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Adventurous Tale of Loke as Leonard bloom. Like a Lion he lives an adventurous life and has a love bond with Lucy
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Chapter 1 - Chapter 1 Leonard

+, Published: Sep 7, 2024Hello

"BIG FISH"

A RIVER.

We're underwater, watching a fat catfish swim along.

This is The Beast.

LEONARD (V.O.)

There are some fish that cannot be

caught. It's not that they're faster

or stronger than other fish. They're

just touched by something extra.

Call it luck. Call it grace. One

such fish was The Beast.

The Beast's journey takes it past a dangling fish hook, baited

with worms. Past a tempting lure, sparkling in the sun. Past

a swiping bear claw. The Beast isn't worried.

LEONARD (V.O.)

By the time I was born, he was already

a legend. He'd taken more hundred-

dollar lures than any fish in Alabama.

Some said that fish was the ghost of

Henry Walls, a thief who'd drowned

in that river 60 years before. Others

claimed he was a lesser dinosaur,

left over from the Cretaceous period.

LEONEL'S BEDROOM - NIGHT (1973)

LEONEL LUKE BLOOM, AGE 3, listens wide-eyed as his father LEONARD

BLOOM, 40's and extremely handsome, tells the story. In every gesture,

Leonard is bigger than life, describing each detail with

absolute conviction.

LEONARD

I didn't put any stock into such

speculation or superstition. All I

knew was I'd been trying to catch

that fish since I was a boy no bigger

than you.

(closer)

And on the day you were born, that

was the day I finally caught him.

CAMPFIRE - NIGHT (1977)

A few years later, and Leonel sits with the other INDIAN GUIDES

as Leonard continues telling the story to the tribe.

LEONARD

Now, I'd tried everything on it:

worms, lures, peanut butter, peanut

butter-and-cheese. But on that day I

had a revelation: if that fish was

the ghost of a thief, the usual bait

wasn't going to work. I would have to use something he truly desired.

Leonard points to his wedding band, glinting in the firelight.

LITTLE BRAVE

(confused)

Your finger?

Leonard slips his ring off.

LEONARD

Gold.

While the other boys are rapt with attention, Leonel looks

bored. He's heard this story before.

LEONARD

I tied my ring to the strongest line

they made - strong enough to hold

up a bridge, they said, if just for

a few minutes - and I cast upriver.

BLOOM FRONT HALL - NIGHT (1987)

Leonard is chatting up Leonel's pretty DATE to the homecoming

dance. She is enjoying the story, but also the force of

Leonard's charisma. He's hypnotizing.

LEONARD

The Beast jumped up and grabbed it

before the ring even hit the water.

And just as fast, he snapped clean

through that line.

Leonel, now 17 with braces, is fuming and ready to leave. His

mother Lucyra - from whom he gets his good looks and

practicality - stands with him at the door.

LEONARD

You can see my predicament. My wedding

ring, the symbol of fidelity to my

wife, soon to be the mother of my

child, was now lost in the gut of an

uncatchable fish.

ON LEONEL AND LUCYRA

LEONEL

(low but insistent)

Make him stop.

His mother pats him sympathetically, then adjusts his tie.

LEONEL'S DATE

LEONEL

What did you do?

LEONARD

I followed that fish up-river and

down-river for three days and three

nights, until I finally had him boxed

in.

Leonel's regards his father with exasperated contempt.

LEONARD

With these two hands, I reached in

and snatched that fish out of the

river. I looked him straight in the

eye. And I made a remarkable

discovery.

TINY PARIS RESTAURANT

(LA RUE 14 - NIGHT (1998)

LEONEL, now 28, sits with his gorgeous bride Asuka. This

is their wedding reception, crowded with their friends and

family. They should be joyful, but Leonel is furious.

Leonard has the floor, ostensibly for a toast. The room is

cozy and drunk.

LEONARD

This fish, the Beast. The whole time

we were calling it a him, when in

fact it was a her. It was fat with

eggs, and was going to lay them any

day.

Over near the doorway, we spot Lucyra, just returned from

the restrooms. She looks gorgeous. She couldn't be any happier

if this were her own wedding.

LEONARD

Now, I was in a situation. I could

gut that fish and get my ring back,

but doing so I would be killing the

smartest catfish in the Ashton River,

soon to be mother of a hundred others.

Leonel can't take any more. Asuka tries to hold him back,

but he gets up and leaves. Leonard doesn't even notice.

LEONARD

Did I want to deprive my soon-to-be-

born son the chance to catch a fish

like this of his own? This lady fish

and I, well, we had the same destiny.

As he leaves, Leonel mutters in perfect unison with his father -

LEONARD AND LEONEL

We were part of the same equation.

Leonel reaches the door, where his mother intercepts him.

LUCYRA

Honey, it's still your night.

Leonel can't articulate his anger. He just leaves.

LEONARD

Now, you may well ask, since this

lady fish wasn't the ghost of a thief,

why did it strike so quick on gold

when nothing else would attract it?

(closer; he holds up

his ring)

That was the lesson I learned that

day, the day my son was born.

He focuses his words on Lucyra. This story is - and has

always been - about her more than anyone.

LEONARD

Sometimes, the only way to catch an

uncatchable woman is to offer her a

wedding ring.

A LAUGH from the crowd.

Leonard motions for Lucyra to get up here with him. As she

crosses, we can see that thirty years of marriage has not

lessened their affection for each other.

As they kiss, Leonard tweaks her chin a special little way.

The crowd APPLAUDS.

Leonard toasts the happy couple. A covers well for

her absent husband, a smile as warm as summer.

LEONARD downs his champagne in a gulp.

OUTSIDE LA RUE 14 - NIGHT

Leonard and Leonel come into the middle of an argument on the sidewalk.

Occasional PASSERSBY take notice, especially as it gets more

heated. Both men are a little drunk.

LEONARD

What, a father's not allowed to talk

about his son?

LEONEL

(disbelieving)

I am a footnote in that story. I am

the context for your great adventure.

Which never happened! Incidentally!

You were selling novelty products in

Which the day I was born.

LEONARD

(shaking his head)

Jesus Christ.

LEONEL

Friend of yours? Did you help him

out of a bind?

LEONARD

Come on,Leonel . Everyone likes that story.

LEONEL

No Dad, they don't. I do not like

the story. Not anymore, not after a thousand times. I know all the

punchlines, Dad. I can tell them as well as you can.

(closer)

For one night, one night in your

entire life, the universe does not

revolve around Leonard Bloom. It

revolves around me and my wife. How

can you not understand that?

A long beat, then...

LEONARD

(low)

Sorry to embarrass you.

Leonel won't let him get the last word.

LEONEL

You're embarrassing yourself, Dad.

You just don't see it.

LEONARD

Fine.

A hand to wave, enough of you.

He walks away.

Leonel, still fuming with righteous anger. It's then

we FREEZE FRAME.

LEONEL (V.O.)

After that night, I didn't speak to

my father again for three years.

NEWSROOM (PARIS) - DAY

A typically busy day. On hold with the phone cradled under

an ear, Leonel sorts through a bundle of mail dropped on his

desk.

LEONEL (ON PHONE)

(without pauses)

Leonel Luke Bloom with the Associated

Press if I could just...

He's put back on hold. Returning to the mail, he finds a

hand-addressed envelope. Rips it open.

LEONEL (V.O.)

We communicated indirectly I guess.

In her letters and Christmas cards,

my mother would write for both of

them.

BLOOM HOUSE KITCHEN - DAY

At the table,Lucyra talks on the phone while Leonard fixes a

sandwich.

LEONEL (V.O.)

When I'd call, Mom would say that

Dad was out driving. Or swimming in

the pool.

Leonard takes a seat, starting to eat his sandwich.

LEONEL

True to form, we never talked about

our not talking.

BLOOM HOUSE MASTER BEDROOM - NIGHT

Lucyra stands by the window, watching as...

BLOOM BACK YARD - NIGHT [CONTINUOUS]

Leonel swims laps in the family pool. He's born to the water.

LEONEL (V.O.)

The truth is, I didn't see anything

of myself in my father, and I don't

think he saw anything of himself in me. We were like strangers who knew

each other very well.

RIVER - DAY

Leonard stares intently into the water, a lion in wait.

LEONEL (V.O.)

I'm telling the story of my father's

life, it's impossible to separate

the fact from the fiction, the man

from the myth. The best I can do is to tell it the way he told me.

LOOKING DOWN at the river, where Leonard's reflection is caught

in the dark water. As the water ripples past, something

changes.

Sure enough, as to LOOK UP again, it's a younger LEONARD BLOOM,

20's, staring into the water. He's not just handsome, not

just charming, It's as if all the forces of the natural world

had conspired to create him.

LEONEL (V.O.)

It doesn't always make sense, and

most of it never happened.

Suddenly, this Leonard thrusts both hands into the water,

grabbing hold of

THE BEAST.

He brings the catfish up to his face. Looks it right in the

eye. A beat, then the Beast spits out Leonard's gold ring.

LEONEL (V.O.)

But that's what kind of story this

is.

Smiling, Leonard takes the ring, then throws the Beast back

into the water with a splash.

BIG FISH

HOSPITAL ROOM - DAY

Young Dr. Horoscope stands between the Wife's legs. She's

flustered and sweating, but the doctor has a comforting

bedside manner...

YOUNG DR. HOROSCOPE

Now, Mrs. Bloom, I'll need you to

give me one good push. On three.

One...

Suddenly, we hear a POP as a slimy mass of human being rockets

into the doctor's unprepared hands. Horoscope tries to hold

tight, but the infant is slippery like a fish. It shoots up

into air.

The NURSES and the Husband try to grab the baby, but no one

can hold it. As the newborn sails upward TOWARDS CAMERA, we

can see a GIGGLING SMILE on its face.

As it falls, the newborn knocks over a tray, which provides

it a ramp to slide right out of the room. Everyone races

after it.

HOSPITAL HALLWAY - DAY

Bursting through the doors -

YOUNG DR. HOROSCOPE

Grab that baby!

A NURSE finally scoops up the slippery baby. Everyone lets

out a collective sigh of relief.

LEONEL (V.O.)

My father's birth would set the pace

for his unlikely life. No longer

than most men's, but larger. And as

strange as his stories got, the

endings were always the most

surprising of all.

HALF-DARK PARIS APARTMENT - (PRESENT) DAY

Over the sound of rain, a phone RINGS on a chair. By the

tone of the ring, we know we're not in the U.S. - it has

that insistent European sound.

As it keeps RINGING, we look to see the apartment is mostly

empty, just a few half-unpacked boxes. A cradle is still in

its carton.

KEYS in the lock. LAUGHTER in the hallway. The door swings

open to reveal a drenched LEONEL(29) carrying four sacks of

groceries, the bottoms collapsing from the rain. His wife

ASUKA (28) pushes past him to get the phone.

ASUKA

Allo oui?

Leonel begins stripping out of his wet clothes, each layer

unleashing a new drizzle. He plays it up, trying to get a

reaction out of Asuka.

ASUKA

(on phone)

Yes, he's here.

She hands the phone to Leonel, concerned.

ASUKA

It's your mother.

Half-stripped, Leonel takes the phone. This won't be good news.

LEONEL

(on phone)

Hi. Uh-huh. Uh-huh.

As Asuka takes off her rain coat, we see she is very,

very pregnant. She listens carefully to Leonel's side of the

conversation, trying to gauge how bad the news is.

LEONEL

What does Dr. Horoscope say? Okay. No,

sure, let me talk to him. I'll wait.

He covers the mouthpiece. Looks over to Asuka.

ASUKA

It's bad.

LEONEL

It's more than they thought. They're

going to stop chemo.

ASUKA

You need to go.

LEONEL

Probably tonight.

A beat.

ASUKA

I'm going with you.

LEONEL

You don't have to.

ASUKA

(a simple fact)

I'm going with you.

AIR FRANCE 747 - NIGHT

As the plane continues boarding, a STEWARDESS recites the

welcome spiel in French. Leonel has a window seat in coach.

Asuka sits beside him, putting on hand lotion.

Taking his hands, she rubs the excess into him. There's an

effortless intimacy between them. She can pinpoint what he's

feeling before he can.

747 / FLYING - NIGHT

Hours later, and the lights are dimmed. Most of the PASSENGERS

are asleep, including Asuka. Her head is propped against

Leonel's shoulder, her hands tucked under her belly.

Leonel watches her sleep, brushing back her hair. A beat, then he notices a BORED BOY in the next row over.

Off the glow of the reading light, the boy is using his hands

to cast shadows on the seat back. The kid is pretty good,

making a convincing bird, a passable monkey, and finally a

dog.

We PUSH IN on the silhouettes.

LEONARD ( PRELAP)

So which one's it gonna be? The Monkey

in the Barn, the Dog in the Road?

BLOOM HOUSE - NIGHT

Focusing on the final shadow,Leonard making the shapes.

Leonel (6) sits in his pajamas on the floor next to him. The

endtable lamp lies between them, its shade off to cast big

shadows on the wall.

LEONEL

The one about the witch.

LEONARD

Your mom says I can't tell you that

one anymore. You get nightmares.

LEONARD

I'm not scared.

Leonel looks around for a beat, seeing if his wife is in

earshot. He then leans in, complicitous.

LEONARD

Neither was I. At first.

Leonel smiles, excited to hear the forbidden story.

LEONARD

This all happened in the swamp outside

of Ashton. Kids weren't supposed to go out in the swamp, on account of the snakes and spiders and quicksand

that would swallow you up before you

could even scream. But there were

five of us out there that night: Me,

Erza, Wilbur Freed, and the Price

Brothers, Natsu and Gray.

Leonard holds up his hand, counting the names on his fingers.

LEONARD

Not a one of us knew what was in

store.

As his hand moves past the light, we come

A flashlight SWEEPS past. We are...

FIELD AT THE SWAMP EDGE - NIGHT

The night is WHIRRING and BREATHING, alive. The moon hangs

low, casting long shadows.

Five kids walk past in silhouette. Four have flashlights on.

The fifth keeps tripping, crashing into YOUNG LEONARD (10).

LEONARD

Gray, turn your flashlight on!

GRAY PRICE

I don't got any batteries!

Navy-headed GRAY PRICE is 10. His brother NATSU PRICE is 12,

and a lot bigger than the others.

NATSU PRICE

Then why'd you bring it?

GRAY PRICE

I don't want to be in the swamp with

a witch and no flashlight.

WILBUR FREED, also 10, is the black asthmatic son of a

sharecropper. Redheaded Erza , 8, is happy just to

be there.

LEONARD

Is it true she got a glass eye?

WILBUR FREED

I heard she got it from Gypsies.

LEONARD

What's a Gypsy?

GRAY PRICE

Your momma's a Gypsy.

NATSU PRICE

Your momma's a bitch.

ERZA

You shouldn't swear. There's ladies present.

NATSU PRICE

Shit.

GRAY PRICE

Damn.

WILBUR FREED

Screw.

LEONARD

(whispering)

Turn off your flashlights! She'll

see 'em.

MOVING UP behind the kids, we find ourselves at the gates

of...

A CREEPY OLD HOUSE - NIGHT

ADULT LEONARD (V.O.)

Now, it's common knowledge that most

towns of a certain size have a witch,

if only to eat misbehaving children

and the occasional puppy who wanders

into her yard. Witches use those

bones to cast spells and curses that

make the land infertile.

We PULL BACK, and BACK, revealing more of the Gothically

creepy house: its broken windows, strangling vines, and eerie

gargoyles half-buried in the dirt. Even bats are afraid to

fly over it.

In the moonlight, the house is especially sinister. Who knows

what is lurking in the shadows?

ADULT LEONARD (V.O.)

Yet of the all the witches in Alabama,

there was one who was the most feared.

For she had one glass eye, which was

said to contain mystical powers.

We finally come to the kids, staring in through the gate.

WILBUR FREED

I hear if you look right at it, you

can see how you're gonna die.

LEONARD

That's bull-s-h-i-t, that is. She's

not even a real witch.

NATSU PRICE

You're so sure, why don't you go in

and get that eye? I heard she keeps

it in a box on her nighttable.

Leonard looks back at the spooky house.

NATSU PRICE

Or are you too scared?

LEONARD

I'll go in right now and get that

eye.

NATSU PRICE

Then do it.

LEONARD

Fine, I will.

NATSU PRICE

Fine, you do it.

LEONARD

Fine, I'm doing it.

He hands Gray his flashlight, then starts climbing the gate.

ERZA

Leonard, don't!

WILBUR FREED

She'll make soap out of you!

(to Erza)

That's what she does, she makes soap out of people.

Leonard drops down on the far side of the gate. Truth be told,

Leonard is scared, but he forges ahead anyway.

Freed looks to Erza, and they're in complete agreement.

They get the hell out of there. Gray would run too, but Natsu

holds him by the collar.

APPROACHING THE HOUSE

Leonard curves around the tall bushes that hide the front

door. Anything could jump out of them.

He steps on the porch. The boards SQUEAL and CREAK, but he

continues on. A cat SCREAMS OUT from a broken wicker rocker.

Catching his breath, Leonard reaches the front door.

The doorknob is ancient brass, two projections that look

like horns. Yet Leonard extends his hand, reaching closer and

closer before he finally

RINGS THE DOORBELL.

Impossibly fast, the door opens, revealing an OLD WOMAN with

a patch over her left eye. She looks like she's been dead

for years, but too stubborn to lie down.

LEONARD

(calm and

straightforward)

Ma'am, my name is Leonard Bloom, and

there's some folks'd like to see

your eye.

BACK AT THE GATE - NIGHT

Gray and Natsu Price wait for Leonard, each moment more

convinced he's already dead. But suddenly, he's back at the

gate.

NATSU PRICE

You get the eye?

LEONARD

I brought it.

NATSU PRICE

(dubious)

Let's see it.

The Old Woman steps out of the shadows behind Leonard, flipping

up her eye patch. When their flashlight beam hits her left

eye, it shines with a hellish glow.

RUSH IN on Gray, who is paralyzed by what he sees.

FRONT PORCH OF HOUSE - DAY

An OLD MAN - Gray - stands on a wobbly stepladder, changing

a lightbulb. Suddenly, the ladder gives way and he falls.

Dead.

AT THE GATE - NIGHT

RUSH IN on Natsu Price.

FRATERNITY HOUSE BATHROOM - DAY

Twenty-year old Natsu Price falls face-forward on the tile,

face mushed in the grout. Very much dead.

AT THE GATE - NIGHT

Natsu and Gray both tremble with fear. The latter has tears

in his eyes.

GRAY PRICE

I saw how I was gonna die. I was

old, and I fell.

NATSU PRICE

I wasn't old at all.

The brothers suddenly bolt. Still standing next to the Old

Woman, Leonard smiles.

THE OLD WOMAN'S DOOR - NIGHT

Leonard helps her back inside. He could leave now, but

curiosity gets the better of him.

LEONARD

I was thinking about death and all.

About seeing how you're gonna die.

The Old Woman turns to him slightly, still not facing him.

LEONARD

I mean, on one hand, if dying was

all you thought about, it could kind

of screw you up. But it could kind

of help you, couldn't it? Because

you'd know that everything else you

can survive.

The Old Woman smiles a little, a crooked grin of broken teeth.

LEONARD

I guess I'm saying, I'd like to know.

The Old Woman turns leaning her face right in front of his.

And on a silent count of one, two, three - Leonard looks

into The Eye.

This time we don't cut. Instead, ON Leonard as he

witnesses his death. He stares transfixed, perplexed and

amused. Whatever he sees, it's not as dire as the other boys.

His future has something strange in store.

LEONARD

Huh. That's how I go?

The Old Woman nods with a smile . Still a little overwhelmed, Leonard turns

and leaves.

ADULT LEONARD (V.O.)

From that moment on, I no longer

feared death. And for that, I was as good as immortal.

As Leonard leaves, the door swings SHUT on its own.

BLOOM HOUSE - (PRESENT) DAY

The front door opens to reveal Leonel and Asuka on the

porch with their bags. reverse to Leonel's mother Lucyra (53),

surprised and a little annoyed.

LUCYRA

How did you get here?

LEONEL

We swam. The Atlantic, it's not that big really.

LUCYRA

McHibbon offered to pick you up

at the airport.

LEONEL

We rented a car.

LUCYRA

(simply)

You didn't need to do that. You just

didn't.

A beat. Starting over...

LEONEL

Hi, Mom.

He leans in and hugs her. She surrenders, squeezing her son

tight. Leonel and his mother are cut from the same cloth -

strong-willed but practical. They've always been close.

LUCYRA

I'm so glad you're here.

That hug finished, Lucyra pushes past her son to her daughter-

in-law. Seeing the size of her belly -

LUCYRA

You shouldn't have flown. But...

They hug.

ASUKA

It's good to see you. You look

beautiful.

It's not flattery. It's the truth.

LUCYRA

Thank you. I'll bet you need to -

ASUKA

Yes.

LUCYRA

Down the hall on the right. The door

sticks. You have to really pull it.

Asuka squeezes past, a smile to her husband - be nice.

Leonel heads back to the rental car to retrieve luggage. Lucyra

follows him.

Coming down the driveway, we get to see the house for the

first time: an older suburban home, three bedrooms, big for

the neighborhood, and nicely grown into the lot. KIDS are

playing on the street.

LEONEL

Is that Dr. Horoscope's car?

LUCYRA

He's up with your father.

Heading back to the house...

LEONEL

How is he?

LUCYRA

He's impossible. He won't eat. And

because he won't eat, he gets weaker.

And because he's weaker, he doesn't

want to eat.

LEONEL

How much time does he have left?

LUCYRA

You don't talk about those things.

Not yet.

KITCHEN - DAY

Lucyra is pouring iced tea for Leonel and Asuka.

DR. JULIUS HOROSCOPE (85) enters from the foyer, still winded

from coming down the stairs. He was the town's first Black

physician. He's still the town's best physician.

DR. HOROSCOPE

Leonel

LEONEL

Dr. Horoscope. It's good to see you.

(they shake)

My wife, Asuka .

DR. HOROSCOPE

A pleasure.

He judges her belly.

DR. HOROSCOPE

You're seven months.

ASUKA

(impressed)

To the day.

He leans close to her, whispering in her ear...

DR. HOROSCOPE

It's a boy.

She smiles, surprised but not doubting. Leonel looks over -

what did he say? Asuka shakes her head.

Back to the main subject...

LUCYRA

You don't think he looks any worse.

DR. HOROSCOPE

No. I would say he's the same.

And in the silence that follows, a lot is said. It wasn't

the upbeat reply Lucyra was hoping for.

LEONEL

Can I see him?

DR. HOROSCOPE

Absolutely. Be good for you to talk

to him.

A moment of awkwardness - everyone here knows they haven't

spoken in years.

Lucyra hands Leonel a squat can of Ensure from the case on the

counter.

LUCYRA

Get him to drink one of these. He

won't, but tell him he has to.

FOYER - DAY

Coming out from the kitchen, Leonel slowly climbs the stairs.

They CREAK with every step.

The wall is filled with family photos, happier times. Most

of the pictures are of Leonel, starting when he was an infant

and ending at his wedding. As he climbs the stairs, we can

see him growing up with every step.

UPSTAIRS HALLWAY - DAY

A crack of sunlight spills around the half-open door at the

end of the hallway. Leonel walks towards it, running a hand

along the wallpaper.

Almost at the door, he stops for a beat. Gets his breath.

Then goes inside.

GUEST ROOM - DAY

Leonard Bloom, 61, lies asleep on the bed. Although he's not

the vibrant man we've seen before, it's not as bad we feared.

The illness has been quick, and left him largely intact.

There are no I.V.'s, no monitors, nothing.

Coming up to the bed -

LEONEL

Dad?

Leonard cracks open an eye, a beat before he focuses. He tries

to say something, but no words come out.

He looks over at a pitcher on the nightstand. Leonel pours him

a glass of water, helping him hold it to his parched lips.

Finished, Leonard sets down the glass by himself. A very long,

tense beat. Leonel almost speaks again to fill the silence.

Finally...

LEONARD

You -

(he points)

- are in for a surprise.

LEONEL

Am I?

LEONARD

Having a kid changes everything. I mean, there's the diapers and the burping and the midnight feedings...

LEONEL

Did you do any of that?

LEONARD

No, but I hear it's terrible. Then

you spend years trying to corrupt

and mislead this child, fill its

head with nonsense and still it turns

out perfectly fine.

LEONEL

You think I'm up for it?

LEONARD

You learned from the best.

Leonel doesn't rise to the challenge. A beat, then he remembers

the can of Ensure. Holds it up. Leonard recoils.

LEONEL

Just drink half the can. I'll tell

her you drank the whole thing.

Everyone wins.

A beat, then Leonard rolls his eyes. Fine. Leonel cracks open

the can, finding a straw on the nightstand.

LEONARD

People needn't worry so much. It's not my time yet. This isn't how I

go.

LEONEL

Really.

LEONARD

Truly. I saw it in The Eye.

LEONEL

The Old Lady by the swamp.

LEONARD

She was a witch.

LEONEL

No, she was old and probably senile.

Maybe schizophrenic.

LEONARD

I saw my death in that eye. And this is not how it happens.

LEONEL

So how does it happen?

LEONARD

Surprise ending. Wouldn't want to ruin it for you.

Leonard slurps down as much of the Ensure as he can stand,

then pushes the can away. He swallows with difficulty.

LEONARD

There was this panhandler who used

to stop me every morning when I came

out of this coffee shop near the

office.

LEONEL

Okay.

LEONARD

And every day I gave him a quarter.

Every day. Then I got sick and was

out for a couple of weeks. And when

I went back there, you know what he

said?

LEONEL

What did he say?

LEONARD

You owe me three-fifty.

LEONEL

Really.

LEONARD

True story.

A beat.

LEONEL

When did you ever work in an office?

LEONARD

There's a lot you don't know about

me.

LEONEL

You're right.

Leonard gives a wry smile. He walked into that.

LEONARD

Your mother was worried we wouldn't

talk again. And look at us. We're

talking fine. We're storytellers,

both of us. I speak mine out, you

write yours down. Same thing.

Leonel won't commit to Leonard's assessment.

LEONEL

Dad, I'm hoping we can talk about

some things while I'm here.

LEONARD

You mean, while I'm here.

LEONEL

I'd just like to know the true

versions of things. Events. Stories.

You.

Leonard LAUGHS a little, which becomes a COUGH. The HACKING

escalates until another drink of water gets it under control.

It's not clear whether any of this was an act to keep from

talking.

LEONARD

Your mother hasn't been keeping up

the pool. If you wanted to you

could...

LEONEL

I will.

LEONARD

You know where the chemicals are?

LEONEL

I used to do it when you were gone,

remember? I used to do it a lot.

He didn't mean for that to sound so pointed. Taking the half-

empty Ensure, Leonel gets up to go. He's at the door when...

LEONARD

I was never much for being at home,

Leonel. It's too confining. And this,

here. Being stuck in bed. Dying is

the worst thing that ever happened

to me.

He smiles at his joke.

LEONEL

I thought you weren't dying.

LEONARD

I said this isn't how I go. The last

part is much more unusual. Trust me

on that.

UPSTAIRS HALLWAY - DAY

Shutting the door behind himself, Leonel drinks the rest of

the Ensure himself. Leonard was right. It tastes horrible.

Heading for the stairs, Leonel walks past an open door. As he

leaves frame, we STAY BEHIND to look inside...

LEONEL'S BEDROOM - DAY [FLASHBACK]

...where an eight-year old Leonel is propped up in bed, his

face covered with chicken pox and pink calamine lotion. He's

showing Leonard how many bumps there are on his arm.

YOUNG LEONEL

Dr. Horoscope says I'm going to have

to be home for a week.

LEONARD

That's nothing. I once had to stay

in bed for three years.

YOUNG LEONEL

Did you have chicken pox?

LEONARD

I wish.

TINY CHURCH - DAY

Wearing a white shirt and tie, YOUNG LEONARD - still about

10 - sings "Down to the River My Lord" along with the

CONGREGATION. His voice is high and thin, but he gives it

his all.

Suddenly, his voice CRACKS and DROPS a half-octave. And then

another. His friends Wilbur Freed and Erza look over,

wondering what's wrong. Embarrassed, Leonard just keeps

SINGING, trying to follow along with the baritone part.

He pulls at his collar. Then pulls again, his face getting

red. Starting to panic, he loosens his tie. He's starting to

undo the collar button when it POPS off by itself. Two more

buttons fly off. One hits a CHUBBY WOMAN in the neck.

ON HIS SHOES

As we watch, Leonard's pant cuffs rise inch by inch - that's

how fast he's growing.

LEONARD (V.O.)

Truth is, no one quite knew what was wrong. Most times, a person grows up gradually. I found myself in a hurry.

YOUNG LEONARD'S BEDROOM - DAY

Young Leonard lies in bed, his limbs connected to various

pulleys and levers to support his weight. He has a dozen

encyclopedias around him, and another dozen on the floor.

LEONARD (V.O.)

My muscles couldn't keep up with my

bones, and my bones couldn't keep up

with my body's ambition. So I spent

the better part of three years

confined to my bed, with the World

Book Encyclopedia being my only means

of exploration. I had made it all

the way to the "G's," hoping to find

an answer to my gigantificationism,

when I uncovered an article about the common goldfish.

The encyclopedia article, complete with drawings.

YOUNG LEONARD

(reading)

"Kept in a small bowl, the goldfish

will remain small. With more space,

the fish can grow double, triple, or

quadruple its size."

Young Leonard thinks this through.

LEONARD (V.O.)

It occurred to me then, that perhaps

the reason for my growth was that I

was intended for larger things. After

all, a giant man can't have an

ordinary-sized life.

BASEBALL FIELD DAY

The CRACK of a bat announces the game-winning home run. The

crowd CHEERS the swing, and especially the batter as he rounds

the bases.

Although we've seen him briefly before, this is our first

real exposure to GROWN-UP LEONARD, who we'll follow from

roughly the ages of 18 to 30.

LEONARD (V.O.)

As soon as my bones had settled in

their adult configuration, I set

upon my plan to make a bigger place

for myself in Ashton.

SCHOOL FIELDS - DAY

SINGLE SHOTS: Football hero Leonard leads his team to victory.

On the sidelines, a PRETTY GIRL admits the name of her secret

love:

GIRL

Leonard Bloom!

The other GIRLS SQUEAL in agreement. Natsu Price looks over, glowers.

NEIGHBORHOOD - DAY

SINGLE SHOT: A lawnmower ROARS along the grass. LOOK UP

to see who's pushing it, but it's not Leonard . It's one of

his teenage EMPLOYEES.

Leonard is back at the truck, which is painted to read, "Leo

Landscaping." He has workers on every lawn.

He signs an autograph for an ADMIRING CUB SCOUT.

BASKETBALL COURT - DAY

Leonard takes an impossible shot at the buzzer from the other

end of the court. Naturally, he makes it, winning the game.

As the crowd goes wild for Leonard, Natsu Price is the only

teammate who doesn't mob him.

TOWN - DAY

Leonard carries a dog out of a burning house.

SCIENCE FAIR - DAY

Leonard wins a blue ribbon for his invention, a machine

labelled "Perpetual Motion." He and the JUDGE pose for a

photograph. A FLASH.

Pissed, Natsu Price throws his crappy lima bean plants in the

trash.

HIGH SCHOOL STAGE - DAY

A dashingly handsome Leonard leads the CAST out for a curtain

call. He's the star of the show. Off to the side, we see Natsu

Price is the ass-end of a horse costume.

Leonard soaks in his applause, smiling and gracious.

GRADUATION STAGE - DAY

Leonard accepts his diploma. The PRINCIPAL hugs him tight.

LEONARD (V.O.)

I was the biggest thing Ashton had ever seen. Until one day, a stranger

arrived.

FARM - DAY

As two FARMERS shake their heads, REVERSE to a show a

massive hole punched through the side of a barn. It's roughly

the shape of man, but no human could be that large.

SHEEP PEN - DAY

Two fat ewes look up, a shadow falling across them. They

BLEAT in panic as

TWO OVERSIZED HANDS

reach in and scoop them up. Their protests continue as they're

carried away, one under each arm. We still haven't seen the

full stranger.

COURT HOUSE - DAY

A MOB of about 50 have gathered, many of them with shotguns.

Amid the crowd we see Natsu Price.

SHARECROPPER

He ate an entire cornfield!

LITTLE GIRL

He ate my dog!

HOT-BLOODED SHOTGUN TOTER

If you ain't gonna stop him

Mayor Makarov ,

we will!

MAYOR

I won't have mob violence in this

town. Now, has someone tried talking

to him?

SOME FARMER

You can't reason with 'im!

SHEPHARD

He's a monster!

Agreement from the crowd. And then...

A VOICE (O.S.)

I'll do it.

Everyone turns to see who said that. The crowd parts to reveal

none other than Leonardo Bloom. Natsu Price glowers.

LEONARD

I'll talk to him. See if I can get

him to move on.

MAYOR

Son, that creature could crush you without trying.

LEONARD

Trust me, he'll have to try.

HILL OUTSIDE ASHTON - DAY

Leonard climbs up the last bit of the steep hillside, reaching

the mouth of a cave. Outside, buzzards squabble over the

remains of the giant's feast: broken barrels, bones picked

clean.

In his most serious voice, Leonard calls out:

LEONARD

Hello!

There's no answer.

LEONARD

My name is Leonard Bloom! I want to

talk to you!

From deep in a cave, a thunderous voice:

VOICE (O.S.)

GO AWAY!

The giant's voice has such force, it blows Leonard's hair back.

LEONARD

I'm not going anywhere until you

show yourself.

A beat, then we hear a RUMBLE, like a train coming. Leonard

braces himself, fists ready for a fight, if that's what it's

going to take.

As the RUMBLE gets louder, the ground starts to shake. Even

Leonard starts to worry. Just how big is this guy?

LEONARD (V.O.)

Armed with the foreknowledge of my own death, I knew the giant couldn't kill me. All the same, I preferred to keep my bones unbroken.

Leonard picks up a stone, ready to play David to Goliath.

Then suddenly, the giant bursts forth. Hunched over, he slams

into a stunned Leonard, knocking him halfway down the hill.

TAURUS THE GIANT is bigger than any man you've ever seen. Not just tall, but massive. He's completely feral, with a beard

to his elbow and skin scratched and blistered. What remains

of his clothes are ragged and muddy. God knows what's living

in his matted hair.

Taurus leans over Leonard, blocking the sun. Leonard throws his

rock, but it just bounces off. The giant didn't even notice

it.

TAURUS

Why are you here?

Leonard ponders the best response, settling on...

LEONARD

So you can eat me. The town decided

to send a human sacrifice, and I

volunteered.

Taurus's eyes narrow, confused. Leonard stands up.

LEONARD

My arms are a little stringy, but

there's some good eating on my legs.

I mean, I'd be tempted to eat them

myself.

(beat)

So I guess, just, if you could get

it over with quick. Because I'm not

much for pain, really.

Leonard closes his eyes, hands at his side, ready to be eaten.

Taurus just stares at him, not sure what to do.

After a beat, Leonard opens his eyes a tiny bit, just to see

what the giant is doing. Relieved to see he's not licking

his chops -

LEONARD

Look, I can't go back. I'm a human

sacrifice. If I go back, everyone

will think I'm a coward. And I'd

rather be dinner than a coward.

Taurus sits down with a BOOM, dejected.

LEONARD

Here, start with my hand. It'll be

an appetizer.

Reaching up, Leonard shoves his hand into Taurus's mouth. But

the giant spits it back out.

TAURUS

I don't want to eat you. I don't

want to eat anybody. It's just I get

so hungry. I'm too big.

And that's the sad truth. Taurus is less a monster than a freak -

a giant man, but in the end, just a man.

Leonard takes a seat beside him.

LEONARD

Did you ever think maybe you're not

too big? Maybe this town's just too

small. I mean, look at it.

Circling behind them, we look down at Ashton - a tiny town

in a tiny valley.

LEONARD

Hardly two stories in the whole place.

Now I've heard in real cities, they've

got buildings so tall you can't even

see the tops of 'em.

TAURUS

Really?

LEONARD

Wouldn't lie to you. And they've got

all-you-can-eat buffets. You can eat

a lot, can't you?

TAURUS

I can.

LEONARD

So why are you wasting your time in

a small town? You're a big man. You

should be in the big city.

Taurus smiles, but then it fades. A certain sad suspicion -

TAURUS

You're just trying to get me to leave,

aren't you? That's why they sent you

here.

LEONARD

What's your name, Giant?

TAURUS

Taurus.

LEONARD

Mine's Leonard. And truthfully, I do want you to leave, Taurus. But I want to leave with you.

(closer)

You think this town is too small for you, well, it's too small for a man of my ambition. I can't see staying here a day longer.

TAURUS

You don't like it?

LEONARD

I love every square inch of it. But

I can feel the edges closing in on

me. A man's life can only grow to a certain size in a place like this.

(beat)

So what do you say? Join me?

Taurus thinks a moment. Then -

TAURUS

Okay.

LEONARD

Okay.

They shake on it.

LEONARD

Now first, we gotta get you ready

for the city.

RIVER - DAY

IN A SINGLE SHOT, Taurus cuts his hair with hedge clippers,

while Leonard cuts up a surplus army tent to make him a shirt.

MAIN STREET OF ASHTON - DAY

Spirits buoyed by the high school MARCHING BAND, all the

good CITIZENS of Ashton are gathered to see off Leonard and

Taurus.

There's a few tears amid the familiar faces.

MAYOR

(loudly, for the crowd)

Leonard Bloom, first son of Ashton,

it's with a heavy heart we see you

go. But take with you this Key to

the City, and know that any time you

want to come back, all our doors are

open to you.

Leonard ducks a bit so the Mayor Makarov can put the key around his neck. The crowd CHEERS. And with that, Leonard and Taurus start walking, waving as they go.

Only NATSU PRICE, smoking on the corner, isn't sad to see Leonard

go. He crushes his cigarette under his heel. He wishes he

could crush Leonard.

Many of the townfolk come onto the street to hug Leonard or

shake his hand.

LEONARD (V.O.)

That afternoon as I left Ashton,

everyone seemed to have advice.

VARIOUS TOWNFOLK

Find yourself a nice girl! Don't

trust anyone in Kentucky! Watch your pride, Leonard Bloom!

LEONARD (V.O.)

But there was one person whose counsel

I held above all others.

As the crowd parts, he finds himself face to face with

THE OLD WOMAN.

The ruckus slows and quiets, as if a strange spell has been

cast. She motions for Leonard to lean down, so she can whisper

something to him. Although we're VERY CLOSE, we can't hear

her voice.

LEONARD (V.O.)

She said that the biggest fish in

the river gets that way by never

being caught.

The advice only succeeds in confusing Leonard.

LEONARD

(to the Old Woman)

Okay. Thanks.

Leonard and Taurus keep walking. The Old Woman shuffles off, somehow knowing her advice will go unheeded.

TAURUS

What did she say?

LEONARD

Beats me.

ROAD - DAY

We TILT UP from the road to reveal Leonard and Taurus walking out of Ashton. Each wears a backpack with all his earthly

possessions.

LEONARD (V.O.)

There were two roads out of Ashton,

a new one which was paved, and an

older one that wasn't. People didn't

use the old road anymore, and it had

developed the reputation of being

haunted.

Leonard and Taurus come to a bend, where the paved road veers

left and an overgrown dirt road runs straight. The old road

is blocked with signs and warnings of danger.

LEONARD (V.O.)

Since I had no intention of ever

returning to Ashton, this seemed as good a time as any to find out what lay down that old road.

Taurus looks at the dirt road, wary.

TAURUS

You know anyone's who's taken it?

LEONARD

That poet, Hibiki Winslow did. He was going to Paris, France. He must have liked it, because no one ever heard from him again.

(beat)

Tell you what. You take the other

way and I'll cut through here. Meet

you on the far side.

A little paranoid...

TAURUS

You're not trying to run away?

Leonard puts off his bag

LEONARD

Just to be sure, you can take my

pack.

Taurus perks up, even though it means more for him to carry.

DIRT ROAD - DAY

The road is overgrown, but not altogether creepy. The sun is

still shining, and the birds still CHIRPING.

Spinning the Key to the City, Leonard WHISTLES, because it's

a day meant for whistling.

FURTHER ALONG - ROUGH PATH

The road has narrowed to a rough path. Spikes of sunlight

break through the thick canopy, catching particles in the

air. Still, Leonard WHISTLES.

Coming around a bend, his PITCH DROPS as he sees thick, thorny

vines growing across the path. He stops. For the first time,

he realizes the birds have stopped singing. The forest is

dead quiet.

He looks back the way he came. It's tempting to go back. It

would be easier to go back. But Leonard presses on.

He carefully steps through the thorns. His trouser legs catch

on the barbs. The fabric Teared up.

FURTHER ALONG

A scratched and sweaty Leonard waves off various STINGING

BUGS flying at him, finally whipping off his hat to swat at

them.

Just then a CAWING crow swoops down and grabs the hat right

out of his hands.

LEONARD

You stupid sonofa...

He stops his swearing, but grabs a rock and throws it. The

stone ricochets off a tree and into a BEE'S NEST. The swarm

roars out.

Leonard high-tails it, each step still precarious.

THE DARK FOREST - DAY [LATER]

Leonard is bruised, battered and bee-stung.

A half-broken sign lies in the road. Leonard picks it up.

Reads it:

WARNING!

JUMPING SPIDERS!

Sure enough, up ahead he sees the path is overgrown with

thick cobwebs, heavy from the rain.

LEONARD (V.O.)

There comes a point where a reasonable

man will swallow his pride and admit

he's made a terrible mistake. The

truth is, I was never a reasonable

man.

Leonard tosses the sign and forges ahead, into the spiderwebs.

LEONARD

And what I recalled of Sunday School

was that the more difficult something

became, the more rewarding it was in

the end.

CLEARING / THE ROAD - DAY

Leonard emerges from the forest, brushing the last cobwebs

off and shaking the spiders from his shirt. One is stuck in

his sleeve, and he has to dance to get it out. Even then, he

still keeps twitching, convinced another one is left behind.

At his feet, the gravel road has returned, smooth and dusty

and comforting.

Ahead lies a tiny one-street town - smaller even than Ashton -

with powerlines emerging from the woods to feed it. Dangling

from the line above he sees two dozen pairs of shoes, their

laces tied together.

He passes a sign that reads "Welcome To Spectre!"

THE TOWN OF SPECTRE - DAY

It's a main street with stores on each side: Cole's Pharmacy,

Talbot's Five and Dime, Al's Country Store. Everything is

old, but this isn't a ghost town. In fact, there's a group

of about 20 CITIZENS spilling out to see Leonard approach.

Most are smiling. There are even a few tears of joy.

What's more, all of these people are barefoot.

MAN'S VOICE

Friend!

A forty-year old man named Capricorn comes out of the seed store

to greet Leonard. Friendly but a little drunk, he's the closest

thing the town has to a mayor. He's carrying a clipboard.

CAPRICORN

Welcome to ya. What's your name?

LEONARD

Leonard Bloom.

Leonard checks the clipboard. Not finding the name, he flips

forward a few pages. Still looking...

CAPRICORN

Bloom like a flower?

LEONARD

Yes.

CAPRICORN

Oh. Here! Right here. Leonard Bloom. We weren't expecting you yet.

Still confused...

LEONARD

You were expecting me?

CAPRICORN

Not yet.

A helpful woman named Evergreen chimes in:

EVERGREEN

You must have taken a shortcut.

LEONARD

I did. It nearly killed me.

CAPRICORN

Mmm-hmm. Life'll do that to you. And

truthfully, the long way is easier,

but it's longer.

EVERGREEN

Much longer.

CAPRICORN

And you're here now, and that's what

matters.

Capricorn's daughter Aquarius (8) hides behind her father, peering

around to look at the handsome stranger.

LEONARD

What is this place?

CAPRICORN

The town of Spectre. Best kept secret

in Alabama. Says here you're from

Ashton, right? Last person we had

from Ashton was Hibiki Winslow.

LEONARD

The poet? What ever happened to him?

CAPRICORN

He's still here. Let me buy you a

drink. I'll tell you all about it.

Hell, I'll have him tell you.

LEONARD

No. I've gotta meet somebody. I'm

already running late.

He didn't mean it as a joke, but for some reason, everyone's

laughing.

CAPRICORN

Son, I already told you. You're early.

CAPRICORN HOUSE - DAY

Sitting at the kitchen table, Leonard takes a second slice of

apple pie. He and Capricorn are joined by HIBIKI WINSLOW (30),

who fancies himself a cultured artist, though he's never

left the state.

CAPRICORN

Now tell me if that isn't the best

pie you ever ate.

LEONARD

It truly is.

UNDER THE TABLE

Young Aquarius is stealthily untying the laces on Leonard's shoes.

HIBIKI WINSLOW

Everything here tastes better. Even

the water is sweet. Never gets too

hot, too cold, too humid. At night

the wind goes through the trees and

you'd swear there was a whole symphony

out there, playing just for you.

Suddenly, Aquarius YANKS OFF Leonard's shoes. She races for the

door.

LEONARD

Hey!

He chases after her.

TOWN / MAIN STREET - DAY

As she runs, Young Aquarius ties Leonard's laces together. Reaching the edge of town, she tosses the shoes up and around the power line - a perfect throw. There's no way he's ever

getting them down.

The gathered citizens of Spectre CHEER for Leonard , who is

confused and overwhelmed. The women hug him. Men shake his

hand.

Still focused on his shoes...

LEONARD

Wait! I need those!

HIBIKI WINSLOW

There is no softer ground than town.

EVERGREEN

That rhymes!

CAPRICORN

He is our poet laureate.

The townsfolk continue to congratulate Leonard...

LEONARD (V.O.)

Sometimes in a dream, you'll visit

places that seem instantly familiar,

filled with friends you've never

met.

UNDER A TREE - DUSK

Leonard sits with Hibiki Winslow. The fireflies are out.

Thousands of them.

LEONARD (V.O.)

A man might travel his entire life

and never find a place so inviting.

My journey had scarcely begun, and I had arrived.

Hibiki hands him his notebook.

HIBIKI WINSLOW

I've been working on this poem for 12 years.

LEONARD

Really.

HIBIKI WINSLOW

There's a lot of expectation. I don't want to disappoint my fans.

LEONARD

May I...?

Hibiki hesitates for a moment,then gives his notebook to Leo.

Leo reads the poem.

(A beat.)

Then he looks up at Hibiki.

LEONARD

It's only three lines long.

An awkward silence between them and then Hibiki grabs his notebook back.

HIBIKI WINSLOW

This is why you don't show work in progress.

LEONARD

Hibiki, do you ever regret not making it to Paris?

HIBIKI WINSLOW

I can't imagine any place better

than here.

LEONARD

You're a poet. You oughta be able

to. And maybe if you'd seen more,

you could.

Hibiki doesn't answer. Just goes back to his notebook.

BY THE RIVER - NIGHT

By the light of the full moon, Leonard soaks his feet in the

water, trying to make sense of it all. The Key to the City

dangles around his neck.

He stares at himself in the reflection. He smiles.

It's then that a WOMAN emerges at the far side of the river.

No telling where she came from - she must have been swimming

underwater. We never see her face.

She stands in the river with her bare back to Leonard,

squeezing the water out of her pale blue hair, oblivious to his

presence. Leonard is breathless. It's the first woman he's

seen in her natural state, and he doesn't dare move lest he

frighten her away.

Then he sees the snake.

It's a cottonmouth, has to be. It leaves a break in the water,

its small reptilian head aiming for her flesh.

There's no decision to be made. On pure instinct, Leonard

dives in. He swims as hard as he can,

GRABBING THE SNAKE

just as it's about to strike.

The woman dives back underwater, understandably terrified

that a man is coming at her.

Leonard

No, it's okay! I got it. I got the

snake.

As the splashing subsides, Leonard looks at what he holds in

his hands. Which isn't a snake at all, but rather a common

stick. And a non-threatening one at that.

While Leonard ponders his mistake, he looks around to discover

that the Girl in the River is gone. He never even saw her

face.

LEONARD

Wait! I'm sorry. Hello?!

Leonard keeps expecting her to surface, somewhere, but she

never does. He stands alone in the river, wondering what

tricks his eyes are playing on him.

BY THE RIVER - NIGHT - CONTINUOUS

A GIRL'S VOICE (O.S.)

There's leeches in there!

Leonard looks to the bank, where young Aquarius Hill is watching

him.

LEONARD

Did you see that woman?

Little AQUARIUS

What did she look like?

LEONARD

Well, she... uh...

Was she nekkid?

Embarrassed to admit it...

LEONARD

Yeah.

AQUARIUS

(matter-of-fact)

It's not a woman, it's a fish. No

one ever catches her.

Given the day he's had so far, Leonard isn't inclined to follow

up on the issue. He starts to wade back to the bank.

AQUARIUS

Fish looks diff'rent to diff'rent

people. My daddy said it looked like

the coon dog he had when he was kid, back from the dead.

Leonard climbs up onto the shore, completely drenched. He

pulls up his pant legs to reveal three shiny leeches clinging

to his skin.

LEONARD

Shoot.

He starts to work pulling them off.

PATH BACK TO TOWN - NIGHT

Leonard and little Aquarius walk back.

AQUARIUS

How old are you?

LEONARD

Eighteen.

AQUARIUS

I'm eight. That means when I'm

eighteen, you'll be 28. And when I'm

28, you'll only be 38.

LEONARD

(a little wary)

You're pretty good at arithmetic.

AQUARIUS

And when I'm 38, you'll be 48. And

that's not much difference at all.

Eager to get off this subject...

LEONARD

Sure is a lot now, though, huh?

MAIN STREET - NIGHT

As Leonard and Aquarius approach Main Street, they find "downtown" has been transformed. Lanterns and streamers hang on cables

across the street, and a small stage has been built at one

end to hold FIDDLERS.

The whole town is there in celebration of its newest citizen,

Leonard Bloom. Before he can protest, two WOMEN have grabbed

him by the arms, pulling him in to dance with them.

The resulting dance number seems both choreographed and

complete chaos. From FARMER to BAKER'S WIFE, everyone wants

to dance with Leonard, who finds himself tossed around like a

stick caught in a whirlpool. Still, he's having a blast.

Aquarius grabs both his hands, and they spin wildly.

Capricorn plucks his LAUGHING daughter away to dance with her.

Then Evergreen cuts in to dance with Leonard. It's hard to hear

over the MUSIC.

EVERGREEN

Aquarius thinks you're quite a catch.

We all do.

LEONARD

(not hearing)

What?

EVERGREEN

I said you're quite a catch!

Leonard stops dancing. A beat, then he heads for the edge of

the crowd. Capricorn is there, with Aquarius on his shoulders.

LEONARD

I have to leave. Tonight.

CAPRICORN

Why?

LEONARD

This town is everything a man could

ask for. And if I were to end up

here, I'd consider myself lucky. But

the fact is, I'm not ready to end up

anywhere.

CAPRICORN

No one's ever left.

AQUARIUS

How are you gonna make it without

your shoes?

LEONARD

I suspect it will hurt a lot.

And with that, Leonard walks down Main Street. The townspeople

stop dancing, disbelieving, some shaking their heads.

Poor Leonard Bloom's gone crazy.

CAPRICORN

(calling after him)

You won't find a better place!

LEONARD

I don't expect to.

Aquarius runs to him. She'd tackle him if she could.

AQUARIUS

Promise me you'll come back.

LEONARD

I promise. Someday. When I'm really supposed to.

It's not good enough, but it will have to do. Leonard keeps

walking.

THE DARK FOREST - NIGHT

Leonard negotiates the thorns in his bare feet.

It's horrible. Almost unendurable.

And then it gets worse.

The trees ahead are moving. At first, it just seems to be

the wind blowing the branches, but as we hear the wood

CRACKING and GROANING, there's no mistaking it: they're trying

to block him.

Snake-like WHITE ROOTS shoot out of the ground, grabbing for

his ankles. He leaps up, kicking off one tree trunk to grab

another one's branches. He swings off, lands and rolls. Now

all the trees are moving to block him, their dark shapes

towering over him in the flashes of LIGHTNING.

LEONARD (V.O.)

As difficult as it was to reach

Spectre, I was fated to get there

eventually. After all, no man can

avoid reaching the end of his life.

As he ducks under branches, the chain holding the Key to the

City gets caught. He's almost strangled, but the chain finally

breaks. The silver key disappears into the mud.

Scrambling forward, he looks for a way out. But the trees

have encircled him, their spiky crowns bending down to crush

him.

He SCREAMS up at the night, until his breath is gone.

LEONARD

And then I realized, this wasn't the

end of my life.

With a sudden calm...

LEONARD

(aloud)

This isn't how I die.

Another lightning FLASH, and suddenly the trees are back

where they've always been. Leonard is lying shoeless and torn in a muddy puddle, staring up at the rain. And LAUGHING.

THE ROAD - DAY

His bare foot steps onto asphalt.

A DEEP VOICE

Friend!

Leonard turns to see

TAURUS

to his right, coming down the larger, paved road.

TAURUS

What happened to your shoes?

Leonard looks down at his muddy, bloody feet.

LEONARD

They got ahead of me.

With that, the men start walking down the larger road.

CROSSFADE TO DINING ROOM - NIGHT

Leonard and Leonel sit at opposite ends of the table, with Lucyra

and Asuka in the middle. Although Leonard has a small

plate of food in front of him, he hasn't touched it. He's

exhausted from the trip downstairs, but determined to maintain

the family dinner ritual.

The other three eat awkwardly, each CLINK and SCRAPE of a

knife or fork resonating. Leonel finally breaks the silence.

LEONEL

I don't know if you've seen it, but

Asuka has some photos in the

most recent Newsweek.

LUCYRA

Really! That's wonderful.

ASUKA

I spent a week in Morocco for the

story. It was incredible.

LUCYRA

We'll have to pick up a copy.

A beat. As Leonel scoops out another serving of potatoes, Leonard suddenly speaks:

LEONARD

I don't know if you're aware of this,

Asuka, but African parrots, in

their native home of the Congo -

they speak only French.

All three stop to listen.

LEONEL

(amused)

Really.

LEONARD

You're lucky to get four words out

of them in English. But if you were

to walk through the jungle, you'd

hear them speaking the most elaborate

French. Those parrots talk about

everything: politics, movies, fashion -

everything but religion.

Taking the bait...

LEONEL

Why not religion, Dad?

LEONARD

It's rude to talk about religion.

You never know who you're going to

offend.

A beat.

LEONEL

Asuka actually went to the Congo

last year.

LEONARD

Oh, so you know.

GROCERY STORE - NIGHT

Leonel shakes a shopping cart free from the pile-up while his

mother checks her list.

AT THE PRODUCE SECTION

Lucyra starts to bag string beans.

LEONEL

Mom, would you say you understand

Dad?

LUCYRA

Of course.

LEONEL

What I mean is, do you really know

what's going on in his head?

LUCYRA

Yes.

LEONEL

How is that possible? I mean, you

try to ask him a question and suddenly

it's another one of his stories.

(decidedly)

You can't honestly say you know him.

LUCYRA

Yes, Leonel, I do. And don't presume things you don't know.

She's more amused than annoyed, but Leonel is entering dangerous

territory.

LUCYRA

Would you say you understand

Asuka?

LEONEL

Yes. But that's a different...

LUCYRA

No it's not. It's exactly the same.

Your father and I met, we dated, and

we married - we chose each other -

because we understood each other on

some fundamental level. Just the

same as you two.

She moves on to the carrots.

LUCYRA

Asuka and I have a lot in common.

LUCYRA

Yes, you both think

Leonel Luke Bloom is

a very smart man.

(beat)

The problem is, you only see me as your mother,

and not as someone's

wife. And I've been his wife longer

than I've been your mother. You can't

discount that.

LEONEL

True. But I've known him my whole

life, and I don't feel like I know

him at all. Or ever will.

With a look, Lucyra acknowledges the stakes.

LUCYRA

I know it's not easy. Just remember,

he didn't choose to be your father

and you didn't choose to be his son.

You just ended up together. You could

pick numbers out of a dark bag and

it'd be just the same. If you ask

me, it's a wonder parents and children

can stand each other at all.

LEONEL

But I understand you, Mom. I always

have.

LUCYRA

Well, clearly you don't. But I'm not

the mystery you're trying to solve

right now.

AT THE CHECKOUT - NIGHT

Reaching the CASHIER, Lucyra hands over her coupons. Leonel is

approaching with a Newsweek magazine.

Two check-stands over, an ATTRACTIVE BLONDE WOMAN in her 50's is getting her change. Though she's Lucyra's generation, she

carries herself like a much younger woman, with blue jeans

and sneakers.

She accidentally makes eye contact with Leonel as he passes. The woman, who tracks Leonel as he reaches Lucyra.

It's hard to read her reaction: does she recognize him, or

just find him attractive?

Leonel notices the gaze. The woman turns away.

Leonel racks his brain - does he know this woman?

LUCYRA

Before I forget, your father has

papers in the basement I'd like you

to go through. I wouldn't know what's

important.

LEONEL

(distracted)

Mom, do you know who that is? Pale blue hair.

Lucyra looks. After a beat, the Pale blue haired Woman turns again, semi-casually. Noticing that both Leonel and Lucyra are looking, she smiles a little before taking her cart to leave.

LUCYRA

(no idea)

Was she one of your teachers?

LEONEL

No. But it's weird. She seemed to

recognize me.

LUCYRA

(to the cashier)

Do you know who that is?

The Cashier turns to look. He can only get a profile as the

woman leaves.

CASHIER

Never seen her before. Pretty, though.

GUEST BEDROOM - NIGHT

A portable fan quietly WHIRRS in the corner. Turned low, the

RADIO on the nightstand is playing a call-in AM sports show,

just a wash of background chatter. Leonard lies asleep on his

back.

At the window, Asuka quietly lowers the shade. She reaches

over Leonard to switch off the radio. He stirs from the silence -

he wasn't fully asleep - and sees Asuka stretched over

him.

LEONARD

(playfully lecherous)

Hello.

She smiles.

ASUKA

Hi. How are you feeling?

LEONARD

I was dreaming.

ASUKA

What were you dreaming about?

He tries to recollect, but it's already gone. Asuka

motions, is it okay for her to sit on the bed? He nods.

LEONARD

I don't usually remember unless

they're especially portentous. You

know what that word means, portentous?

She shakes her head.

LEONARD

Means when you dream about something

that's going to happen.

(beat, gathering)

Like one night, I had a dream where

this crow came and told me, "Your

Aunt is going to die." I was so scared

I woke up my parents. They told me

it was just a dream, to go back to

bed. But the next morning, my Aunt Karen was dead.

ASUKA

That's terrible.

LEONARD

Terrible for her, but think about

me, young boy with that kind of power.

Wasn't three weeks later that the

crow came back to me in a dream and

said, "Your Grampa is going to die."

Well, I ran right back to my parents.

My father said, no, Gramps is fine,

but I could see there was trepidation.

And true enough, that next morning

my Grampa was dead.

He sits up a bit in bed, his strength returning.

LEONARD

For the next couple weeks, I didn't

have another dream. Until one night

the crow came back and said, "Your

Daddy is going to die."

(beat)

Well, I didn't know what to do. But

finally I told my father. And he

said not to worry, but I could tell

he was rattled. That next day, he

wasn't himself, always looking around,

waiting for something to drop on his

head. Because the crow didn't tell

how it was going to happen, just

those words: your Daddy is going to

die. Well, he went into town early

and was gone for a long time. And

when he finally came back, he looked

terrible, like he was waiting for

the axe to fall all day. He said to

my mother, "Good God. I just had the

worst day of my life."

(beat)

"You think you've had a bad day,"

she said. "This morning the milkman

dropped dead on the porch!"

Asuka

smiles, a half-laugh, which gets him smiling too.

A long beat. Then, deadpan...

LEONARD

Because see, my mother was banging

the milkman.

ASUKA

No, I understand.

LEONARD

He was slipping her a little extra

cream.

She nods, a bit more of a laugh.

LEONARD

He was filling her basket. He was

making deliveries around back.

As Leonard continues, she can't help but laugh harder,

especially as the metaphors get more vulgar.

LEONARD

He was buttering her rolls. Pumping

her churn. Splashing milk in her

box.

ASUKA

Stop.

LEONARD

They were squeezing the cheese.

Clanking the bottles. Licking the

popsicle.

She's starting to cry from laughing.

LEONARD

Cracking the eggs and making an

omelet.

With that, he stops. She regains her composure.

LEONARD

Spooning the sherbet.

ASUKA

(interrupting)

Can I take your picture?

LEONARD

You don't need a picture. Just look

up handsome in the dictionary.

ASUKA

Please?

He rolls his eyes, why not.

Asuka leaves, heading down the hall to get her camera.

We STAY WITH Leonard in bed.

ASUKA

I have photos from the wedding to

show you. There's a great one of you

and my father. I had an extra print

made.

Leonard grimaces, a flash of pain. Around others, he's hiding

how much it hurts, but alone we can see how bad it is.

He controls his breathing, trying to push through it.

ASUKA

I want to see pictures of your

wedding. I've never seen any.

She returns with her camera. Leonard smiles, doing a good job

masking the pain.

LEONARD

That's because we didn't have a

wedding. Your mother-in-law was never supposed to marry me.

She was engaged

to somebody else.

ASUKA

(loading film)

I never knew.

LEONARD

Leonel never told you that?

(she shakes her head)

Probably just as well. He would have told it all wrong anyway. All the facts and none of the flavor.

ASUKA

Oh, so this is a tall tale?

LEONARD

Well, it's not a short one.

A devilish smile. Pushing past Leonard, we settle on the

whirling fan.

SPINNING PINWHEEL

held by a LITTLE BOY. He's slumped over his FATHER's shoulder,

being carried towards a big-top tent. We are...

To be continued