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Chapter 1 - Chapter l The Chance Encounter

It was raining the night they met — not a gentle drizzle, but one of those sudden, angry downpours that feel more like punishment than weather.

Elena Harper had been standing outside the Green & Gold Café, clutching her coffee like a lifeline, staring at the buses that came and went without hers ever appearing.

The streetlamps painted everything in that sickly orange glow, and puddles reflected neon signs from the bar across the street.

Her umbrella had broken in the wind, so her coat was plastered to her shoulders, and her hair clung to her cheeks in damp strands.

She was shivering, but more from frustration than cold.

That's when he appeared — not walking toward her, not emerging from the café, but simply there in her peripheral vision, as if he'd been standing beside her for hours and she'd just now noticed.

He was tall, with dark hair dripping rainwater onto the collar of his grey wool coat. His hands were in his pockets, and his eyes — pale green, almost unnaturally so — flicked to her just briefly before he spoke.

"You missed the last one," he said. His voice was calm, like stating the obvious.

She frowned.

"How do you know which bus I'm waiting for?"

He gave the smallest shrug, the ghost of a smile twitching at the corner of his mouth.

"Just a guess."

A bus roared past in the opposite direction, spraying them both with icy water. Elena swore under her breath

The stranger looked up at the dark sky, then back at her.

"There's a diner two blocks from here. Dry, warm, terrible coffee. Better than standing here."

Normally, she would have declined. She didn't do random invitations from strange men at bus stops. But there was something… not quite disarming, but settled about him. As if he knew she would say yes.

She hesitated just long enough to convince herself it wasn't reckless, then nodded.

The diner was exactly as he described — small, outdated, with a buzzing fluorescent light in the corner and a waitress who looked like she'd rather be anywhere else.

They sat opposite each other in a booth, steam from their mugs curling between them.

"I'm Elena," she said, feeling awkward.

He stirred his coffee slowly before answering.

"Call me Nathan."

"Call you Nathan? Is that your name or…?" she asked.

He gave her that almost-smile again. "It'll do for tonight.

There was no small talk about jobs or where they lived. Instead, their conversation drifted into oddly specific topics — whether dreams could be shared, the probability of meeting the same stranger twice in a city, the way certain memories felt more like scenes from a movie you once saw than something you actually lived.

Elena found herself leaning forward, drawn in despite herself. There was a familiarity to him she couldn't place, like she'd seen him across a crowded room years ago and had been waiting to run into him ever since.

When the rain finally eased, she realized hours had passed. Nathan paid for their coffee — cash, no card — and walked her back toward the bus stop.

Just before they parted, he said something strange.

"This city's too small for us not to see each other again."

She smiled, though she knew it wasn't true. In cities like this, people disappeared into the noise.

But two days later, she saw him again.

And then again.

And again.

Chapter ll The Bloom

It didn't feel like dating.

There were no awkward first dinner reservations, no careful texting to avoid seeming too eager. Instead, Nathan just seemed to be there — leaning against a lamppost when she left the library, seated in the far corner of the park where she liked to read, stepping into the same grocery store aisle just as she reached for a carton of milk.

At first, Elena joked about it.

"You're following me," she teased one afternoon when they met, again, at a secondhand bookshop she'd only visited twice before.

"Maybe you're following me," Nathan replied without missing a beat.

But the glimmer in his eyes wasn't entirely playful.

They fell into a rhythm that felt both new and unnervingly familiar.

Nathan wasn't warm in the usual way. He didn't flood her with flattery or pet names. He was… steady. Certain. When she asked about his past, his answers were always just enough to satisfy in the moment but never enough to build a full picture.

Once, over coffee in her apartment, she pressed him about where he grew up.

He stirred sugar into his mug, thoughtful, then said:

"I don't really think about the 'where' so much as the 'when'."

She laughed, thinking it was a philosophical comment. But something about the way he watched her — like he was assessing her reaction — stayed with her.

The strange coincidences began to stack up.

She mentioned once, in passing, a small café she'd loved as a child. It had closed years ago. The next week, Nathan took her to a quiet side street she'd never visited and there it was — same green awning, same mismatched chairs inside. She asked how he'd found it.

"I guess they reopened," he said. But the way he avoided her eyes made her doubt him.

Another time, they were watching an old movie in her living room. A minor character came on screen — a background extra, really — and Elena gasped.

"That's my fifth-grade teacher!" she said. "She used to—"

She stopped. Her mind went blank. She couldn't remember her teacher's name, or even the school's name.

Nathan turned to her, his expression unreadable.

"Some memories fade for a reason," he said quietly.

Despite the oddities, the connection deepened.

They began spending nights together, Nathan's presence a calm anchor in the quiet hours. Elena found herself telling him things she'd never shared — the irrational fear of open water she'd carried since childhood, the way she sometimes felt her life was a second attempt at something she'd already failed.

Nathan listened without judgment, and when he touched her, it was with a tenderness that felt almost reverent.

Still, there were moments — fleeting, disorienting moments — when his face seemed unfamiliar, as if she were looking at him through someone else's memory. She'd blink and it would pass, but the unease lingered.

One evening, as winter began to thaw into early spring, they walked along the river under a washed-out moon. Nathan stopped suddenly, taking her hand.

"Elena," he said, his voice low, "if I told you there are things about me you wouldn't understand — wouldn't want to understand — would you still want to see me?"

The night was still, save for the water lapping at the embankment.

"I think so," she said. "But you'd have to trust me."

His thumb brushed over her knuckles.

"I'm trying," he said.

And then he kissed her — not the first time, but something in it felt like a promise. Or a warning.

Chapter lll The Shift

It started with déjà vu.

Not the fleeting, blink-and-it's-gone kind. This was heavier — a deep, gut-level recognition that froze her mid-motion. She'd be cutting vegetables, hear Nathan say exactly the same words he'd said in a dream the night before, and she'd know the rest of his sentence before he spoke it.

At first, she laughed it off.

"You've said that before."

"I haven't," he'd reply calmly, though his eyes would dart away, as if caught.

Then there were the disappearances.

They didn't live together, but for weeks he'd been in her orbit constantly. Then, without warning, he'd vanish for two or three days — no calls, no texts. When he returned, he always had an explanation just plausible enough: a work trip, visiting an old friend, fixing something at his apartment.

One night she pressed him.

"You don't have a job, do you?" she said, not accusing, just curious.

He stared at her for a long moment before answering.

"Not in the way you mean."

The coincidences grew more unsettling.

She once found an old photograph at a flea market — a faded Polaroid of a street corner from the 1980s. Something about it drew her in, and she bought it for two dollars. When she showed Nathan, his face went pale.

"That corner doesn't look like that anymore," she said.

"It hasn't looked like that for thirty-seven years," he replied. "And yet… you were standing right there when this was taken."

Elena laughed nervously, waiting for him to admit it was a joke. He didn't.

The first fight came over something small — a dinner reservation he'd made at a restaurant she hated.

"I told you I don't like seafood," she said.

"You've never told me that," Nathan replied, genuinely baffled.

"Yes, I have. The first week we met."

"No, Elena… in that week, we never went near the subject."

It wasn't the disagreement that unsettled her, but the way he sounded sure — as if his memory of their shared past was different from hers.

Spring deepened. The air grew warm, but something between them was cooling.

Nathan became more guarded, like each moment together was something he was rationing. Sometimes, while she was talking, she'd catch him looking at her with an intensity that was almost mournful.

One night, after a long silence over wine, she asked,

"Do you ever think about how we met?"

"All the time," he said. Then, after a pause:

"It wasn't supposed to happen like that."

The last straw, though, wasn't strange at all. It was painfully ordinary.

They were at her apartment, music playing softly, when she asked about the small silver watch he always kept in his pocket. She'd never seen him wear it, only wind it.

He hesitated, then handed it to her.

The second hand ticked smoothly, but the date on the tiny dial was wrong — off by several years.

"This isn't broken," she said. "So why—"

"It's set to the day we met," he interrupted. His tone was sharp, final, as if daring her to ask the next question.

She didn't. Not then. But the seed of doubt had been planted, and it was already growing.

Chapter iv The Rot

The first real silence between them wasn't comfortable.

It was a void.

They sat on opposite ends of Elena's couch one rainy evening, the space between them heavy with words neither wanted to say. Nathan's watch lay on the coffee table, ticking softly.

She'd begun to hate that sound — too steady, too precise, like a heartbeat that didn't belong in the room.

The changes were gradual at first.

Nathan no longer appeared in the places she went; now she had to seek him out. His once-easy certainty had soured into irritability, as if each question she asked cost him something.

"You've changed," she told him one night.

"No," he said. "You've just started noticing things."

When she pressed for details — about his past, about the odd coincidences, about how he always seemed to know where she'd be — he would shut down entirely.

And once, when she asked too many times, he said something that chilled her:

"You wouldn't have liked the version of me from before. That's why I had to meet you this way."

The déjà vu worsened.

Now, entire conversations felt recycled, as if she'd lived them before — and not just once.

Sometimes she could predict what Nathan would do down to the smallest gesture: the way he'd adjust his coat sleeve before standing, the exact phrasing of a joke he'd make.

One afternoon, while walking past a familiar street corner, she stopped mid-step.

"Wait," she said. "This is where we first met."

Nathan looked at her strangely.

"No. We met at the bus stop by the café."

But she knew she was right — except… she wasn't. The memory blurred, shifting between scenes, neither feeling more real than the other.

They began to fight.

Not about the strange things — those, Elena learned, were arguments she could never win — but about stupid, human stuff. He left the kettle on. She was late to meet him. He forgot her birthday, then claimed they'd already celebrated it weeks ago.

"You're rewriting things in your head," he told her one night.

"Or you're rewriting them in mine," she snapped back.

His expression darkened. "Careful."

The turning point came in the middle of the night.

Elena woke to find Nathan standing by the window, his back to her, holding the silver watch. The second hand wasn't ticking.

"What are you doing?" she asked, her voice hoarse from sleep.

"I stayed too long," he murmured. "Every time, I think maybe it'll be different. But it never is."

She sat up, suddenly cold. "Every time?"

Nathan turned then, and in the dim light, his face looked older. Tired in a way she'd never seen.

"Elena, I can't… I can't keep looping back to this. To us. It always ends the same."

The next day, he was gone.

No note, no call. Just absence.

And yet… two weeks later, she saw him across the street. Same coat. Same eyes. Same almost-smile. But there was no recognition in his face — only the polite glance of a stranger.

Elena stood frozen as the déjà vu swept over her like a wave.

For the first time, she wondered if Nathan had been telling the truth all along.

Chapter v The Ending

The second time they met — or maybe the fourteenth, depending on whose timeline you believed — it wasn't raining.

It was a crisp spring afternoon, the city humming with life, and Elena told herself she wouldn't speak to him. She wouldn't fall into the pattern again.

But Nathan crossed the street toward her anyway, his steps unhurried, his eyes catching hers in that same unsettling way — the way that made her feel remembered.

"Hi," he said, as if testing the word in his mouth.

She forced a smile. "We've met before."

Something flickered in his expression — a half-second of confusion, then resignation. "Yeah. I suppose we have."

Over the next weeks, it unfolded the same way it always did.

The unexpected meetings. The long, magnetic conversations. The unshakable sense of familiarity.

But this time, Elena kept track. She wrote down everything — dates, places, the exact words they exchanged — as if documenting a crime. And slowly, a pattern emerged.

It wasn't just coincidence.

It was choreography.

The truth broke through on a cold May night.

They were in her apartment, the city lights flickering outside, when she confronted him. She spread her notes across the coffee table — the when, the where, the impossible repetitions.

"You've been steering me," she said. "Guiding me into the same places, the same moments. Over and over."

Nathan's jaw tightened. "It's not like that."

"Then tell me what it's like."

For a long moment, he didn't answer. Then, he reached into his coat pocket and took out the silver watch.

"This," he said, "isn't a watch. It's a tether. I've been… jumping. Back to the first time I met you."

Her laugh was sharp, disbelieving. "What, like time travel?"

"Yes." His voice was flat, certain. "But not for the world. Just for me. I keep looping back, trying to… get it right."

The room tilted. Elena sat back, suddenly aware of the weight in her chest. "Get what right?"

"You. Us. The way we fall apart. Every time, it happens. I thought if I could change the small things, the big ones would change too. But they never do."

She stared at him, at the man who had felt like destiny and now felt like a thief. "You've been… editing me."

"I've been saving you from the worst of it," he said, his voice cracking. "But it turns out I was just… keeping you in it longer."

Something broke then — not in the air, not in the timeline, but in her.

Because she saw it, clearly: every tender moment they'd shared was laced with manipulation. Every coincidence had been an intrusion. Every fight had been inevitable.

And worst of all, he wasn't sorry for loving her this way. He was only sorry it hadn't worked.

The last time they spoke, it was raining again.

They stood on the same street where she first remembered meeting him, though the details had blurred over so many loops she couldn't be sure anymore.

"Don't come back," she said. "Don't do this to me again."

Nathan looked at her like a man staring at a locked door he'd opened a hundred times before. "It's not that easy."

She stepped back, her coat soaking through. "Make it easy."

For a moment, she thought he might argue. But then he clicked the watch open, turned the dial, and vanished — not in a flash, not in a spectacle, but in the quiet way a memory slips away.

In the weeks that followed, Elena half-expected to see him again. At the bus stop. In the park. In the grocery store aisle. But he never came.

Still, sometimes, she'd feel a flicker of déjà vu while passing a stranger in the street, and her stomach would twist with something sharp and sour.

Love leaves marks. So does bitterness.

And some of them last across timelines.