned slowly, like surfacing from deep water.

Alex's first thought was that he was having the mother of all hangovers, which was weird because he hadn't been drinking. His second thought was that he couldn't feel his body. Not numb—actually couldn't feel it at all. No weight, no substance, no physical presence whatsoever.

His third thought was panic.

He tried to open his eyes and realized they were already open. Or rather, he was seeing without eyes. The world spread out before him in impossible detail—every blade of grass, every particle of dust in the air, every minute variation in the bark of the massive trees surrounding him.

But it wasn't just visual information flooding his consciousness. Overlaid on top of everything, like the most advanced augmented reality system ever created, was data. Streams of it, flowing through the air in ribbons of light that only he could see.

A nearby tree wasn't just a tree—it was:

[Ancient Oak]

Level: 47

HP: 2,847/2,847

Mana Absorption: 12/sec

Status: Healthy

Growth Pattern: Optimal Root

Network: Connected to 17 adjacent trees

Alex would have stumbled backward if he'd had legs to stumble with. Instead, his disembodied consciousness simply drifted, the information flowing around him like he was swimming through an ocean of data.

This was impossible. Trees didn't have levels. They didn't have hit points or mana. This was the real world, not some fantasy game. Except...

A rabbit hopped out from behind the oak, and Alex's new perception immediately catalogued it

[Forest Rabbit]

Level: 3

HP: 45/45

MP: 12/12

Skills: [Keen Hearing], [Swift Escape], [Burrow] Threat Level: Minimal

Alex tried to speak, to call out, to make any kind of sound. Nothing. He had no vocal cords, no lungs, no physical form at all. He was pure consciousness floating in a world that treated reality like a video game's stat system.

The rabbit's ears twitched, rotating toward something in the distance. Its status changed:

Status: Alert → Fleeing

It bounded away just as the sound of voices drifted through the forest. Human voices, speaking in what sounded like English, though with an accent Alex couldn't place.

"—told you we should have taken the northern path," a woman was saying. "These woods are crawling with dire wolves."

"The northern path would have added two days to our journey," came a man's reply. "We have a contract to fulfill."

Alex's consciousness followed the voices, driven by desperate hope. People meant civilization. Civilization meant answers. Maybe even a way home.

He found them in a small clearing: three figures in equipment that looked like it had stepped out of a fantasy movie. The woman wore form-fitting leather armor and carried a bow that seemed to shimmer with its own inner light. The man was built like a tank, with steel plate armor and a sword nearly as tall as he was. The third member of their group was younger, maybe Alex's age, wearing robes covered in intricate symbols that hurt to look at directly.

And above each of their heads, Alex could see their information as clearly as if they wore nametags:[Lyra Swiftarrow]

Class: Ranger

Level: 23

HP: 287/287

MP: 156/156

Status: Cautious

[Gareth Ironshield]

Class: Paladin

Level: 25

HP: 445/445

MP: 89/89

Status: Confident

[Marcus Spellwright]

Class: Mage

Level: 22 HP: 178/178

MP: 334/334

Status: Nervous

Alex drifted closer, desperate to make contact somehow. As he did, he noticed something that made his nonexistent heart skip a beat. There were flows of energy connecting all three adventurers—streams of data that pulsed with each heartbeat, each spell cast, each skill used.

Marcus raised his staff, and Alex watched in fascination as mana flowed from the young mage's core, through specific neural pathways, and out through the crystal at his staff's tip. It was like watching a program execute in real-time, each step of the process visible and analyzable.

[Spell: Light Orb]

Mana Cost: 15 MP

Cast Time: 2.3 seconds

Duration: 30 minutes

Code Structure: Basic illumination loop with sustained mana draw

A soft, golden light bloomed above the group, banishing the shadows between the trees. In that moment, Alex understood something fundamental about this world: magic wasn't mystical or mysterious. It was just another programming language, one he could read as easily as Python or JavaScript.

"Something feels off about these woods," Lyra murmured, her hand never leaving her bow's grip. "Too quiet."

She was right. Alex's enhanced perception picked up the absence of normal forest sounds—no bird songs, no insect buzzing, no small animals rustling through the underbrush. Even the rabbit from earlier was long gone.

That's when Alex saw it. A massive shape moving between the trees, too large and too quiet to be natural. His consciousness automatically focused on it, and the data streams immediately provided identification:

[Shadowclaw Bear]

Level: 28

HP: 892/892

MP: 67/67

Skills: [Shadow Stealth], [Rending Claws], [Intimidating Roar]

Status: Hunting Threat Assessment: EXTREME

The bear was easily twice the size of any normal bear, with fur so dark it seemed to absorb light. Worse, Alex could see the mana signatures flowing around it—this thing wasn't just big, it was magically enhanced.

Alex screamed a warning that no one could hear. He tried to throw himself between the adventurers and the approaching threat, but his consciousness simply passed through everything like smoke.

He was a ghost. A helpless, incorporeal observer who could only watch as three people who seemed like decent folk walked unknowingly toward their deaths.

The bear's status changed:

Status: Hunting → Attacking

It exploded from the treeline with a roar that shook the leaves from nearby branches.

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